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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Pari
luv'd the update
tum har tharah ki luv stories ache si likhti ho
Ek tharaf serious wala jo humme rulathe hai toh dusri tharaf ye romantic comedy jo humein hasaathe hai
so hats off to u dear👏👏👏
Aur pyaar ke har ki rang ko ache se express karti ho so i'm giving u the title of
Dr. LOVE😉
I humbly request u to accept this title.
Yunhi hamare Manveer ko Pyar ke different rang mein aage bhi dikhate rehna pls...


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@preya its ok dear.
9 need 2 say sorry.
Just chil.
@afreshbegin haayee finaly dr.love ka tag mil gya..
Thanku so much darlng.

Mujhse link mt maanga kro,i m using cel yar.
Isliye link share ni kr pati.
Nd thanku so al.
I m hapy u lyk mah stry.

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-37
Jagat'vijay tubi kamal krta h,ldki
bchpan se tere sath h,or tujhe
pta ni chla ki wo tujhse love sove
krti h.
Vijay'ni yar
Uday'apne aap ko ldka smjhe tb
to feelings bahar aye.
Akash'yar tara kitni smjhdar h
na,meri wali to smjhti hi ni kuch.
Uday'teri wali bi teri jeisi fatichar
hogi.
Akash'oye aisa mt bol,jb pta
chlega na kaun h bolti bnd ho
jayegi.
Uday-jagat'aisi kaun si item bomb
mili h tujhe..
Akash'btadunga bad me.
Manyata'arey vijay kuch soch na
ab kya?
Vijay'colage me fresher party h
na or kisi ko bi le ja skte h,tara ko
main le jaunga.
Jay'tara ko main lejaunga.
Manyata'ha jay vijay ne yhi bola.
Jay'arey ise phle tara ko rokna
pdega..
Wo kal chali jayegi.
Vijay'arey ha.
Pr keise?
Jagat'bta lalmirchi tu to budhi ki
dukaan h.
Manyata'arey haddi,phle tu bta
apna idea.bta
Jagat'sidiyo se gira do.
Vijay'itne ptle h ki 10bar girge phr
bi haddiya ni tuitegi...
Uday'vijay station tk tara or uske
baap ko leja wha baap ko chda
diyo,tara ko phr yha leaaiyo.
Sb hsne lgte h.
Jay'tara ko hi kidnap krlo.
Jagat-uday'ay tu rhne de,pta chla
apni jan bi khtre me pdh gai.
Akash'sbne kha wo ptle h,unhe
sidhi k thru window pe chadhao,or
jb aadhe stairs pe ho tb sidhi gira
do.
Thodi bhoot to haddi tuitegi...
Again all laugh
Unanti'vijay tara se hi puchlo kya
krna chahiye.
Vijay'main,ni ek slap ne aacha
khas dheela kr diya dusre me to
main gya..
Uday'tara ko hm rok lenge uski
chinta mt kro,bs tara k lye
westurn taiyar rkhna.
Manyata sad.
Uday'manyata tere bad pe Kuch h.
Manyata happy'kya?
Uday'jyada khush mt ho main ni
hu,pasnd aaye to rkhliyo wrna
faik diyo...
Jagat'soch smjh k faikiyo
mehnga h.
Jagat'chal dimag chalate h keise
rukega tara ka baap..
Ha ni to.
Tara chat pe ro ri h.
Vijay or sb sidhiyo me khade h.
Jay'arey ja na,kuch ni hoga.
Unanti'vijay wo ro ri h jao na.
Vijay'yar dar lg rha h khin phr mar
diya to.
Uday'kha liyo,weise bi jo pyar krta
h uske hatho mar khane ka mja hi
kuch or hota h.
Vijay'aacha,tujhe keise pta?
Uday'kamine maine kha rkha h..
Manyata look uday,nd uday
blushng eyes se dekh k use avoid
krta h.
Jagat'kamine tara ko to koi mil
jayega,apni soch..
Tujhpe to koi lyn bi ni marti...
