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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update dear
loved the post😊
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Originally posted by: smiley12

⭐️ Dankeshun?😕i cant understand anyways good job⭐️

hehe sorry, it means thank you in German, but I'm pretty sure I'm spelling it wrong 😆
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Yay Twist selected from poll i feel like ur brother jst voted the vote which i felt i missed out on lolz😉... update was awesome enjoyed reading it so interesting from start to end everything written nicely the suspense story unfolding together with manveer scenes inbetween really nicely balanced👏... really liked the manveer nok jhok when uday went to ask manyata for dance they r truly one strange bunch😆... manveer dancing date hope the file secet comes out after that n it doesnt get ruined... OMG Seema is princess Ranjani that is jst fab gr8 work... I really felt there is something mysterious abt seema ji she felt suspicious to me from previous update jst forgot to right it in my comment before bt never thought she would b princess ranjaani so Seema ji is princess ranjaani so excited to know what happens nxt n what shes gonna do with those two files thnx for awesome update & pm🤗🤗... update soon😃...
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Forgive me for my Terrible Hindi! The only reason I throw it in there is to keep the ff authentic from where it came from 😛

Chapter 15 - Part Two
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Manyatha felt like she was in heaven, together they cut the cake. Manyatha grabbed the first piece and brought it to Udays mouth. He grinned and opened his mouth, she fed him. When it came to her Uday cheated, he took the slice and brought it close to her mouth, as Manyatha got closer to it to take a bite, Uday pulled it back and popped the cake piece into his own mouth. "Not fair Uday!" Manyatha pouted. He laughed, and picked up another piece and fed it to her, "Better?" he smiled. Manyatha squinted her eyes, "Not yet...". Uday was confused, "Huh?". Manyatha reached up and cupped his face, she got onto her tiptoes, and, "Mannu!" Sushant tugged at her dupatta. Manyatha looked down at Sushant, she let go of Uday and crouched down in front of him, "Yes?". "Could you give us some cake?" Dilip appeared beside him. Uday glowered at the twins, "Little Devils" he muttered. Manyatha giggled, and stood up, she got a piece of cake and split it in two, giving one piece to Sushant and the other to Dilip. "No Mannu you feed us!" they insisted. She sighed, "Okay!". Manyatha began feed them, "YUVRANI SA STOP!" Manyatha was startled by their nannies. The women looked terrified, "Please, we request you don't give anything sugary to them!" the nannies explained. Sushant and Dilip knew what was coming, their hands shot forwards, thy snatched the cake pieces out of her hands and stuffed them into their mouths. She looked up at the nannies, they looked horrified. Manyatha looked back at the twins, they weren't there anymore. "Yuvrani Sa...you've unleashed two little monsters" the nannies whimpered. Manyatha gave them a strained smile, "Oh don't worry". The women walked away still quivering. "So where were we?" Manyatha turned around. Uday had dissappeared, she looked down at the table, it was empty except for a note,
Princess,
Meet me at the Gazebo, after you get the letter.
Love,
Udayveer

Manyatha sat down at the table, 'What letter?' she thought.

Rajveer stood outside the princes cabin, Rajani beside him. They saw two little figures heading towards them. "Go hide Rani!" Rajveer hissed. Rajani nodded and hid behind the cabin. "Where you off two boys?" Rajveer ruffled the twins hair. Dilip wiped some icing of his face, "Yuvi wants us to get a red file letter thingy". Sushant glared at him, "You weren't supposed to tell anyone!" he growled. Dilip threw his hands over his mouth. Rajveer chuckled, "Don't worry I'll get it for you!". The evil prince walked inside the cabin, he made sure the twins hadn't followed him. He took the blue file from Underneath his bed and took out the papers, he took the red file on Udays bed and switched the papers. Rajveer held up the file, and smirked, "Phase one complete". Raj handed them the file "Here ya go boys". "Thanks!" they ran away. Rajveer turned to Rajani who was peaking out from behind the cabin, she grinned evilly, "Phase Two" she snickered. Rajani brought out her cell, "Hullo? Wuzzap Beat Magazine? Do I have a story for you...".

Uday stood in the gazebo on top of the hill. He could see everything going on. Unfortunately he was too busy gazing at Manyatha to notice Rajveer and the twins fiasco. He was lost in Manyatha dreamland when his phone shattered his thoughts. "Hello?" he answered it. "Dada..." it was Unnati. "Choti! Did you make it back?" he asked. "Yes.." her voice was emotionless. "Look Choti I want you to understand that I'm doing this for your good" Uday sighed. "I still don't undertstand Dada!" Unnati whined. Uday noticed the twins heading towards Manyatha, "I'll explain it you later, for now I'm busy, By Choti". Unnati sighed, "Bye Dada, love you". "Love you too Choti" he smiled.

