FF - Lost Heritage - CHAPTER 5 UPDATED (pg27)

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Awsomeee...superb and very emotional update...cnt wait to know what is manyata's plan...update soon and thanx for PM.

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awesome

i loved your writing style

the dialogues and vocabulary was super awesome

i loved the ending part manyata giving that ring was so nice

and manyata and her plan i so excited

i hope your u update soon

please please please please please i cant wait more

u rock man

thanks so much for the pm

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Awesome update

i m speechless thinking of wats goin on in M 's mind

well done

and beautifully written

thanks 4 de PM

do cont soon

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

hmmm no manveer...
but still it was awesum...
update next soon and
plz pm me...

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

one thing is sure its very intriguing

u have a massive plot all set so smoothly ...

loved the update...

I have not read all chapters so cant comment more will read and come back once again

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Hey Ash, you have a very intriguing and fabulous storyline👍🏼

I just loved royalty in M's character...I read all the chapters in one go...you are a doing great job⭐️ and in this update the last part was wonderful...really liking the way M is planning it gives the feeling of true royalty in her...superb

Update next part soon and can you pm me when you update next

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Ahh finaly u updated i was waiting desperatly for it i loved the update i guex manyata ix planing against uday and devgarh. But i love manyata pr0misd uday by sending her ring. Iam sure uday wil utilize the chance;) manyata shudnt have pr0misd she wil do anythng for hm she wil def g0na pay for it plx ths time update soon as n0w u r free!
Seriously iam in love with this FF.

Edited by MsLuscious - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Amazing update ASH. ...Long and super-interesting!

Can't wait to read more about Manyata's plan!!!

Thanx 4 the PM.

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

manyata on fully revnge mode,reallyyy waitng to see wat will hapeen nxt!!!!!!! aada and manyata convo was very touching!!!!!! the ring part was veryy lovelyy!!!!!!!! do update soon waitng to see mre and mre manveer!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Ash

@kakacool123

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
awesome
i loved your writing style
the dialogues and vocabulary was super awesome
i loved the ending part manyata giving that ring was so nice
and manyata and her plan i so excited
i hope your u update soon
please please please please please i cant wait more
u rock man
thanks so much for the pm

Hey Vampy hw yor doin, thanx for the great comment. I'm soo happy you thin i'm a good writer.

Hopefully i'll update in my spare time maybe start writing sunday night who knows???😉

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