Manyata'ryt.
Bhai jao na.
Vijay'aacha thik h,weise jagat lyn
to tere pe bi koi ni marti.
Jagat'bhai pe to marti h,main bi
njoy krleta hu.
Uday'ha mujhe to kis dene k lye
tarsti h.
Manyata'kis ni tera bs chale to
unke 7th bad pe chla jaye.
Uday'haaye,tu kyn jealous ho ri
h,chl tere bad pe.
Manyata,raaba,gadha khin ka.
Wo uday ko lightly hit krti h,phr
wo bi return hit krta h.
Jay'ye kya kr rhe ho dono.
Manyata'hitng hitng khel rhe h.
Jagat'thanku,chal jay hm bi
khelte h.
Jay'jagat tu chup rh,vijay ja na..
Vijay'main bi yhi kheluga,tara k
7th..
Uday'ha ja pta chal hitng ki jgh
slapng khelne lg gai..
Manyata'oye dra mt.
Ja vijay kuch ni hoga...
Vijay himmat krke jata h...
Sb dekhte h stairs me se...
Vijay dhire se jata h
'tara.
Tara bck turn hoti h
'kya h?
Kya krne aaye ho?
Vijay'ek 7th do swal..
Tara use guse me dekhti h,
Vijay'aacha,main btata hu.
Wo Tum chat pe thi isliye aaya hu.
Wo tumne mujhe phle kyn ni
btaya ki tum mujhse pyar krti
ho..?
Tara'kyn btati?
Tumhein khud ehsas ni hua kya?
Vijay'kbi us trh se dekha ni.
Tara'ab aadhi adhure kapdo me
tere samne aaungi tb us njr se
dekhega mujhe.
Uday dhire se'ye tara jitni skal se
sharif lgti h utni hi shaitan h.
Manyata'face se to tere bi
masumiyat jhalkti h,lekin h ek nu.
K
Jay'kamina.
Manyata'ha ni to.
Jagat'waah,tumbi to yhi ho.
Vijay'ab.
Tara'ab kya?pyar kisi or se shadi
kisi or se.
Vijay inocently'bache kisi or se.
Tara'tu such me kamina h.
Vijay'ye 3 pati tujhe mtlb tu 3bar
shadi kregi..
Tara shockd'kyn main 3 bar shadi
kyn krugi.
Vijay'ekpyar se,dusre tere papa ki
pasnd se,3rd tere bache k lye.
Tara preshan'hy waaheguru,ha
main kitta 3 shadi.bs
Khush ab ja.
Vijay sitng d knee'or agar ye
3quality kisi ek me ho to kya
khyal h g?
Tara suddn'aisa ka...
Vijay tu beitha kyn h?
Vijay'o yar itni aachi gf ni khona
chahta,tu meri chamakchalo
bnegi..?
Tara'menu asli jwab sunna h.
Vijay'i love u 2 g.
Tara happily use hug krleti h.
'tu jeisa bi h,mujhe bchpan se hi
bhoot pasnd h'ha ni to.
Wo dono hug krke khade h.
Sb claping krte huye aate h..
Jagat'oye hoye,mil gye do dil.
Uday'rangeela-rangeeli mil gye...
Manyata'ab tara ni bulayege.
Jay'ab to bhabhi shabhi
bulayenge..
Akash'jay shabhi ni bhabhi jyada
beter h.
Unanti'wow,wht cute couple.
Akash'yar meri wali bilkul vijay
jeisi h,nasmjh..
H.
Uday'arey bn jayegi,bs tu deir mt
kriyo...
Bol diyo jaldi.
Akash'koshish kruga.
Jagat'phr to ho gya.
Rhne de...
Vijay'chalo niche jaldi wrna koi
dekh lega yar.
Phr sb rum me jate h,abi jaane
wale hote h to unke rum me
komal khadi h,
'arey manyata jay tara vijay kha
ho sb. Or drwaaze pe uday jagat
khade h.
Manyata hste huye aati h 'ander
chal
Tbi komal bckturn hone wali hoti
h,tbi manyata chilai h'aa..
Komal bckturn hoti h'hi raba kya
hua?
Or uday jgat akash unanti chup
jate h.
Jay'maa,tum ander ho,main bahr
dhundh ri thi.
Jagat use preshan h'lekin bahar
keise milegi ye to ander h..
Manyata'hm bahar dundh rhe
the,kuch kam tha kya?maa.
Uday'ja tara k baap k lye pkwaan
bna,wo khayega.
Wo dono hste h.
Manyata unhe aankhe dikhati h.
