manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 34

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awww..i love ur cmnt.aise with pic cmnt mujhe bhoot awsum lgte h.
Thank u.muuhhh...
@chitra dear akash k lye galiya sunna mujhe bhoot pasnd h...lol.lekin jab iski pitai hogi tb hm sb milke celebrate krge.
Ha ni to.
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brilliant update dear awesome oooh that akash plz kill him soon :)
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Originally posted by: princessnia

awesome update Pari dear.like manveer scene haye.n that Akash ughhh bloody bas***d(sorry for my language hehe).but nice one dear.but no ahem ahem.yikkes i want a bed scenw again.u know na mera mind actually rehta kaha hai.so pliz pliz pliz.n M haww lagta hai meri aue manyta ki bohout milti hai.CONT SOON 🤗


yupp true Akash bas***d..n Pari i pliz bed ahem ahem dedo na phirse:p
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd me:Soulmate

Part-47

Manveer sleeping..

'akash cum in rum nd say'manyata tumhein to main jeetne ni dunga...
Jay'ryt akash manyata tumhein to main jan se mar dungi,main uday ko itna mjbur krdungi ki wo tumhein chod dega..
Akash'main apne aap ko bchane k lye kuch bi kr skta hu manyata'main kisi ko kuch ni hone dungi,or uday ko to bilkul ni..'
Jay'uday agar mera ni to kisi or ka bi ni..
Manyata'mein rhu ya na rhu uday hmesha mera rhega..
Akash'usse bdhiya uday is duniya me na rha na tumhara na jay ka.
Jay'ryt,main is manyata ko khush ni dekh skti..
Akash'uday soya h,isko hmesha k lye sula deta hu,wo knife nikalta h,manyata say'ni akash tum aisa kuch ni kroge,main mar jaugi uday k bina..
Jay manyata ko pkdti h'hm whi chahte h..
Akash evil laughng'nd knife wo uday k stomach me gusa deta h...'
Manyata bhoot tej chilati h'uday nd wo uth k beith jati h..
Uday bi dar jata h,wo bi uth k beith jata h'manyata,kya hua?
Manyata uday ko dekhti h,'tum thik ho?
Uday cnfused'ha main to thik hu,tum kyn?
Manyata uday ko hug krleti h,or rone lgti h,'main tumhein kuch ni hone dungi.

Uday'manyata meri trf dekho,koi bura sapna dekha kya?
Manyata'ha,usne tumhein jan se mar diya...wo phr se use hug krleti h.
Uday smile'aisi kha kisi ki himmat jo tumse bina puche,mujhe jan se mar de.
Manyata'mujhs se kbi dur mt jana uday,ab tum ni to kuch ni...
Uday'manyata meri saanse,meri dhadhkan,pyr,zindgi sb tum ho manyata..
Main tumhare pas hu hmesha...
Manyata uski baaho me simti hui,wo so jati h.

Uday thout'kya bat h manyata,mujhe se kya chupa ri ho?
Mujhe pe bharosa rkho manyata main tumhein kuch ni hone dunga...
Manyata thout'uday ko tightly hug krke rkhti h'mujhe tumpe bharosa h uday lekin main khin such btaya to tum mujhse dur..ni..
Both thout sayng
'TUMHARE LIYE TO MAUT SE BI LD JAUNGA/JAUNGI MAIN...'

Akash nd jay in rum
'akash tum jo krne aye ho kro,kuch aisa kro ki uday
Akash'arey jay main koshish kr rha hu,manyata ko keise uday se dur kru.
Jay'itna darna kafi ni h uske liye,kuch aisa
Akash,phsical tourchr.
Jay'ryt,akash mujhe uday chahiye.kisi bi kimat pe...
Akash'weise jay maan lo,uday manyata ko chod deta h,or agar tumse bi shadi ni ki usne to...
Jay evil'wo mera kam h akash,uday ko keise apna bnana h,wo mujhe pta h,tym lgega..pr ho jayega..
Akash thout evil smile'jay tum bhai ko paana chahti ho,or main manyata ko chup krana chahta hu,taki main bch jau...'

