manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72

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snowdream

@snowdream

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

yup wonderful wonderful wonderful...👏...

.pari it was a gr8 update..😊.

thanks 4 such a lovely SS..😊...🤗

hats off for ur imagination n also punctuality in updating👏

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

its was ooosme pari 👏, thanks for giving us such a wonderful ss,the story was so nice , loved it. 😛. I'm gonna miss this ss pari , but as they say all good things come to an end 😊

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afreshbegin

@afreshbegin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Yaay finally Manyatha ko justice mila

Beautiful update dear

thanx for these regular updates

Akash ko aisi hi sazaa milni chahiya tha

Aur Mr C bhi finally sudha gayee

M ki ye dialoue was my fav:

Manyata'akash udna aacha hota h,lekin tumhari aazadi me or meri aazadi me frq h.

Tum apne ghamand me the,ki mujhe marke tum bch jaoge,pr phr bi tum whi ho..
Tum ye bhul gye the ki tumhare ghr me bi maa-bhan h.

Kya glti thi meri akash,'main jwan thi,main suder thi,main ldki hu kya wo meri glti h...
Manyata cryng.
'maine kbi ni socha tha ki maine jise apne itne aache dost samjhe wo hi mere 7th.
Tumne to dosti ka matlb hi bdal diya...

M n such kaha ki kya galthi thi uski infact har woh rape victim ki kya galti hoti hai jo usse rape kiya jaath hai

Tumhare story ne emotional bana diya hai

Aur last part was too romantic

Uday ne such kaha hai ki ye unke liye sk nayi shuruvat hai

aur woh Soulmates hai

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pwincess_sumi

@pwincess_sumi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Awesum update I'm really gonna miss this ss this one was one of my fav's ... Luved this update manyata got jstice akash is in jaiil n every1 will be happy now thnx pari 4 giving us such a nice ss ...u're a superb writer