Komal'ha chal tara k papag k lye
pkwaan bnane h.
Phr sb hste h.
Komal'yha kaun-2 hs rha h.
Manyata'main or jay hi to h.
K:ni koi or bi h.
Vijay'ha to main or tara h
na,bhagwan ne hmein bi hsne ki
shakti di h.
Komal:tara pckng krlena,kal
savre-2 jana h.
Tara'g aunty..
Komal'manyata jay kitchen me
aajana...
Manyata'g maa.
Wo chali jati h.
Sb phr ander jate h
Manyata'menu tnsn ho ri h,kya
kru?
Uday'ek kam kr bahar apne papag
ko khin bg krde.
Jay'kyn?
Jagat'jo kha h wo kr..
Manyata'ok.
Chal jay tara.
Jay tara tum kitchen me jao.
Vijay tu chat pe jake ro.
Vijay'kyn?
Uday'ja ro,ye tere baap ko uper
bhejegi.
Jagat'wo tere me bg hojayege.
Akash'jitna chup kraye chup mt
hoiyo.
Manyata'arey vijay k rone se
papag dukhi ho jate h.
Jaa na.
Wo chala jata h...
Uday'akash unanti ko leke ghr
leke ja..
Wo bi chale jate h..
Manyata'papag wo vijye chat pe
jake ro rha h.
Br'kyn?
Manyata'kh rha h Aapne kuch kha
h.
Br'maine kya kha h?
Manyata'menu ki pta jao puch lo.
Br'ye khota bi pta ni ldkiyo ki trh
rone lgta h.
Devendr tu beith,main aata hu.
Devendr'o g thik h.
Aram se mnaiyo.
Br wo chale jate h,
Wo jeise jate h weise uday jagat
aate h.
Aaps me bat krte huye.
Uday'arey bda bura hua.
Jagat'un uncle ki to halat hi
khraab thi. Manyata'arey kya
hua?
Uday'o g railway station pe ek
baap beti punjab ja rhe the to .
Devendar'to kya hua g?
Jagat'to pucho mt kuch gunde
aaye or ldki k baap ko pkad k
pitne lge..
Manyata'haayee rabba.
Uday janbujh k tej bolta h'or pta h
hmein lga ki wo gunde pit jayenge
uncle se qki uncle bde mote tagde
the,pr ulta whi pit gye.
Devendr'o lekin wo pit kyn rhe
the?
Jagat'jwan beti thi,uthake legye.
Devendr soch me
Manyata'o teri uncle g kal to
aapke 7th tara bi jayegi.
Wo dar jate h.
'arey ha kal to menu bi jana h.
Uday'soch lijiye uncle,wo uncle bi
aapki trh the,or ldki to ldki hoti h.
Manyata'dono pke kamine h.
Devendar dra hua khada hota h'o
lekin aap log kaun ho?
Uday'arey sry,hm to glt ghr me
khade h,
Jagat'sry g,hm to apne uncle ko
rokne ja rhe the..
Hm chalte h
Uday'or ha ye gunde hmesha
station pe rhte h..,
Bye g.
Wo chale jate h.
Manyata'ye duniya bdi khraab h.
Ha ni to.
Wo bolkd chali jati h.
Devendr preshan...
Manyata apne rum me,uski bad
pe uday ka gft rkha h,wo uthati h,
Uday kidki pr'dekhlo pasnd ayega..
Manyata smile nd uday pases hr
smile with wink.
Bye.
Continueos
Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 work pari..👏..pls continue soon...😊
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Fantastic update Pari.👍🏼
Oh Vijay's love confession to Tara was so cute.😉
UV -Jagat bonding was mindblowing.👏
Jagat teased Jay all the time.😆
I liked the update.👏
Thanks for the funny n romantic update.😊
🤗
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reserved i m new reader😆itne sare chapters read karne hain😉tu boss 3 4 din de do muje parne ke liye😆ek din mein tu read karne se rhi😆silly me🤪res i will add my comment after reading all ur chapters😃love u🤗
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Originally posted by: maneet..

