~{Together With You}~ Fan Fiction-Part 3 pg.8 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
awesome update yar i loved it 👏do continue soon👍🏼
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Great update. Pls update next part soon. Cant wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Good work.

Its nice but plzz kinda accelerate the story or update the parts more often so the flow of the story is fast paced and interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
NOTE
Hi guys!I know I haven't updated in so long! I'm so sorry.😭
I'll be updating by Sunday or Monday I promise! I'm going to be out of town this week thus I can't update. Please forgive me! Once again, sorry!
Thanks for reading this FF.

Love,
Piggies😳
Edited by Piggies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Piggies wheres the update! 😲
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piggies where is the update yaar please update soon i am waiting u promised to update it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm a little less than halfway done with the update! It'll be up by tonight.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is update 3! 😃
Sorry to keep you waiting so long.

Manya's Room
It was night time. Manya's parents had fallen asleep as it was pretty late. The girl was super tensed about running away. She had written a letter which was placed next to her lamp. She had her bags packed and was set to go.
Manya: Only 2 more hours till the flight. I guess it's time to leave.
She left the room and stopped at the little temple and prayed for a safe journey. The 19 year old went to her parents' room.
M: I am sorry Mom and Dad but this is important. I know you'll forgive me. Love you and I will come back soon.
Manya left the house and got a taxi to the airport.
Rajmahal
The royal parivaar was very excited for the team to arrive. They had everything ready and set. The servants had cleaned the palace and made it shine.
DS: Brijraj, the young lady and her team is coming at 9 right?
Brijraj: Yes MaSahib.
Udayveer arrived at the palace and went to DS and Brijraj to receive their blessings.
B: Uday! What a pleasant surprise beta.
DS: Indeed. How nice to see you this morning!
U: I just decided to come by and say hi. Also, I wanted to meet the girl that's coming today.
B: Her flight should've landed by now. We've sent a car and driver to pick her up.
Komal came down the stairs. Uday took her blessings.
K: Uday beta, how are you? And how is Unnati and Maharaj?
U: Everyone's doing good Aunty Komal. DS, can we talk about the Mehta proposal?
Both DS and Uday went to the library. The rest also went back to what they were doing.
Airport
Manya and her team both had landed safe and sound. They got their bags and went outside. They got in the car and drove off to the Devgarh palace.
Rajmahal
Manya and her team reached the palace. They were mesmerized by its' beauty. It was marvelous and humongous. They went inside and saw the Devgarh parivaar. Manya had a big bright smile and looked at everyone. She looked at Uday and they had an eyelock. They quickly broke the eyelock and Manya took the elders' blessings.
M: Namaste! I am Manya. It's a pleasure to be standing here among the prestigious Devgarh royal family.
DS: Namaste beta. It's nice to meet you. Welcome to Devgarh! You'll have tons of fun. Let me introduce you to everyone.
One by one, Manya said hello to everyone until they reached Uday.
DS: Meet Yuvraj Udayveer Singh of Jaigarh. He is basically our son.
U: Nice to meet you Manya.
M: H'hhh'ello. The pleasure is mine.
Manya felt nervous for some reason. It wasn't because he was a handsome hunk but because she felt connected to him in some way. The girl walked towards her team and stood there like a statue. DS told the servants to show the guests their rooms.
Manya went to her room and sat on the bed. She kept thinking about Uday.
M: What is wrong with me!? Why do I keep thinking about Uday? I haven't even properly met him and I keep thinking about him.
Manya soon fell asleep as she was exhausted.
The servant knocked on Manya's door and the girl woke up. She went and opened the door.
Servant: Rajmata is calling you ma'am.
M: Okay, I'm coming!
Manya came down to the library and saw Brijraj and DS.
M: Hello!
DS: Hi beta. We just wanted to discuss a few things about the documentary with you.
M: Oh okay!
Maharaj, Rajmata and Manya talked about the important things.
DS: Well that's all. Beta, would you like a tour of the palace?
M: That would be lovely! Of course, yes.
Manya went with a servant to look around the beautiful palace. The servant showed her the garden, kitchen, living rooms, etc. before going towards the bedrooms and outside. Billu(the servant) was telling her about the rooms and who they belonged to but skipped over Manyata's.
M: Billu-ji, whose room is that? Why is it locked?
B: That room belongs to Rajkumari Manyata.
M: Manyata?! Can I go inside please?
B: I'm sorry but as far as I know, no one except the raj parivaar and the cleaning servants are allowed to go in that room. You could talk to Rajmata about it.
Manya agreed and they continued on.
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The young lady went to go meet DS to ask her for permission to go to Manyata's room. She found her in her office with Uday. Manya got conscious.
DS: Hi beta, do you need something?
M: Rajmata ji, I had a question.
DS: Go on.
M: Can I go to Manyata's room? I really want my documentary to focus on her as well since she is also part of the royal parivaar.
DS and Uday got shocked hearing about Manyata. The lady missed her so much but never shows so. Uday missed Manyata as well. He still had hopes that she would come back one day.
DS: Umm... no. I'm sorry but you cannot. That room is very dear to us, it's reserved. I am sorry.
M: But...
DS: No arguments please.
Rajmata stood up and went to her room. Manya turned to leave but she heard his voice.
U: I'll take you there if you want.
The girl turned around and saw Uday smirking.
M: You will? I mean, can you?
U: I can explain it to them. We'll go tomorrow.
M: Manyata was very close to your heart wasn't she?
Uday was surprised hearing that question.
U: Well, yes. She was my best friend.
M: And she still is close to your heart, am I right?
U: I suppose so.
M: And I know so. I hope you'll find her someday.
Manya left and Uday was stunned. The girl had left some sort of effect on him. He felt mesmerized by her. He felt that Manyata would just be like her. Afterwards, Uday also left and went to his palace.
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Hope you guys liked this!
Thanks for reading. Sorry to keep you waiting so long.😳
Do tell me what you liked/disliked.

Love,
Piggies🐷

Edited by Piggies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Great Part Izzy
When will Uday find out that Manyata is Manya I hope he finds out soon
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Very nicely done Izzy!!
But can you from next time chose some outfits etc from the internet so we can imagine Manyata in it from now on. For example in this update itself I was wondering whether Manyata was dressed casually, or formally or in eastern or western. Was it a dress or a business formal for women... you know what I mean, right?😉

I mean she's returning from abroad so wanna see what her fashion sense is in this FF😎.

And one more thing... when you show Manya's real identity coming out, can you plzz show it happening with logical evidence proving her to be from the royal family...without a doubt like DNA evidence... Good job once again.👍🏼

Plzz update the next part soon... will be eagerly waiting.😃
Edited by mahi0809 - 13 years ago

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