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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

omggg!!! i am lucky or what was missing checkmate so much just finished reading checkmate 1 and 2..and omgg this was a surprise i was about to comment that plz cham UPDATE...

omggg...i will read it right now...

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

😲 CHAM???

i will faint...OMG!!how is this even possible...why?i mean what?omggg!!😲😲

she is his wife??😲and u updated after A LONG TIME now please update as soon as possible or i will die with curiosity..and she remember everything..that's good..but this aditya!😡😡

and sonali said that mana met him at jagat's birthday party the same party i guess u mentioned in last update or some other!! 😲 omggg this chapter was a big shocker..😲 my eyes literary popped out..i mean she is his wife!! 😲 😕

and where is uday??😕 oh man!!update soon cham..please please please!

this update was brilliant awesome amazing and suspense was at its peak..omgg...i am gonna read it again..

was missing checkmate sooo damn much u won't believe i read it so many times..😳please update soon..

right now i am in shock thori der bad shaid kuch samjh ay..hayee cham mujhy abhi parhna hai next chapter...🤔

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

This is the most intriguing ff on this forum. I love it. This chapter was SUPERB 👍🏼. Continue soon, I'm dying to know how Manyata ended up being married to Aditya.

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

woahh...mystery buddy you updated...

okz will comment after reading cham🤗

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

i just read it again...😳

and now i am trying to understand..and i guess i am getting it..🤔actually i get it...🤓

welldone cham!!amazing!!

amazing superb cham..👏👏👏

and about your last note..

no dear not at all u r not gonna take any rest start writing the next chapter...

it was lovely,shocking,Awesome...⭐️⭐️

cross the other three please,those words are not at all for your updates as in sleepy,ahem my eyes literary popped out after reading that M is his wife and then boring,well i have never read anything more interesting than this and pathetic.forget about it impossible..

waiting eagerly cham..really please this time UPDATE SOON!!😳

Edited by -JEHAN- - 12 years ago

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

you have taken this ff to a whole different level of vengeance and hatred. Aditya seems to have crossed all limits, for the first time I feel Aditya should'nt die this time, coz death is much less of a punishment for him.He is should survive, but have a life more pathetic than death.

Again a suggestion, please also mention the date of ur update in ur title.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
you have taken this ff to a whole different level of vengeance and hatred. Aditya seems to have crossed all limits, for the first time I feel Aditya should'nt die this time, coz death is much less of a punishment for him.He is should survive, but have a life more pathetic than death.

Again a suggestion, please also mention the date of ur update in ur title.

I agree death is too sweet for him and I also agree with your advice, from now on I'll mention the update date when I update,
Thanks for reading :)