Hi,everyone..
I know sbki jaan kha rkhi h maine,itna manveer love dihka k sbke stomach me butterfly fly krti h,mere bi.
Pr wo kya h na main adat se mjbur hu...
Ek ss khtm hua to 2ra aana to bnta h...

So i m start new manveer ss...
Two heart:that beat as one...:-)

CHARCTER SKETCH...
Uday:a punjabi boy..he s a vry rich man,he s naugty boy,glti krke sikhta h hmesha.,bt wo bhoot preshan h apne ghrwalo se..
Manyata:a punjabi grl..9wories,always njoy all moments,fun loving grl,she s also rich...
Jaynandini:manyata's young sis.iski ek bst frnd h wo h manyata..both r bst frnds...
Jagat:uday s young bro.
Jagat srf uday ki bat sunta h bs...dono bhaiyo me bhoot pyar h..
Vijay:manyata-jay's bro..in 3no bhai-bhno ki tikdi jha jmti h wha bs hungama hota h..
Unanti:uday-jagat sis.dono bhai ko bhut pyar krti h.

Gr:uday 's father...
Vry strict,laws k bde skht h..sb kuch rule-regulation se chahiye..
Maya:uday's mother hmesa apne bacho ko bchati rhti h..

Br:manyata 's father,he s also punctual person h,sb kam tmeez se chahiye or tym pe.
Komal-manyata mother:apne pati k niyam kanoon aaj tk ni smjh pai...
Tara:vijay frnd.
She s vry pretty..
Manyata-jay k 7th uski bhoot bnti h...

Akash:he s uday-jagat clge frnd..he love unanti bt nt cnfess hr...

I hope u lyk it..
If nt interstead so ignore it...
Do cmnt..
Give ur suggestion...
Thank u.
Love u all..

Pari

wow nice character sketch👏uday punjabi mundaand manyta also punjabipunjabi mast punjabi😉😆jai or manyta friends 👍🏼thank god😆jaggat uday bro wooo 😆akash as a unnati lover and he not confess his love🤪kia ye uday ke jiju banne wala hai ab😆lets see agala chapi read karne ke baad hi pata chale ga😉pari awesome work friend 👏sisi tu ab meri ek hi hai sona ❤️tu best friends😉🤗
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fab update can't wait for the fresher party know :)
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freshers party sounds vryy intersting!!!!! gr88 workk pari!!!!!!! wndering wat will happen in freshrs party!!!!!!
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-38


Uday'papag ab 5din ho gye.
Gr'to
Jagat'to kya?hmari sja khtm.
Gr'ha to
Uday'aaj to bolne ka din h kya?
Hm ab clge ja skte h.
Gr'ni or 5 din ruko.
Jagat'kyn?kaun si khushi me?
Gr'5 din km the.
Uday'sja na ho gai,wo kya bolti h,ha

Jagat-uday'ha sja na ho gai candy ho gai.
Aaye din bdhate rhte h.
Maya'bs kro na,ab jane do.
Ds'maya,itni pyar se mt bol,ye na bolta rhega phr bi clge jaynge ye.
Gr looked ds
Uday'ha aatankwadi{terorist}ki trh kya dekh rhe ho,shi kh ri h wo.
Gr'5 din ka clge work keise manege kroge?
Jagat'wo
Akash dhire se'5din ka kam to cover h.
Uday jagat ds unanti shockd...

