MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
WOw navina this ff is just ooosome , I read all the updates in one go 😆, and had such an amazing time, the last update on Equina and her giving birth was just amazingly done👏👏. I have become big pankha of ur ff now

Loved it and continue soon

Thank u Chitra 🤗

And I loved your "monkeys" ... they are adorable!!!

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sonia

@sirjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

waoo its soo beautiful..n now manyata also wanna have her baby..waoo plsss update soon plsss...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

navi

i took a break from studies and ditched all my plans with sameer and saleh so i could come on IF and comment

the update was awesome

Awesome
Wonderful
Totally Rad
Sweet
Caring
Compassionate
Passionate
Loving
Brilliant
Spectacular

i loved the whole thing

u ended in such a exciting point

manyata tells uday lets make a baby

that was super cool

please please update sooon

thanks so much for pm

Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
navi
i took a break from studies and ditched all my plans with sameer and saleh so i could come on IF and comment

the update was awesome

Awesome
Wonderful
Totally Rad
Sweet
Caring
Compassionate
Passionate
Loving
Brilliant
Spectacular

i loved the whole thing

u ended in such a exciting point

manyata tells uday lets make a baby

that was super cool

please please update sooon

thanks so much for pm

Thanx Saira ... for taking time out to comment.

And BIG THANK U 4 the lovely words 🤗🤗🤗

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

omg!!! what an end!!! cant wait for them to make their baby ;):P

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva
Omy God ... awsum luved the update specially the last part ...

Thanx Vrinda 🤗

... I think everybody loved the last part ,

& all must have cursed me for ending it there.

Originally posted by: hemvb
omg!!! what an end!!! cant wait for them to make their baby ;):P

Awww Emma😲 ... I didn't know U ARE ALSO THE NAUGHTY TYPE😉😳

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
amazing update loved it the horse joke was hilarous!

Thank You Dear 🤗 ... I bet Manyata didn't find it funny at all😆.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: Archi02
Asweme update dear. Just loved it. Btw, how do you know so much about horses? Do you have any? And what will be name of the baby horse?

Thanx Archita 🤗

Unfortunately , I don't have a horse😭

... BUT I DO READ A LOT, that's how I knew all the details.

The next update will have Uday giving Manyata the opportunity to name the horse!

Originally posted by: sirjee
waoo its soo beautiful..n now manyata also wanna have her baby..waoo plsss update soon plsss...

Thanx Sonia 🤗

... I'll update the next part this weekend.

Originally posted by: livvy
Nice update 😉

Thank u Dear ⭐️.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Edited My Comment On Pg 70! Sorrie Navi 4 Editing Late:(

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
Edited My Comment On Pg 70! Sorrie Navi 4 Editing Late:(

Thanx Zainab ... No problem about the late edit😉

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
Res😉

Hey Navi Baby! That Was Awsuum! Ek Dum Mast Wala Update Tha! Soo Manyata Was Fooled By Uday😆 Hehe That Part Really Cracked Me up🤣🤣🤣 Kash Tumnein Vistaar Mein Unka Make-Up Bataya Hota😆🤣 Well Agar Vistar Ka Meaning Nahi Pata Ho Toh Den It's Long! Well I'm Obessed Wid Hindi 🤓 Bole Toh Apun Ke Bheje Mein Ghus Gaya Hai😆😉🤣 Hmm So Jaigadh Mein Aag Lagne Wali Hai😉 ( u Know Wat My Dirty Mind Thinks😆🤣) The Scene Was Soo Hawtt But Equina's Delivery Ruined d Moment😆 well Accha He Hua :p Thnks A Loot 4 d Pm Navina🤗! Update Soon Cause I'm Waiting!

Thank u so much Zainab 🤗

Manyata is very gullible 😕 ... it was easy for Uday to fool her. Glad u had a good laugh over it! Ek din zarroor batana ke VISTAAR kya he. My Hindi is putrid , I can understand it - but putting a sentence together kills me🤢😭.

Jaigarh mein aag ...SHAYAD!

Wapas ghar aane ke baad ... BOHOT BADA AAG LAGNE WALI HAIN☺️☺️☺️!

... I don't know about your dirty mind; BUT MINE IS NOW GONE BEYOND REPAIR!!!

Welcome 4 the PM⭐️ ... next update - THIS WEEKEND!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Navi dear plzzz...fast...i m waiting...

Sorry Sweta ... I took a supper break, that's what took so long!

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Wowww...that was awsomeee...lolzzz...i knew it ye koi uday ka pet hoga...hey ram majnu is back kamina pichha kyu nahi chhodta...beautifully written...OMG...love that last scene let make baby ...update soon and thanx for PM.

Thanx Sweta 🤗.

U knew it was a pet 👏 ... I'M IMPRESSED!

Hmmm ... Majnu is back🤢. Every love-story has to have a villain😡.

I'm not surprised that u loved the last scene😳.

Welcome for the PM.