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Posted: 11 years ago

BEAUTIFUL PAYEL.I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED D CHAPPY SO MUCH.WHO SAID WE LOST INTEREST IN UR SS. ITZ ONE OF MY FAV FF IN THIS FORUM. PLZ DONT GET DISAPPOINTED. TRY TO CONTINUE SOON. DANXS FOR PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear, loved it to the core
But why uday want manyata hate him...?
i will be eagerly waiting to read next part
please do try to update soon
& thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Manveer scene was nice.it had anger n passion.kiss was passionate.FB scene was so romantic.hewasso possessive that he didnt even want rain drops 2 touch her.uday wants manyata 2 hate her.that upsets me.now a days u r putting pics which is really good.but missed manyata's pic.1st time i'm hearing tum hi ho instrumental music.here tum hi tune as bgm was a beautiful feeling
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, Its a wondeful chapter..! Loved it too much..! You are well written Manyata's feelings...! Past as well as curret part is so amazing..! Thank you for the PM. Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey my lovely sis...how are you...😊 i am sooo happy that you updated...a big thanks to u. 🤗
well about the update, seriously i am with lack of words, i dont know how to define what my heart is feeling ri8 now. 😳 the chapter was full of different emotions, and you describe each pitch perfectly. 👏 👏 👏 it was simply the best and marvelous, and the long one also.
the start was a bit harsh...i mean with how much rage manyata insulted that girl... i was just dumbstruct, now i can feel how much manyata is hurted, 😭 and then she says all about udayan, his crush on her,,,,,man she was totally out of sences...but everything is fair in love. 😆 but thyen udayan drag her out and drop her to her room 😳 awww it was sooo romantic, and he kissed her also. 😆 just loved that scene.

and and and the flashbacks scene were just superb, they were such a lovey dovey couple...i loved the thing when veer singh told moniya that he dont want even the rain drops to touch her...👏 how could you write that much great and the song you added its my heavenly favourite..." thousand years" it enhance the chapter more.

soo manyata is having dreams about their previous life...hmmm its great. so she senced that he kissed her😆 i am soo glad she send apologizing letters to alll. in the end she is a very king hearted yuvrani...😊

but what udayan is thinking is not right...did moniya gave her life in saving uday veer singh...??? soo mch suspence u left us in...but i will defenitely wait for the next chap...i thing it will be in december or after it...but i will eagerly be waiting...😊

again thank you sooo much for giving a tremendous and amazing part, you writing always kills me 😆 i enjoyed and loved it to the core...plz take care of yours and thanks for the p.m...love you. 🤗 be back soon.
Edited by mimi.maik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: allseasonrain

Awesome update di... thank you its the best puja gift for me... happy puja...


awwwn happy Durgapuja to you too darling 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Hi di...
Hw ws u??
Nice update di...
Manyata n uday truly love eachother

Yes that they do 😳
manveer first kiss so sweet

Thankz dear 😳
fb ws superb di monya n veer firstkiss hmm n manyat all see in dream bt didnt undstand ...

Yaap she did not understand that her dream is not just a mere dream...
Manyata felt bad fr her behaviour toword rani n she writte letter three such a nice to see manyata undestan her mistake so heart touch...
Bt wy uday want manyata hate him...

That will be revealed later, why Uday wants Manyata to hate him..
Awesum update love it
thanks fr pm n update soon 🥳


Thank you but my next update will be late as I am going get busy..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashpat

thx u so much for updating. It was so touching to see that Manyata felt bad and wrote three heartfelt letters. that was really nice touch. And maanveer scenes in flashback and also present one were awesome.

Thank you 😊

i hope u updatelibrary princess too this week. plzzz and thanks for pm.

Sorry dear my updates will be late for both my FFs as I am going get busy..that's why I updated both of my stories back to back 😊 hope u understand


Thankz for ur comment 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

love it

and i love tum hi ho instrumental version
first kiss awesoem


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh

hey jiji
how are you?


Fine 😊
thanks a lot for this update

You are welcome😊
and the music is awesome

You should thank Gargi for this, I just thought that the music will suit perfectly she gave me the link 😊
goes with the story perfectly

Thankz again 😊
and jiji the update bought tears to my eyes
tears of sorrow
firstly i did not hate when she insulted
rani as her ego was hurt

Exactly, she is very much hurt
and all those memory of being deceived
and cheated by udayan emerged in her mind

But Udayan did not cheat her, he just wanted to out hi sresearch paper and that's why he lied to Devendra (or did the drama of lying), but he never cheated Manyata
she is actually broken but does not want
to prove so to the world

Yaap correct 😊
and omg he kissed her awn

Thank you 😊
that was truly adorable
and the flashback was so cute
i truly loved it
that part was super romantic and cute

Thankz again 😊
lastly her letter was really good
it is good to see her this way
but this mean they are going to get separated
why is that so?
Why can't they stay together ?

To be together forever they have to get seperated now, that'll bring them closer 😳
thanks for the pm
hugss

You are welcome for this awesome comment, hug you back 🤗

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