Gr'mtlb.
5din to gya ni koi.
Akash'mtlb uncle kam cover ho jayega.

Uday relief'akash tera kuch krna pdega..
Tu chal bahar.
Jagat'papa hm ja rhe h.
Uday'hm aapko bta rhe the,puch ni rhe the..
Wo dono ds maya ko chick kis krke bye bolke jane lgte h.
Uday gr se'aise kya dekh rhe ho,meri trh chikna bn k rha kro..
Gr'kyn?
Uday'tbi kis kruga.
Ha ni to.
Jagat'shaving krte ni ho..
Uday'ha ni to
Gr'oye khote jao yha se...
Unanti'bye papag.,
Akash'bye
Jagat'ha chal teri bye hm krate h.
Maya'are jagat akash ko preshan mt krna.
Uday'hm jan se mar denge ise.
Chl
Maya'hy bhag
Ds'bhagwan,mjak kr rhe the wo.

Wo sb chale jate h.

Br'chal devendar jaldi chl train chali jayegi.
Vijay'tere baap ko apni jan kimti ni h kya?
Tara'pta ni,manyata rok lena.
Jay'kyn? Dar ri h,ruk jayegi.
Manyata'ha fresher party me vijay k 7th tujhe hi dance krna h.
Ha ni to

Devendar'o tara puter kithe h?
Manyata'ye kyn bula rhe h tujhe?
Tara'wi to...
Jay'ja na..
Tara jati h
'g papag.
Br'chl beta
Devendar'ni ni brij tara ni jayegi.
Sb achanak'yupie
Tara'suchi,mtlb so sad
Komal'pr kyn bhai shaheb.
Devendar'wo g,dusri bar aaunga tara k veer g k 7th shoping bi krke jaunga yha se.
Tb tara ko lechaluga.
Manyata'aacha yhi bat h ya kuch
D:o beta g,bs yhi bat h.
Manyata'kb tk dubara aaoge?
Devendr'main bs 5din bad aajaunga.
Vijay'ye to bhoot jyada h uncle.
D:o to 3 din bad aajaunga...
Tara'or bol jyada h.
Pagal.
Manyata'uncle g jyada ka mtlb km hota h hmari laugage me...
Devendar'ni beta 3din kafi h.
Tara'papag aapna or ki trh bde smjhdar ho,5din phle bola tha 5din hi.
Manyata'ha ekdum shi.
Devendar'aacha thik h 5din.
Bs.
Wo phr chale jate h..

Br'ye isko kya ho gya achanak.
Jay'jo hua aacha hua.
Chl rum.
Wo sb rum me jate h.

Tara'5din bad main
Jay'arey abi se tnsn mt le.
5din to h
Vijay'ha,fresher party njoy krege.
Tara'yar lekin
Manyata'hy rabba,tara tu chinta mt kr in 5din me party bi hogi,msti bi hogi or meri bhabhi bi bnegi.
Tara hapy'wow!keise?
Manyata'vijay k 7th mariage kr liyo.
Vijay'kya?pagal h,bina sbki permision,blesing k.
Ni ni
Jay'vijay bhai kbi to mard bno.
Manyata'blesing permision ka kya aachar daloge,agar tara ni milegi to.
Tara'ha mst h
Vijay'kya mst h?
Had h,weise hi papag k saamne khde hone ki himmat ni h,ye kam krke to wo mardalege.
Tara'mujhe bi tere jeise ullu se pyar hona tha.
Jay'arey tara ullu jgat ka nam h yar,vijay bhai,chinta mt kro.
Manyata'ha bhai main hu na.
Tara'wo uday jagat Unanti,akash ko bi bula lena.
Jay'kyn?
Vijay'ha bula lena,wo rhege to dar ni lgta.
Manyata smile'yd bat to h..
Or ds ko bi bulayenge..

All say ha ni to.
Manyata say'gadhe taiyar rh ek or plan k liye..
Jay'mja ayega..
Vijay'arey dar lg rha h.
Tara'wow,meri shadi,bhaag k.


