Unwanted Thread 2 Manveer FF LAST PART PG123 - Page 37

Originally posted by: -Niha-

omg! uday slapped manya!
and jay got shot
OMG this is lyk an eid special !!

luved it update soon

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

very nice yar...

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

wonderful and beautifully written anam at one point i was crying😭 and my mom thought something terrible has happened because i usually dont cry and she asks me what happen and i say ''mom J got shot and uday slapped manyata can u believe it poor J'' my mom wanted to ground me for being super obsessed but i was saved due to eid 😆 anyway this update was super emotional and the way u wrte it made ot look so real i felt like the scene was happening right infront of my eyes i loved this update please save J i know she will have a miscarriage but please dont let her die and please update soon and not emotional because then there will be tsunami at my place😆 please update soon 😃 and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Syedhuzaib

Beautiful

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update Anam loved it!

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏👏THNAKS.AWESOME,...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: mahara23

wow loved it plz continue sooon

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Part 51

Rajbir punched Arjun badly

Uday picked J up and they went to the car

Uday- Remisha ghadi jaldi chiloh please

Remisha- Don't worry Uday I am

Remisha drove really fast

Now we see everyone in the hospital they took J inside for treatment

Manyata was crying badly

Manyata- hamare liye J has put her life in danger J aur baby (she started crying more)

Uday hugged her

Uday- Princess please burah maat soacha ok kuch nahiye hogha

Manyata- woh goli humhe lagni chahiye thi lekin J neh Uday ab kya hogha J ka bacha aur J agar kuch hogaya hum kabhi apneh aap ko maaf nahiye karpaighe

Uday- Princess kuch nahiye hogha tum chinth maat karo (he was trying to be strong for M)

Manyata was crying continuously

Rajbir- Uday Bhai chali aiyi aapko yeh form sign karnah hai

Uday- yeh kaise form hai

Rajbir- Doctors keh rehay hai keh (tears in his eyes) they wont be able to save the baby and J they will try but you have to sign the form so you know aur ismein liknah hai detail aap J keh Bhai so you have to fill it

Manyata fainted in Uday arms

Uday picked Manyata up and put her in one of the wards

Uday- Doctor please have a look at her

Doctor- I will attend the patient don't worry please

Uday was in dilemma he filled the form in and signed it and gave it to the doctor

Uday- Doctor please save my sister I beg you please

Doctor- we will try our best please have a seat

Rajbir- Uday Bhai I didn't fulfil my promise hum J ko nahiye bacha payehh ause Arjun seh

Uday- Rajbir J kuch nahiye hogha agar hum aiseh he socheghe toh kaise chalegha…hamaari princess bhi admit hai aur bahuth pareshaan hai humhe auseh bhi sambhalana aur J ko bhi so please Rajbir khud ko sambholo

Doctor- Mr Uday please come to my cabin

Uday went to the doctors cabin

Doctor- Miss Manyata is fine just shocked so she's resting she's very hydrated she hasn't had anything to drink so I have put her on the drip for today she will be ok… you can meet her

Doctor- Thank you Doctor

Uday went inside to see Manyata she was on drip

Manyata- Uday yeh sba kya hai I'm fine mujhe kyun admit kiya hai I'm fine

Uday- Princess you fainted ok please have some rest

Manyata- humhe J keh paas janah hai (she tried to get up)

Uday- No Princess aapko araam ki zaroorath hai ok J ka treatment chal raha hai you need complete rest… ok aur aap yahaan seh nahiye jasakthi please araam kijiye ok no argument ab araam seh leth joa and go to sleep please (he massaged her head) close your eyes and sleep ok

After a while Manyata went to sleep

Uday went outside

Rajbir- Uday Bhai Doctor kuch batha nahiye rehay hai I'm waiting here for ages

Uday- Rajbir we have to be patient

Rajbir- hum J ko takleef mein nahiye dheksakteh I love her

Uday- I know you love J but Rajbir ab tumhe aur hum sabko auseh sambhalnah hai ok

Doctor- Mr Uday please come with me to my cabin

Uday went in the cabin

Uday- Doctor how's my sister and the baby?