Manyatha was starting to doze off, Jai was nowhere to be seen, Uday had disappeared and so had the twins. She was bored out of her wits, the evening had looked promising not it had turned into a drag. "Mannu! Mannu! We have something important for you!" the boys shouted. Manyatha opened her eyes, the twins were running at her at full speed, behind them was Rajveer. She jumped to the side just as they crashed into her chair. The nannies ran forwards, the boys brushed them off and stood up, "Yuvi sent this for you!" thy handed her a red file. She plastered on a smile, and took it from them. Manyatha flipped to the first page, her blood ran cold. She flipped through the other pages. The twins grinned, "See you Mannu!" and they left her standing with Rajveer. Manyatha was devoid of any emotion except for one, anger. Her anger refused to die down, it was like a wildfire, unpredictable, "He..they..them all liars" her voice barley above a whisper. Across from her Rajveer smirked, his work was done. He decided to put on an innocent face, "See Manyatha, I've been trying to tell you this, since yesterday". Manytha glared at him, "It'd be best if you kept your mouth shut" she hissed, "You would've tried harder to tell me, but you didn't! So it obviously shows that you don't give a sh**".Rajveer crossed his arms over his chest, "If it wasn't for me you wouldn't have known in the first place" he said with a superior tone. Manyatha pushed past him, and began to make her way to the gazebo to confront Uday. Rajveer followed her, going at an easy pace, 'Time to sit back, relax, and watch the drama unfold' he thought.

Uday saw her ascending the stairs he stood behind the table he had set up. Uday had broad grin across his face, Manyatha had arrived. Uday frowned, Manyatha was glaring at him, he noticed the red file in her hand, that had his letter in it...didn't it? She threw it at him, Uday reached out and caught it. "Manyatha?" he asked. "Don't 'Manyatha' me! Open it and read it" she hissed. Uday watched Rajveer come up behind her, he knew exactly what was in the file. "I thought we friends! Extremely good friends?! Before, if anyone had asked me 'Who do you trust with your life more, Jai or Uday' I would've answered Uday! But after seeing that!-" she pointed to the file in his hand, "Im already doubting my decision, Uday you could've told me! You know how much I hate lies!" she shouted. "Manyatha listen-" she put up her hand, "Im not done yet! You could've told me! Yet you decided to hide it from me!! The whole world knew that I was your fiance except for Me!" she looked hurt, Uday wanted to console her, but he couldn't, Manyatha was enraged at the moment. Manyatha stomped up to him, she jabbed his chest with her finger, "Your a low down lying cheating scoundrel playboy, that's what YOU are" she hissed. This set off something in Uday, he grabbed her hand that she'd used to poke him, "Just because I haven't said anything so far doesn't mean you can keep on saying what you like" Uday glared at her, "The only reason I didn't tell you was because of Dadi Sahib, she's the one who ordered Everyone to keep their mouths shut!". Manyatha tried to pull away from him but Uday had a steel grip on her, "Now you're dragging Dadi Sahib into this? How could Dadi Sahib know anything about this? She hasn't even signed those papers! And if it wasn't for Rajveer, I would've been kept in the dark!" She said through her gritted teeth. Uday let go, "You don't believe me? Yet you believe him?!" Uday pointed at Rajveer."Well at least he TRIED to tell me!" Manyatha retorted. Uday turned away from her, "Believe what you want Manyatha, but the truth is Dadi Sahib kept this from you, and made everyone else do the same" he looked down at her. Manyatha stopped glaring, she was thinking of what to do next. "I'm going home" she pivoted and left, leaving Rajveer and Udayveer. Uday turned on him, "You know Rajveer I knew you could go low, but this low?". Rajveer walked over to him and picked up a glass of water, he handed it to Uday, who looked down confused. "Take a drink of water and cool down Udayveer, because what I'm about to say next will probably overheat you" Rajveer said with a smug smile. "Oh and what's that?" Uday scoffed. Rajveer smirked and said, "All's fair in Love and War". With that Rajveer descended the stairs after Manyatha. Uday let that process in his head, the anger seemed to swell up inside of him, he crushed the glass of water, he watched the glass shards fall to the ground, there were some that pricked his skin, he ignored the pain, Uday was immune to it, for him it was nothing. Uday ran to the side of the Gazebo and watched Manyatha walking away with Rajveer. Uday pulled out his cell, he wasn't about to give up, he'd come too far, accomplished too much to just sit down and accept defeat, Manyatha would be his, by hook or by crook, "Hi, yea take out my car, asap!".

'How could you! Gurr?!?!' I had to do it guys! It was one of my mega twists! I know you guys absolutley HATE Rajveer!! Don't worry he'll be gone soon! So what do you guys think will happen next? Will Manyatha agree to Marry Uday? Or will she go on strike 😛 again...hehe.. That aside I also have an announcement to make! *Drumroll*
From now on I'll only be updating on Sundays and Wednesdays! And for my other FF! -Untitled- (yes I'm still thinking of a name), I'll update every Monday and Thursday! That Gurd? Okay! Bye!


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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update gurrr nice one 👍🏼

Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 updatee,waitng to readd moree!!!!!!! cntinuee soon,and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful and awesome i loved it please update soon i loved it and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
good work👏nice updatedo continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally i read chappy 13,14 n15.i was scared about the twist.but m ok now.wht a twist!loved it. humn!wht will happen next?!?!can't wait.forum writers r far better than our cvs.thank u 4 pm me.update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Update Gurr! I'm Sure That Uday Won't Spare Rajveer! Hope Manyata Won't Act Childish & Behave Like A Mature Girl Wid Her Decisions! Ty 4 d pm & Update Soon!

P.S : Sorrie 4 Replying Late As I Was Super Busy!

P.P.S: I've Suggested Few Names 4ur New FF Hope You Like It!

1. ~The Love Square~
2. ~Rythm Of Love~

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