SS: Manveer (the journey of true love)

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Friends Dekha ek khawab aur manveer kabhi hamare dil se nhi nikal sakte that's why mene ye SS DEK ke end se agey likha hai.
Sab misunderstandings solve hone ke baad manyata aur uday ka relation aur bhi strong ho jata hai aur wo ek doosrey ke aur bhi nazdeek aa jate hain.
Manyata Uday ka din raat khayal rakhti hai aur Uday pehle ki tarah theek ho jata hai.
Ab Uday aur Manyata ki zindagi me sab kuch badal jata hai Uday ki her subah Manyata se shuru hoti hai aur her raat Manyata ko good night bol ker khatam hoti hai ab tu wo dono apne ap ko is duniyaa ke sab se lucky
insaan samajhte hain kyun ke ek month baad Manyata aur Uday ki shadi ki date fix ho jati hai.
ek din sab ghar wale dinning table per bethe hote hain ke dr. sahab ate hain aur sab ko good news dete hain ke Daadi Sahab jald hi theek ho jaen gi un me bhut improvement aa rhi hai. ye sun ker sab khush ho jate hain.
Uday: Brij uncle is ka matlab hamari shadi ke liye daadi sahab ko bhi itni hi jaldi hai jitni ke hamen...
Manyata: Dr. uncle ye tu bhut achi news hai
sab lunch ker ke dinning table area se chale jate hain aur wahan sirf manveer bethe hote hain.
Komal: Manyata beta ap jaldi se lunch ker ke hamare room me ana, humen apko kuch dikhana hai.
Manyata: ji maa
then Komal wahan se jati hai.
Uday: princess kia baat hai tum tu hamare sath time spend krne ka bahana dhoondh rhi ho..
Manyata: Yuvraaj Uadayveer Singh aisi koi baat nhi hai..
Uday: ohhh really princess...Princess apne hone wale Maharaj ko itna attitude de rhi ho.
dekh lo princess kehi tumhen is ke badle me...
Manyata: badle me kya Udayveer! (Manyata looks worried on Uday's incomplete sentence)
Uday: princess tum pareshan kyun ho rhi ho hum apni jaan ke face per tension ko bilkul bardasht nhi ker sakte.
Manyata smiles...
Manyata: Udayveer mera dinner ho gia me ab maa ke room me ja rhi hoon.
Uady: princess aj dinner kuch zyada hi meetha ho gia hai, shaadi ke baad agar tum hamen roz aise hi meetha dinner do gi tu By God hamen tu
diabetes ho jae ga (han nhi tu...)
Manyata: Uadayveer! tu bhi na ek number ka halkat veda hai!
Uday: okkk Manyata that's like my princess but ab chalo komal anti ne bulaya hai...
is ke baad dono wahan se chale jate hain...
After this Manyata jab komal ke room se wapis ati hai tu balcony me uday ko phone per baatein karta dekhti hai.
Manyata: Uday kis ki call thi.
Uday princess hamara childhood friend hai uski kal engagement hai tu us ne hamen aur hamari hone wali Maharani ko invite kia hai.
Manyata: ye tu achi baat hai. Uday hum jaen ge na!
Uday: Ofcourse princess hum apni rajkumari ke sath jaen ge aur wese bhi hum ne un se tips bhi tu leni hain ke shadi ke baad biwi per kese control
kia jata hai.
Manyata: Uadyveer tu bhi agar itna tang hai mujh se tu mujh se shadi hi na ker!
suddenly Vijaybhai enters in the balcony...
Vijaybhai: kya hua hamare nadaan parindon ko kyun ladai ker rhe ho tum dono aur uday bana hamare pyare jeeja kam saala sahab ap hamare bhai
ko kyun tang ker rhe ho.
Uday: kya karen VB jab tak hum Manyata ko tang na ker len din hi nhi guzarta...Ok princess ab ghussa na karo aur party ke liye ready ho jao
hum shaam ko tumhen pick ker len ge...
Uday jane lagta hai lekin wo kuch steps chal ker wapis aa jata hai aur Manyata ko kehta hai wo kia hai miss haan nhi tu actually hum apni kuch important
cheez bhool gaye the.
Manyata: Uday tum apni aisi konsi imp cheez bhool gaye ho,(Manyata looks innocently towards uday)
Uday coming towards Manyata and says,
Uday: ohhh really princess tumhen nhi pata hum apni konsi cheez bhool rhen hain
Uday manyata ke nazdeek ata hai Manyata Uday ki ankhon me dekhti hai aur dono ek doosrey me kho jate hain jese ye dono hamesha ek dosrey me
hi gum rehna chahte hon.(seriously they made for each other)
then Uday kissed at Manyata 's forhead and says Manyata hum jitna tum se pyar krte hain us se zyada tumhari izzat krte hain.
Manyata: Uday tujhe pata hai me apne apko is duniya ki sab se khush qismat larki samajhti hoon lekin itna hi zyada darti bhi hoon ke me kehi tujhe
kho na doon.
Uday: ohhh princess hum se itna zyada pyar krti ho?
Manyata: haan Yuvraj Udayveer Singh Yuvraani Manyata Kumari ap ke bina jeene ka soch bhi nhi sakti itna zyada hum ap se pyar krte hain then again
Uday kissed at Manyata 's cheek and says I LOVE YOU TOO princess...You are my life...My destiny...My world...My everything...
After this Uday leave the RajMahal and goes to his office...
and Manyata also goes to her room.


Guyz! agar apko ye SS pasand aya tu then me is ka next part post karoon gi ...thanx
with love princessmomo

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya plz post its next part loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome sis!! loved it:)you r a great writer...pls pls write d next part soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Di its fantastic:)pls do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear its really awesome. heart touching dialogues. really romantic loved it. please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a wonderful update
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi hun... one request... plzz use indentations after every few lines so it becomes easier to read by leaving appropriate spacing between dialogues and using a different font,... it looks very cramped/ small right now... makes it hard to focus when it comes to reading and enjoying the dialogues...


Thanks,😊
😊Mahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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komal my sis good start👏awesome awesome awesome great update my sis 👍🏼do continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely start
do cont soon and Pm me if
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