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Originally posted by: Gowri05

@rocker it was lipika not cham

@saira: u know my good friends name is also saira!! btw it wasn't that ff it was the other one friends with benefits!! that was tooo much for children like us!!

Ya I think we shud start something different!!

Btw can some one give me suggestion for my ss across the balcony I desperately need some not hot though

Originally posted by: rocker12

hey vampy ummm

not a vampire story i think lipika has also written it if i am not worng but somebody has written it!!!!

manveer a twilight story

u could think of something different and new:)

Originally posted by: rocker12

hey vampy ummm

not a vampire story i think lipika has also written it if i am not worng but somebody has written it!!!!

manveer a twilight story

u could think of something different and new:)

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

yes i do but not much send me some of vampire novels ploy i will try to write them in FF form😃

Originally posted by: panchaali

How will I send you I don't have those links...

I have those saved in my hard disk drive

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

if there are writtin then copy the text and pom it to me

Its in pdf format its hard to copy and paste dear!!!

Hey Vampire going offline now

Originally posted by: panchaali

Hey Vampire going offline now

I read and commented two of your chapters 😊

The rest will happen at my next log in 😊

My mother came back from office I had to go...

okay this is not a real plot but the original story line...
Actually i dint like the way the serial ended... d written episode team is doing a wonderful job but they have started from where it ended...

i was thinking of a different way of continuing with the story after uday's accident..
like he is all broken but he realises that manyata is by his side 24*7...
they somehow showed us as if uday was in coma... he was serious the first day...
but there might have been moments on the 2nd or 3rd day when he is awake but too tired to get up or something like dat n he realises that manyata is by his side n so he pretends to sleep or continue being unconscious... n manyata confesses her love like the way uday did on the day of her crowning...

somehow in d show he got conscious all of a sudden n immediately he became fit enough to walk away... ajeeb tha yaar😆

so when he opens his eyes n sees jay sitting beside him... d same one as in d serial he kinda lectures jay saying what does she think he will believe her so easily..?! n he knows manyata way too well.. yes she has betrayed him in the past... but now he knows that she loves him n he has seen that in her eyes...

may be show jay's realization track that uday can never be hers n watever she felt for uday was not true love...

but others cant forgive her so easily... wud be nice if there were scenes where the entire family comes to know about jay's past deeds... n they decide to throw her out of the home...

but manyata comes n saves her saying she is her sister n will remain in d house as long as she is there...

after hearing this jay melts and thinks that manyata has forgiven her n thanks her n asks her to forgive once again.. "sorry blah blah"
but manyata says no jay dont ever think that i have forgiven u n i will treat you as my sister... yes i called u my sister in front of all d elders but that was because i dint want u to be thrown out of the palace...

not because u would be homeless but because our family has faced so much n has been ridiculed by the media because of me... i dont want the same to repeat this time cause of you - another daughter of devgadh family...
you need to proov urself jay... i know its not easy... believ me it wasnt easy for me either to get back everyones trust having broken them... but i tried and i believe even u will be able to do the same after all even you have the same blood running in ur veins...

n may be scenes with manyata taking care of uday after he gains conscious like feeding him etc... he just cant jump out of d bed after being on trips😆

then giriraj returning and shouting at manyata saying she is responsible for uday's accident... manyata accepting it and remaining silent but unnati uday vijay n all supporting her n sayong jay was the reason for this...