~Yuvraj Udayveer learns a lesson~SS note pg 9

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muskan99

@muskan99

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Posted: 13 years ago

Well this is an idea i came up with and thought to write a short story about it

WELL THIS IS A STORY ABOUT UDAY REALISIING THAT JAY WAS WRONG AND MANYATA WAS RITE AND SHE ACTUALLY LOVES HIM SO HE GOES TO SAY SORRY TO M BUT SHE DECIDES TO TEACH. HIM A LESSON

READ SOON TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS !!!!

P.S. SORRY WILL UPDATE IN ENGLISH CUZ MY HINDI ISN'T GOOD

Muskan😊

CHAPTER 1 TEASER PG 1

Chapter 1 pg 1

Chapter 2 pg 3

Chapter 3 pg 5

CHAPTER/4 PG 7

Edited by muskan99 - 12 years ago

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muskan99

@muskan99

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Posted: 13 years ago

Teaser

Manyata manyata cums screaming UV and searchs for M but can't find her and tries and tries he gives up and is going to check somewhere else rite then comes in manyata in a bride outfit with sindor and manglesultra

UV is really shocked

Will update soon

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

super interesting who did manyata marry please update soon

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hamra

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskan99
Teaser

Manyata manyata cums screaming UV and searchs for M but can't find her and tries and tries he gives up and is going to check somewhere else rite then comes in manyata in a bride outfit with sindor and manglesultra
UV is really shocked

Will update soon

gr8 work dear cont soon looking forward to this short story which seems intresting :)

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is really, very interesting! Plzzz do continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update!!:D

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muskan99

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 1

UV is so shocked and can't believe what he is seeing

Uv: mmmanyata whattt is ttthis

M: what?

UV: this u got married to who (totallyed shocked)

M : this (showing her sindor and manglesurta)

Uv: yes that

M: i got married cuz u didn't ant marryy me instead marry J so thought that if u moved on so i should should to right. And winked at him

Uv: i don't care about this tell me who u F***IN marry

Suddenly another voice came and said dont u dare alk to my wife like that u get it

Uday was left sooo socked t was Jagat Singh Rathore

UV: U MARRIED MANYATA (and got his collar ) how could u

M: UDAY !!!!!! DONT TOUCH MY HUSBAND

J: BABY. CLAM DOWN AND GO GET READY FOR OUR NITE

And winked at her

UDAY was so jealous

M: baby cum to our room and i'll be ready

And left after she left

J: so. How does it 2 feel your ex with me in bed huh???

UV : don't u dare

J: i will now gtg have y wife waiting

and winked and jagat left

Uday was left shocked

Precap: the plan is reveled

P.S u might want to kill me rite now but the next part will help u to stop

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

lol interesting and funny... Manyata in a fake marriage with Jagat... OMG can't even imagine such a horrible scenario... but nice attempt at writing.

Good work...but plzz reread it once to have minimum spelling mistakes.

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muskan99

@muskan99

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi0809
lol interesting and funny... Manyata in a fake marriage with Jagat... OMG can't even imagine such a horrible scenario... but nice attempt at writing.

Good work...but plzz reread it once to have minimum spelling mistakes.

I was in a hurry so couldn't check mistakes

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

I love Manyata's plan!! Loved the start so plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

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mahnoor2468

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Posted: 13 years ago

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muskan i loved it yaar,ufff i loved it to bits ,expecting to see A LOT of jealoused uday and intense scenes ...yaaay :) please update ASAP and pm me please :)😃 and a BIG 🤗 from me

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