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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
amazing...lagta hai ab agey journy bahot thrilling hone wali hai...
update soon tahnx for PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Hey dear your FF's story is so good👍🏼 I read all chapters in one go😊

Really liked your story...its great⭐️

Fast pace of story is going great😳

Waiting for the next update and pm me when will you update next🤗

Edited by adorable_rana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awesome and lovely
the whole thing was so nice
i love this fast story
i was confused who is rifatbi
i think i missed that
anyway great work
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
luvd it thnaxx fr the pm .. :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Awesome update Dear...

Just caught up on chapter 3 and 4... ...it was most interesting! Loved it! Continue soon!
Thanx 4 the PM.
Edited by ...navina... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wow awesum blossom gr8...😃
luved it luved it loads...😛
update next soon plz...😆
and plz do pm me...😳
awesum update...😉
mahi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesum blossom gr8...😃
luved it luved it loads...😛
update next soon plz...😆
and plz do pm me...😳
awesum update...😉
mahi...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
just read both parts
it was amazing
thanks for the pms
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
very nice ss jazz...
n very unique concept continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys i m so sorry, i know i should be showered with jhootas and chappals but plz plz forgive me now
and read the further part
chapter 5

Brij:jee Ds:uday ko receive karne gadiya bhijwa di hai na

maa sahab aaj humara beta laut raha hai.

Unnati: dadisahab hum kyu nahi jaa sakte dada ko lene?

Ds:kyun unnati beta ab jaigarh mein uday ko akele hi kadam rakhna hai.

Till that time rajpurohit comes in a hurry

Rp:rajmata kya yuvraj ke saath koi aur bhi hai

Ds:jee wo unke koi dost aa rahe hai

K:kya hua porohit jee?

Rp:ab ye toh unke aane ke baad hi pata lagega..

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uday and manyata were in the jaigarh cars when it held at the entrance gates of jaigarh mansion.

uday got down and stood with his hands folded and held high and wishing the cheering crowd.

in jaigarh mansion,

komal was ready with the aarti when uday arrived bringing a wide smile on everyone's face.

komal did the aarti, and uday then uday entered in the mansion to seek blessings from the elders.

at the same time the diya(lamp) in the aarti thaal thaal was about to distinguish, when a pair of hands covered it.

that's when everyone noticed a innocent beautiful girl with a smile covering the diya.

a feel of releif was formed on purohitji's face.

k:beta aap..

uday:mom ye hain humari dost, manyata..manyata jaiswal.

m:namaste aunty

komal returned a smile to her.

rajmata was busy staring her, when uday extended his hands and bought manyata to her.

uday:dadisahab humne aapko bataya tha na apne friend ke baare mein.

rajamata nodded in affirmation.

m:namaste rajmataji..

uday signaled her something by his eyes which was noticed by everyone.

then manyata got stike by his action and she bend down and touched her feet and seeked blessings.

rajamata blessed her

ds:jiti raheye, uthiye beta...aur aap humme rajamata nahi balki dadisahab bulaiye(she smiled).

manyata nodded.

then uday introduced manyata with brijraj.

uday:dad ye humari dost

brij:manyata hai right, kitni baar bataoge beta

he kept his hand on her head

brij:welcome to jaigarh manyata...waise aapka naam..

uday:dad, she is manyata jaiswal, jaiswal groups ke owner Mr.indrajeet jaiswal ki beti.

brij:ahh.. i got that right, enjoy ur trip, aur beta kisi baat ki fikar mat kijiye, ok

m:yes uncle.

uday:princess meet my mom.

k:(with serious expression)bas bas , hum khud milenge.

manyata's amile fadded after hearing her rough voice.

k:toh aap hain humare bete ki dost.

manyata nodded, rajmata knew what komal was doing so she kept silent and rest aal were shocked by her behaviour.

k:aapko pata hai aap kis ki dost hain?

m:(with utter innocent) uday ki..

komal broked in a amile and hugged her.

k:beta hum toh sirf mazak kar rahe the.

manyata got relieved

uday:thank god mom, aap ne toh humari jaan hi nikal di.

unnati:ahem ahem..

uday looked at her little sister

uday:chalo manyata ab aap sabse introduced ho gayi ho, ab koi nahi bacha

unnati(run to him): arrey aise kaise koi nahi bacha,koi reh gaya hai.