Doctor- I'm sorry Mr Uday we couldn't save the baby but we have saved your sister but right now she is unconscious you can meet her when she's awake

Uday- Thank you Doctor for saving my sister

Doctor- please don't say thanks that's our job we are doctors now the rest is up to you guys… she will need all the love and support of her family….

Now we see everyone outside J's room

Rajbir- Uday how are we going to tell J

Uday- we will have too don't worry hum sab J keh saat hai

It was evening now J had regained conscious she touched her stomach she couldn't feel anything….. she started crying

J- mere bacha

Rajbir came inside

Rajbir- J please don't cry I know you have a lost a part of you but if you keep crying you will get ill please don't cry… I can't see you like this

Rajbir hugged J both were crying

Uday- Princess J ko hosh aiygayah hai chaloh we can meet her

Manyata- Uday I can't face J mujhe bachaneh keh liye J neh apni jaan jokeh mein dalhi she lost her baby she had a miscarriage because of me (cryingly) Sab hamaari galthi hai

She hugged Uday

Uday- nahiye Princess aapki galthi nahiye everything is written jo hotha woh hokeh reheteh hai hum auseh nahiye roke sakteh… now we need to be there for J woh hamaari behen hai chaloh come on Princess now no crying

Manyata- chaloh Uday

Manyata and Uday go to see J

Uday- J please don't cry

Manyata hugged J

Manyata- I'm sorry J humhe maaf kardo why did you come in between for

J- Jiji it's not your fault aap hamaari behen hai aur hum aapkeliye kuch bhi karsakteh hai apni jaan bhi desakteh hai aur agar hamaari jagha aap hothi aapbhi hamare liye yeh karthi kyunki aap bhi humseh bahuth pyaar karthi hai

Manyata hugged her

Viraj, Jhavi, Unnanti, Vijay and Manyata parents Shaina and Rohan all came to the hospital

Viraj had made sure Arjun gets jailed so now he was in jail he had killed his own child with his own hand although his real intention was to get rid of Manyata.

Viraj- Manya

Manyata hugged Viraj

Manyata- Viraj Bhai

Viraj- I'm sorry I shouldn't have left you guys alone ab hum sab hamesha saat rehenghe I promise nothing like this is ever going to happen again

Jhanvi- J how are you feeling?

J- I will be ok Bhabhi

Shaina- Beta bas apna kyaal rakoa humhe rajmahal bhi phone karnah hai

The story goes 8 months forward

Uday, J, Unnanti and Vijay have returned to India

We see arrangements going on in the rajmahal

J- Mama hum kaise lage rehay hai

Komal- you look beautiful beta

Brijraj- hamesha ki tarah hamaari J bahuth he khoobsurat lag rahiye hai… ab bas Manyata bhi jaldi seh waapis ajaye phir hamara pariwar complete hojaygha

Komal- haan Maharaj humhe bhi isse din ka intezaar tha

J- hamaari Jiji aaj he arahiye hai sab arahaye Viraj Bhai Bhabhi, aur Krishy Mama hes so so adorable.. aur Shaina Aunty and Rohan Uncle unoneh hum sab ka bahuth kyaal rakha tha when we were in London

Komal- J beta tumneh hamara honeh waleh dharmaad ka naam he nahiye liye Rajbir aur auseki family bhi arahiye hai

J- haan Mama Raj bhi araha hai patha hai lekin woh sab toh Jaigar mein rehenghe

Komal- haan beta Uday neh pehele seh kaha hai woh sab Jaigar mein he rehenghe

Brijraj- haan Uday hai kahaan abhi thak toh ajanah chahiye tha humhe airport bhi jana hai flight theen ghathe baad hai

J- hum abhi jiju sa ko phone karthe hai.. hello Jiju sa kahaan hai aap

Uday- hum arahaye J… Choti is taking years to get ready today aaj Vijay bana bhi arahe waapis so isliye inti tyaari ho rahiye hai

J- lekin jiju sa Vijay Bhai toh kal arahaye hai

Uday- he changed his ticket

J- ok jiju sa jaldi aiyi hai I want to go airport

Uday- arahaye hai

He disconnected the phone

PREVIEW- MANYATA AND FAMILY IN INDIA

- J AND RAJBIR ROKA UNNANTI AND VIJAY ROKA

- LAST OF ALL MANVEER ROKA AGAIN

awesome