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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Niha-

nice update
wud love to read more
plz do pm me
sry I-F wont let me hit da like button

Thank you!
Glad u liked it!
Pmed you, hope u like the next chapter😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: pritus

Good start nd great character sketch. I always wanted to see a affection between manyata nd brijraj in show bt neva could. Waiting for update.

Thank You so much for ur appreciation.
BR had so many flaws plus, his CVs spoiled his image with the Maya angle, I wanted to recreate him as a responsible and loving person😊. New chapter updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

interesting...uday sharabion ka rakhwala lols..do cont it..gud concept

I wanted to give VB really funny dialogues, I knw that I can't do as good a job as the DEK writers but I tried! Glad u like the term "Sharaabiyon ka rakhwaala". Thanks for ur appreciation. New chapter updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ilvuday

interesting so ab manyata aur uday ki nhok jhok chalegi m so w8ing fr nextchapter pls pm ven u upd8😃

What is Manveer without nok-jhok😆
Glad u found it interesting
New chapter updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

it was awesome thank u for such a detailed description of every one please update soon and pm me and please the next part should have a lot of manveer please please and please add alot of nok-jhok and intense scenes please and dont forget to update soon

Thanks for the appreciation😊
The next part has lots of Manyata becoz she hasn't been introduced till now.
Rest assured there will be lots of Manveer
New chapter updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
awesome update
so Manyata is coming back and Uday ke dil ko "Haan nahi to" keh ke le hi jayegi...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: cnibir

Hey Prachurya, (hope i got it right!!) Yah u did😊


this was really good in terms of its characters and story line. i really would like to continue reading so could u plz PM me when u post the next chapter.😛
Thank You so much for ur appreciation, new chapter up!

it was a good beginning 👏and i can't wait until the next chapter since thats when manyata comes back.

good luck for the next part
👍🏼

Thanks😍
Nibir

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Wow Its realy beautiful. Pls update soon.

Thank You so much for ur appreciation. New chapter updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: killerashish

great character sketch dear and nice update👏 cont soon plzz PM me

Thank you so much, Glad that u liked the character sketches. New chapter updated😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: mahnoor2468

ohhh how lovely :) 👏 i just wanted to request you that i love it to bits but i dont want that manyata acts clumsy and not princess like !i would request that please make her a very sensible,humble and a pure poyal in the way she talks walks and everything else then this story for me would be a 5⭐️! and please pm pm pm

Firstly, thank you for ur appreciation😊
Manyata hates glamour and stuff but she is well behaved, sensible, mature and sweet😊
The 2nd chapter will give u somewhat the picture of Manyata's character
2nd chappie has been updated

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