uday:oh yes of course itne important person ko hum kaise bhul gaye

unnati smiled and moved forward

uday:princess come i will introduce u to my darling... cook bhimsingh.

unnati stood there with open mouth in shock and rest all broked into laughter

unnati:dada..

uday: ok ok, princess meet unnati my darling little sister.

before manyata could say unnati hugged her.

unnati:hey manyata , kaisi ho, dada humesha tumhare baare mein batate hain

after this they all headed towards the puja ghar and had an aarti

in ds office

ds:brijraj humne uday ko bula toh liya par humme dar hai, kahin itihaas khud ko dohra(repeat) kar iss baar kamyab na ho jaaye.

rajpurohit:nahi, rajmata iss baar shayad kismat ko kuch aur manzoor hai

brij:aap kya kehna chahte hain ?

purohit:iss baar shayad khud ke saamne koi dhaal ban kar khada ho

ds:kash iss baar tufaan apna rukh badal le, kash iss baar

purohit: iss baari sab badalega rajmata, aap fikar na karein, bas rajabhishek ki tyaari shuru ki jaaye.

manyata uday and unnati were having a chat

"lagta hai koi humme bhul gaya"

trio look at the door and unnati and uday are stunned

uday:vijay banna ,aapko kaise bhul sakte hain hum

they hugged each other, when a girl too hugged uday

"aur humme toh nahi bhule na uday"

uday:of course not j..

unnati:vijay how r u?

vijay:how m i looking to u?

unnati:awesome!!

manyata had a smile on looking those friends having a warm chat, vijay noticed her

vijay:lagta hai yahan mahal mein koi snow white udaas hai,(to manyata) hey snow white...

unnati:vijay let me introduce her.

vijay:wait, let me guess, ye uday ki friend hai right

every one nodded.

vijay:toh fir let him introduce her...come on uday

uday come and introduce manyata to j and vijay.

vijay was delighted to meet her but j gave a sarcastical smile.

j: so manyata ab tum ek commoner ho kar bhi ek rajabhishek dekh paaogi,wow, lucky girl huh..

uday didnt liked her comment, manyata 's eyes became wet.

uday was about to burst when vijay interrupted

vijay:shut up j bhai, ye mat bhulo ki manyata uday ki dost hai, got that.

j gave a disgusting look to manyata and left the hall

unnati was about to console manyata when vijay held her hand and took her, leaving uday and manyata behind.

uday:princess...

m:i m alright uday, sacchi.

uday:toh phir ye aansoo kyu(pointing towards the flowing tears) let me guess ...aankhon mein koi kachara chala gaya hoga right?

m:mm.. yeah, kachara chala gaya.

uday:common princess, ye kisi typical hindi film ka melodramatic aur ghisipity line hai, koi naya bahana dhundho yaar.

manyata broked into a smile after hearing his funny comment

uday:that's like my princess, chalo ab thoda rest kar lo.

they all had their dinner and headed to their rooms, manyata was given the beautiful room of west wing facing towards the garden fountain.

after two days there was a puja held before the crowning ceremony.

it was night time, manyata was in her room, she jus hanged her phone after having a chat with her father.

she was aboutto head towards her bed when there was a knock at the door.

m:kaun hai..

uday:bhoot...

manyata opened the door, but no one was there.

m:uday.., uday...

she came out from her room but no one was there, she moved towards the corridor

m:uday kaha ho tum...dekho ab mujhe darr lag raha hai... uday..

"bhooo"

m:aaa

uday was standing and lauhing at her

uday:oh god princesss, tum kitni darpok ho.

m:hum darpok hain abhi batate hain tumhe

then she was chasing him all around the corridor,they were like kids laughing and running, unaware of the danger which would soon arrive in their lives.

there far away in jaigarh jungale a pair of dark eyes with evil smile were staring high as if they were looking at them from so far

"akhir jaigarh ki chauthi pidi(generation) aa hi gayi, par ab laut nahi paayegi, aur lagta hai iss baar kisi masoom ki jaan bhi apne saath le jayegi, apni bhalayi chahti hai toh chali jaa ladki warna..."

suddenly the side trees were shaking and fall down with a crash, and the evil smile turned into a drastic laughter filling ground with blood and the air with the feeling of danger...

to be continue

so sorry guys

plz do forgive me, i was not in the city and i m leaving soon as my exams are near

but i promise to give more update

plz forgive me

i know it was little boaring but i will try to make it little interesting further

do hit like and comment

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