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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swini01

wow vamp awesome idea:)


thanks but yaar plot tho tho
Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
hey everybody this goes my plot !actually i pm'd it to vampy and she liked it 😳 thank you once again vampy i truly love you but i thought it to share it with all of you so if u liked it then vampy would get more encouraged and would write about my plate because im urging to see it in a story form

ok vampy :) here goes my plot ,i have been thinking about it from ages :) its the time when uday decides to leave with jai and (actually i was thinking if DEK hadnt ended ,it would have proceede😉d like this ) manyata is very heart broken and she tells unnati to not say anything to uday about the truth and decides to move to devgadh so she can go away from uday
then a leap takes place of one year and manyata is in devgadh ,the number one yuvraani of india and she is the same loving caring manyata but she misses uday a lot and her family,she keeps her bust with her kingdom and misses her family a lot !overhere there is a change in manyata's clothing ( she could wear beautiful sari which wold udas our urge to see her in) ,her attitude (in a positive way ,she can fight for her rights and stuff)!and still uday and manyata still miss eachother alot
at MUMBAI
you could see that things have changed like vija bhai is handeling everything over there and uday is the yuvraaj of jaigadh not the womaniser but a little cold hearted but still a touch of old uday in him who misses manyata every second and is still with jay trying to adjust with her even though not wanting to !then the story proceeds that uday in order to take out manyata from his mind decides to marry jay and so manyata gets to know about this and though she cries about she she makes herself understand that this is destiny and that uday has moved on in his life and that she cannot create problems in jays life and after seeing the happiness in both the raaj parivaar's she decides to maintain a distance with uday when she is called for jay and uday's wedding!overhere now when manyata reaches to mumbai ,theres a great uproar in the media because she is the number one bachelorette of india and everyone the whole of india is excited to see yuvraani manyata's come back ! manyata's maa and daata are very happy and its like a festival in the devgadh raaj mahal !
on the other side ,
uday is feeling this great peace happiness that manyata's coming back but then he remembers all what had happened ,how she had left and that she didnt even give him an explanation and that she had never tried to talk to him in the past year,it was like they had gone very far away from one another !he remembered that why she was coming,she was coming for her sister jay's wedding and for vijay and unnati 's engagement!
both manyata and uday had decided that that they were now not the old uday and manyata !uday was just the yuvraaj of jaigadh for manyata and vice versa!now manyata could have becoma a little bold and stuff! now BASICALLY the whole idea is that when manyata comes back and she takes all the responsibilities for the wedding,uday starts to come near her ,she does too but she keeps remembering whom she is and now that uday cant be with her !now there's an entry of uday's friend and one of them is ranvijay who starts to fall for her and becomes manyata's best friend (and later when finds about uday and manyatas loves becomes the cupid ) now in this whole ff vampy there are going to be intense scenes not only like kissing and stuff but like A LOT and i mean A LOT of jealoust scenes like on the sangeet manyata and ranvijay dance,go out for dinner and stuff !and also some misunderstandings like uday takes everybody for dinner amd manyata refuses saying that she has to take care of the wedding prep and while manyata's alone ranvijay comes and insists her in the prep (he is also manyata's buisness partner ) and takes her out in the same place where uday has taken everyone by coincidence and uday thinks manyata lied to him!then there would be scenes like where manyata is in a black sari and she goes into udays room to give his dress and uday is shirtless and manyata is about to move out uday decides to talk to her that how if she had confronted him this all would have not been happening and he and she could have been one !mrs.udayveer singh !there would have been any wall between them and then he pins her to the wall and tells her i love you and manyata says that no its too late and they have love scenes and then in order to save jays relationship she takes ranvijays help and tries to show fake closeness between him and her and during this uday gets super jealous and cannot see anyone with his princess and they have intense scenes in there hotel room like confrontations and stuff !(vampy im elaborating but i think that enough because the one whom im sharing my very precious plot is already a gem at this )and basically jays truth comes out and finally uday and manyata become one with the help of ranvijay !i think it will take you like 12 chps on this part ,then theres a whole royal wedding with the sangeet and everything in devgadh and jaygadh with each function of the wedding described in detail and then after marriage life as well !so as you said that our gem has time so this is a long plot !hope ypu like it ,rather love it vampy !😳 😃👏😲 WAITING for your reply :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
That's a great plot *clapping wildly*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Futbol_queen

That's a great plot *clapping wildly*



AWWW 😳 thank you so much sweetheart 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Amazing plot!! Would love to read about this!!:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wowww,its a gr888 plot!!!!!!!!! plzz update it sooN!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Okay vampy I have a vampire story plot for you,

Imagine Manyata is an evil vampire...

She is a century old but looks like 17.

She uses uday for her own plesure

But whenever she reads his mind, she could only find pure love, which she haven't seen for ages...she uses men to fulfill her own lust...

But the boy (Uday) from the small town made her feel human again...

And you can add an extra character Manyata's evil royal Vampire boyfriend, who compels her to love him ,most of the time to serve him. It is a curse he put on her whille turning her from a innocent girl to an evil vampire (Her evil boyfriend mustn't be Akash, please find some handsome face)...
Whenever she is with Uady her evil boyfriend has no compulsion effect on her and she totally forgets her world in him
Then she finds out in an old scripture her curse could be broken by a living human heart which will have a pure love and respect for her, then only she could be human again and be free from her oppressor boyfriend

And she of course doesn't wanna kill Uday coz by that time she is deeply in love with him

Just then she finds out Uday is the descendant (heir) of one of the old, powerful sorceress queen In his old small town, who once killed a thousand of vampires at her reign(Ancient time)...and the sorceress could control vampire emotions...which means her heir could control it tooo...

She doesn't wanna believe the new truth about him, she just wanted to confirm that their love is true...

But, just then she sees uday with jaynandini and hears their conversation from a distance about again a mass vampire killings and it could be done with a vampire pawn who will be in love the heir of the sorceress(Uday)...Later she finds out Jay is his fiancee and in the world of sorceress the engaged people are bind by an unbreakable vow, so he had to marry Jay(Who is an evil sorceress)

In process of his lie he fell deeply for manyata...he doesn't know how he will pierce the heart which has become his home...

Poor Manyata doesn't know what to do...will she return to her oppressor and let her be his puppy for eternity or die in the hand of the man she loves

Like I have told you earlier Twilight is a vampire novel but all vampire stories are not Twilight😊

Now its your turn Vampy...I have told you what I had in my mind😊 I think you can carry it to the next level with your writing talent...

Wish you all the best 👍🏼


Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
I loved the vampire plot really good!!
The plot of m uv misunderstanding is also nice!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Gowri05

I loved the vampire plot really good!!

The plot of m uv misunderstanding is also nice!


Thank you...

But still no reply from the writer who is meant to write it 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
wow mahnoor awesome plot.pliz pm me when u update:)

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