Manyata'clge chale.
Chl tara.
Tara'mujhe to akela ghr pe
Vijay'jb bhaag k shadi krne ko taiyar h,to clge jane me koi burai ni...
Manyata'ha bs clas me mt jaiyo,clge me to aa skti h.
Tara'chal phr.

In clge park
Uday'aaj ye fuljhadiya itni late kyn h?
Jagat'phr se khin unke baap ne
Uday'agar sja di hogi to,uski to ab kheir ni.
Jagat'or thoda wait kr te h,wrna ghr to pta hi h.
Uday'abey akash idhr aa teri jwan bhoot khul gai h.
Akash'bolta hu tb problem,ni bolta tb bi problem
Unanti'kya kha k aaya h pujab se,such me bhoot bolne lga h..

Park me kuch ldke ldki football khel rhe h,to footbal akash k muh pe lgta h.
Ek ldki'oye bal de..
Akash chup use dekh rha h
Uday'sale kamine ab bolna.
Akash guse me'tera nauker hu aake lele
Jagat'arey baap re mindblwng krodh{angry}h yar.

To wo jo team khel ri h,wo saari us ldki ki side se aate h.
Ek ldka'khelega ek game.
Akash'mujhe ni interest
Ldka'ye tere frnds bde hy fy h,inhe bi ni aata.
Uday'abey o aankho k andhe,tum 8 ho,hm 4 h.
Ldki'to kya hua,khin se dhundh lo 4 or.
Jagat'ha unka hi to wait h.
Uday'bol to aise ri h,jeise tu players paida kr ri h.
Uday jagat unanti akash laugh...

Ldki'bol na khelna ni aata,or tere 7th koi ni khelega,
Smjha ab niklta bn..

Manyata dur se'oye,pagal.
Uday look
Hr.
Uday'kya h?
Jagat'aa gai pinky tu?
Jay'puch rha h ya bta rha h..
Vijay'uday soch kya rha h?
Uday'yhi ki finaly tara ruk hi gai..

Wo sb dur se baatein kr rhe h..

Ldka'chal ridz,ye kha takker k h,hm khelte h.

Uday look manyata'kya khti h?
Manyata'ghamand todna jruri h..
Jagat'jaldi bol taiyar ho sb.
All say ofcourse yar
We r frnds..

Uday'oye ruko tum sb,tum 8 hm bi 8.
Chal ek game ho hi jaye...

Aditya'main captain hu apni team ka.
Uday jagat laugh'hmare me hm 8tho hi captain h..
Ridz'wht?
Akash'ni khlena to bol de,faltu ki baatein mt kr.

Raj'ok..
Chalo...

Ldke(jagat,uday vijay nd akash}remove shrt.
Or vest pe khlte h.
Jagat'oye pinky mja ayega,jeet gye na to tu party diyo.
Uday'or har gye to lal mirchi party degi..
Manyata'muqo ki party dungi.
Uday jagat'wo to hm bi return krege.

All laugh.
Uday'ball kisi k pas bi jaye,aaps me hi ghumate rhna.
Vijay'ghumate rhna,goal ni krege kya.
Jagat'ye akash vijay ko to to bandh dena chahiye..
Tara'are ghumate rhna mtlb pas krna ek dusre ko.
Jay'apni team me pas krna.
Jagat'arey wah,pinky..
Smjhdar h.
Uday'jeetege na
Manyata'jrur jeetenge.


Phr sb start krte h khelna..
Sb clge k studnt khade h.
Dekh rhe h...

Rajeev footbal kick krta h..
Phr sb bal k piche..
Kick krne k lye bhaagte h.

Usi bich me uday ki team baatein kr ri h.
Tara'ye bda ajeeb game h..
Unanti'arey vijay kick mar akash ki trf,kyn ajeeb h?

Jagat'akash bal h,teri gf ni dekh mt kick mar,'arey ha bda ajeeb h game.

