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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: andy.a
payal, there is nothing wrong with your story, when you first started the story our forum had so many active members, but now, no body spends much time here, that may be a reason. but dont give up ever, all writers here have the same problem including me,readers are all disappearing away

I understand the reason...and I don't expect a 65 likes like my first chapter... but now a day this story is receiving lesser responses with every proceeding chapters..

Frankly speaking I don't put that much energy and time on Library Princess like I do on Abinashwar...the responses there increasing in Library Princess whereas responses in Abinashwar is decreasing day by day 😭 and that's why i am very sad about updating this FF...i don't get the encouragement to write every week...

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Yipeee first to comment!!! 🥳
The update was awesome.
Manyata is still angry with dev.
The way dev cares for his sister is sweet.
Will manyata forgive him??
Manyata crying and remembering udayan was nice.
The last part was funny and nice.
Do continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

awesome update manyatha angry at dev and he thinks udayan is dead but does not know know he can't kill him loved the conversation between variba and udayan loved the update thanks for the pm

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

hey payle jiji,
now i am truly speechless i truly have no words to express my happiness so uday does recall everything and the way you are showing the past is just awesome i liked the way manyata behaved with dev , he should be treated by such harshness and again here this menka i mean for onces can she shut her mouth , and here poor manyata she is still so madly , deeply , insanely in love with her i feel so bad for her , she is the one getting trapped in all this games and again at the part i wonder what she meant though i got gist but still the puzzle remain what happened that caused so much of disaster and what did uday say on his deadbed and why did he die? if he remembers everything than why don't he love manyata and did that media thing and again what will happen if manyata remember if i get a mini heart attack wondering what the past holds you are to be blamed jiji😆 so it is better if you pm me all the past stories hahaha sorry bad joke will be waiting patiently for each of your update
huggs
anni

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

hi payal

great update👏👏👏loved it so much

i am glad manyta was angry with her brother, i havent ofrgiven dev for trying to kill uday😡

his idea of looking after his family is not normal

but i must say he loves his sister madly😊

maneka! i dont like her, she is very rude

the conversation between uday and vairabhi, was very interesting😃

there is still so much mystery in there

i really am looking forward to read it.

you know wht draws me to this story? it is that ancient touch that is so powerful one surely gets addicted to the story

when will manyta know about her past?

akash!! a good character after all.

i am so glad he got the photo of dev trying to kill uday

wonder what manyta would feel when she sees that piece of news in the paper

looking forward for the next update

this chapter was really awsome

thanks for the pm😳

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snowdream

@snowdream

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

hi,

first of all sorry payal couldn't comment or read last update... Well read both updates together and it was awesome... Manyata is angry on dev for his behavior to her but then what will she be, on realizing that dev tried to kill Udayan... Awww don't know why iam hating dev ..i feel his deeds are not that good the way he shows off ... well a lot to disclose now perhaps..

and akash well is he good ya bad...i doubt😕

Now waiting for the moment manyata realises that hse is none but the same women who she considers a prostitute😆

Thanks for the update continue soon😃

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

i liked dev in this part.bt manyata cant 4giv him easily.lets c.i liked d reincarnation part

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Hey payel...how's u..? Well today u made my day heavenly good by your update...it was simply outstanding and thrilling... The way u wrote it OMG it was perfecttt...I m soo happy that uday is yuvraj of jaigarh and above all he is now safe...Awww my manyata is crying...:'( I understand her condition, she is going through a very tough thing... I wish the old story begins again ...and that akash took pics of dev while throwing uday...now what will happen when media leak it...poor dev now he hav to pay for his deeds...and one more thing u don't hav to update fast if u r busy then take ur time and update when u will be free...I will defenitely wait for it patiently... Thanks for the pm...love u.

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

superb update...loved manyata outburst on dev...past talks confused me...pls reveal them soon...akash saved uday...they are friends...and thanks for pm...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Superb update Payel Di👏.

Udayan IS the Yuvraaj of Jaigarh! I was right . Loved the scene in the forest. Although it answered a lot of questions , it raised even more😕. I'm dying to read more! Devendra - what can I say about him 🤔? Wait , I know ... "Enjoy yourself now Buddy , because very soon ; trouble will be back to bite u in the A*S😆!" I liked Akash's entry , In fact I like this character that u created😊. He seems like a genuine and sincere guy. And hey , he saved Udayan ... so he can't be all that bad right? Eeepppss - he filmed what Devendra did ... AWESOME! Now Manyata will know the truth about her brother. Loved the update ,

PLEASE cont soon😊.

Thanx 4 the PM.

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