The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOW THE NEWS IS THAT IT IS NOT ENDING ON 26 JULY BUT GOING TO END 2 AUGUST
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: DAPS

hey rocker12 ur ff was amazing i read it in one go today i was very good plz pm me when upadate the nex part thankx

thanx dear will surely pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys first of all sorry for updating late
so here is chap 5

chap 5

sneha: ran out of the party and was crying while somebody touched her she was scared like hell it was mr verma

mr verma: what happened why are u crying ahh for me dunbe I am alright and that freaking bas***d wont be alright and I am really sorry for my behavior

sneha: now I got what I want I want to hurt him like he had done it to me today so what can u do to hin

mr verma : well I don't know but I will figure out talking to some of my friends but I am sorry I caused probs for akash ill fix it soon

sneha: (in her mind ) u were having hopes with him ahh he was right he is a looser and didn't listen to his talks

shruti arrived sneha what are u doing here comon lets go without letting snneha and mister verma saying a wird too her to her home

on the other hand

now uday has realised it was somebody elses plan a mastermind who he has always considered his idol watching at the bracelet he remembered 3 years back he saw dadisaab buying that brecelet with initial yh(your highness) for manyata and put it in the cupboard where she kept all her gifts and he know there couldn't be another one of this type then how come she have it he called taimoor prestige jewelers and asked for the design which dadisaab has ordered and his doubt was cleared it was only one of its type he called dadisaab

dadissab: kahama ghani hukum

ds: yuvraj kia baat hae beta apko hamari kaunsi baat napasand ae beta ap jante hae hume apne ghar walo ki advice se farq nahi parta but ur advice matters me a lot u knw na (ds knew when he called her hukum instead of dadisaab he wasn't happy with her decision and she always cared for his advice coz she knew however manipulative she had but he was her student and students are always the greter achievers than there teachers

uday: hukum hume apse kal ke kal milna hae zaroori bat discuss krni he hum kal hi arahe hae

ds: beta u are always welcome but ap humse phn pe bhe to bath krskte hae

uday: not this matter its a lot serious

call cut

ds: has sensed it he has found out the truth which she had hidden and knew its btr to tell him all the truths bcoz he was only which she could trust in this matter after all it was his responsibility

where as sneha reached home and was about to tell akash about everything but akash was tensed

he told her that dad has gotten a heart attack and admitted in the hospital in mumbai and here is her ticket she has to left tonight he wont be able to come as there business is going in crises he had to take care and asked her about her phone she forgot it in the party yesterday and she was already left akash dropped her at the airport

sneha : was a lot worried about her dad but was scared to see that yuvraj again in the boarding in the same flight as hers she was taken a back and for her surprise her seat was next to him

uday: he sunshine u are being too much possessive following me everywhere and winks at her

sneha: in anger I don't want to talk to u know I am in no mood pls stop with ur nonsense and tears rolled down her cheek

uday: he cant see her in tears as she was only to be his he knew that with the way ds talked about it. Sorry dear I might have hurted u a lot really sorry for this and if u are crying bcoz how I behaved with I am really sorry again and if there is any problem let me knw can be solved in few minutes

sneha: she calmed down and was shocked wat she heard

do u have a split personality disorder sometimes so harsh sometimes sweet she was ready for a sarcasm but instead she was shocked what she heard

uday: yup I kind of I can judge people at its best but dunno what to do when they cry or they are sad I have bo one to teach me that the only thing which my father told me that power could change only lives and I am in search of all pwer I could get coz I was helpless when my mum was in pain dieing I couldn't do any thing

sneha: with tears in her eyes don't worry she would be happy to see u that she has a son which the world don't knw but I am in same kind of state I dunno anything about my mum but my dad is in hospital he had an heart attack and being operated at the uvs

as uday took the airline phone and called doc rohan the head of the hospital

whats his namne

sneha: mr shiv mehta

uday : I want the best treatment for mr shive mehta I want that man alive at any cost understand

mr rohan: yup sir we are treating and I am going to take care of it dun worry

sneha:is it ncesarry to be harsh on people I knw it's the best hospital and I have faith in my lord hw wont let any thing happen to him

uday: that's ur mentallity dear for me there is no god

sneha:why

uday: sry cant tell u but u will knw soon

during the flight sneha slept resting her head on udays shoulder

now uday was hell confused

udays pov

he didn't knw her true identity he was hell waiting to reach mumbai to hear it all from dadisaab and wasn't able to undrstand his feelings for her

feelings what am I saying ? yuvraj udayveer hasn't had any feelings for any one but once again looking at her anjelic face rested on his shoulder he wasn't able to figure out what has happened to his calm composed mind which went numb seeing her only once as if she was the key to the lock in which he has kept his heart years ago so that no feelings could make him weaker he hated love bcoz in his view its only thing which can destroy the powerfull disturb him from his cause but she was banging that lock hard to free the uday which the world had never seen why he had felt so light tellinbg her what he felt about his mom dunno he has stopped thinking it was first yuvraj udayveers brain was at rest bcoz the more he thaught the more questions arrives and he has no answers to them……….

sincerely

rocker12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow mam awesome as always...loved it n cont choon pliz ha soon ok.n keep up the good work Rocker mam.egarly waiting for the next update: p
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swini01

Wow mam awesome as always...loved it n cont choon pliz ha soon ok.n keep up the good work Rocker mam.egarly waiting for the next update: p

glad u liked it but i knw it was boring next update would be all cleared up yar but u hav given awesome promo updatre kb karogee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
please update as soon as possible and please make it long next time this was super short was it was mindblowing please update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rocker12

glad u liked it but i knw it was boring next update would be all cleared up yar but u hav given awesome promo updatre kb karogee


nope itz not boring ok...i like it oops sorry yaar i loved it.so dont u dare ok.n thanks yaar.cont ummm dont know...ki kab??but not today yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsom part i loved it will be waiting for the next one
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

please update as soon as possible and please make it long next time this was super short was it was mindblowing please update as soon as possible

thaanx alot will surely update soon and long cant say anything about it for now but will try my best
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsom part i loved it will be waiting for the next one
and thanks for the pm
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thanx will update soon

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