Akash'bal to unke pas gai..
Uday'tere pairo ki mehrbaani h.
Wo phr ball k
Piche pd jate h..

Wo dusri team bal ko chod ni ri h..
Manyata uday jagat jay
Ye 4ro unke team circle me guse k ball return apni team me late h.
Uday jgat unki team ko dekhte hu'arey baari-2 khlege na...

Wo phr khlene lgte h.
Jay'ha to kyn ajeeb h ye game.
Manyata'ek ball,pkad pkad ball ko.
Ek ball k piche 14 log pde h.

Akash'hm to 8 hi h.
Uday ball ko chod k akash ka sir pkad leta h,jagat bi aata h..
Bhai ball ko chod phle is akash ko gaol krte h.

Jay'arey tum dono ki wjh se muqo ki party milegi.
Khelo na.,.

Uday jagat phr khelne lgte h.

Uday'kamine,8 hm h to ye dusri team alian thodi h.
Ye bi to insan h.
Gadhe
Tara'of oh,hmesha mistake gadha to manyata tera nam rkha h,ye to fatichar h.

Khlte tym me all laugh.

Rajeev'bde ajeeb h ye log,hs or bol ke khel rhe h..

Al say'hm to aise hi h..
Uday'jagat ball pkad,
Wo aage uday jagat ball ko kick krte h...

Jagat'bhai,krde goal.
Jaldi,ball k piche bukhe pde h.

Manyata'uday style bad me dikhaiyo,goal kr.
Uday goal krne k close h,manyata ki trf dekhta
Dis s 4 u..
Nd also u jagat..

Jagat'muuuhh.
Bhai.
Jay'abey o wo aage se aagya,jaldi goal kr...

Uday k aage ek dusri team ki ldki ball lene aati h..
Uday'arey bad me mujhe pkad liyo.
Jagat'malum h bhai ko dekh k cntrl ni hota.
Ridima irirtate hoke'abey chup.
Uday phr jaldi se long kick krta h,nd finaly goal ho jata h...

Jagat'ja ab le le ball..
Jagat'oye pinky party pkki,khane pine wali party.
Jay'yupie...
Chlo canteen..

Uday'lalmirchi chinta mt kr ek muque ki party to de skti h.
Manyata runing uday ki Trf,'bad me q?abi dungi ek muqa.
Uday manyata bhaagne lgte h..

Uday bhagte bhaagte apni shrt phnta h,manyata use pkad ri hoti h tbi uska pair sleep hota h
'aa..
Aa..
Uday bck turn hota h,nd then use catch krta h,dono niche girte h...

Both eyecntc
Manyata ko ghabrahat ho ri h,wo phr uthne ki koshish krti h,again gir jati h.
Uday smile kr rha h use dekh k.
Uday bolta h'agr tera muqa itna haseen ho to main to roj taiyar hu..
Manyata feel nervous'gadhe,mjak mt kr uth na meri chunni dbi h..
Uday'phle kyn ni pta chala iske bare me,hm roj aise muqa-2 khlege.
Manyata'kamine,uthna.
Uday phr use dekhta-2 uthta h,wo bi uthti h.
Or wo jane lgti h,tbi uday uska hath pkadta h or apne pas khinchta h'sun,muqa to bta keise marti h.
Manyata bond d hand'hmm..
Btati hu,wo phr uske bck pe hit krke'aise marte h..
Bhaag jati h..

Jagat'ay manyata ye pinky ko apne jeise kapde phnaaya kr,bhaagne me easy hogi..
Jay'q?
Jagat'chal hm bi muqa-2 khlte h.
Wo jagat ko pkdti h ek hit krti h,ho gya chal canteen.
Akash'ja ab khud ball uthale ridz.
Ha ni to
Sb phr hste huye jate h.
Uday 2dusri team se'prctice ki jrurt h...
Krte rho.
Bye.
Jagat'bye bye..
Uday jagat'hm to paidaishi khiladi h..

Continues
Pari

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