In mrng...
Uday calng jagat..
'jagat b carefuly kal wo kam hojana chahiye,mujhe sb kuch perfct chahiye'
Jagat'sb kuch ho jayega uday,bs kal maya k muh se hm jo sunna chahte h wo bol de..
Uday'bolegi,jb khud pe bitegi tb jrur akal thikane ayegi...
Jagat'tara-unanti ne puri taiyari kr li h,sb hojayega uday..bs manyata ka.
Uday'manyata,wo thik h jagat,jb jb uske case ki date hoti h tb tb usse jyada dar mujhe lgta h,ye soch k ki aaj phr manyata ki aankho me aashu,uske chahre pe drd..dekhna pdega...
Jagat'bye uday,tumse bat krke is case k lye or active hojata hu main...'
Cal cut..
Manyata kitchen me h,or ds aati h.
'manyata beta meri hlp krogi.
M'ha dadi kis cheez me
Jay cum' manyata tumhein kheer bnani aati h na,to plz mujhe bnana sikhao na..
Manyata smile'ha jrur jay..tum suger,dryfruits,rice,milk colect kro.
Jay sb lake rkhti h..
'lekin manyata suger to khtm h...
Ds'main store rum se leke aati hu..
Manyata'ni dadi aap aram kro,main leke aati hu.
Ds chali jati,manyata suger lene jati h.
Jeise hi wo jati h weise hi akash ek plate me suger leke aata h.kitchen me suger phle hi akash or jay ne wo suger leliya h...
Ds'arey akash suger to manyata lene gai thi store rum me,tum...
Akash'ha dadi wo bhabhi to suger mujhe deke kisi or kam me lg gai..
Ds'aacha beta..jao

Akash jata h kitchen me'jay nd akash evil smile eye cntect...

Manyata store rum me jati h,wo bhoot andhera hota h,wo lyt one krti h ni hoti.
'yha to andhera h,main candle leke aati hu...
Wo cndle lene jati h bt kisi ne door bahr se bnd krdiya h..
'drwaaza kholo,main ander hu,..kholo.

Akash ne ek poison gas rum me on kr diya h,jo dhire -2 leak ho ri h,or manyata ko mehsus bi ho ri h...
'ye keisi smell aa ri h...uski saanse dhire-2 tej ho ri h,wo apne sir ko pkd ri h,kbi darwaaza hit krti h,window ki trf bhaag ri h,uska gla sukh rha h..
Wo poison pure rum me fail rha h,manyata ki halat behalat ho rhi h..
Wo apne aap ko sambhal ni paa ri h...

Wo ek danda leti h,window ka mirror todne k lye.

Idhr uday aata h,'dadi manyata kha h aapne dekha use...
Ds'beta wo kisi kam me bg h.
Akash'bhai wo yhi khin hogi,aap ye kheer khaiye,maine or jay ne milke bnaya h..
Uday'mujhe ni khana,Manyata kha h.
Unanti'bhai,bhabhi kha h,unhe shoping krne jana tha teej ki.'
Jay'of oh,manyata hogi na khi,tum ye kheer khake btao,keisi bni h...?

Sb aate h,akash jay sbko serve krte h.
Bt uday woried ho rha h...
Ek kheer khane jata h bt ruk jata h'mujhe ni khana,manyata kha h?
Br:uday,itne pyar se serve
Komal'of oh koi aser ni hoga,jb tk wo manyata ko ni dekh lega usko chain ni milega.
Unanti'bhai tnsen mt lo,chalo hm dono dhundhte h... Uday loudly bolta h'manyata...

Jeise hi wo danda window pe marne jati h,weise hi wo uday ki awaaz sunti h,or blance bigdta h,or danda uske sir pe lg jata h...Manyata uski awaz sunti h,bt wo bol ni pati h,wo dhire-2 uday-2 bol ri h.

Uday unanti bhoot dhundhte h manyata bt koi response ni milta...

Sb preshan,jay nd akash ko chodke...
Uday hitng table,wo rone wala hota h,
Br'mil jayegi uday.
Meneka'kya pta khin tumheim chodke chali gai.
Uday bhoot tej bolta h'wo aisa ni kr skti.smjhi aap..

Sb dar jate h.
Ds'akash manyata store rum k bad kha gai.
Akash nervous'wo to mujhe...
Uday'manyata khin store me to ni,wo store rum ki trf bhaagta h,nd door bnd hota h
To use lgta h ye to bnd h yha keise?wo jaane lgta h,tbi manyata bolti h uday.or door ko hit krti h,she s faint...
Uday stop listen hr voice nd running fastly or drwaaza kholta h...
Or dekhta h manyata buri halat me pdi h,faint h..

Uday'o god,manyata,manyata,wo worid,dar gya tha...
Wo apni t-shrt remove krta h,apne face pe bnd krta h,qki use bi poison ki smel aa ri thi,or wo manyata ko apne arm pe pick krta h,or wo manyata ko apne arm pe pick krta h,or leke aata h.
Sb shocked.
Ds'manyata kya hua?
Uday'unanti dr.ko phone kro..jaldi.

Uday manyata ko rum me leke jata h...
Or use fall on krta h.nd he s pick up hr chick 'manyata plz open d eyes,manyata utho na..manyata.-

Dr.cuming...sb bahar chle jate h..

Or dr.use pumping krte h,jo poison body pe kya h wo nikalne k liye...
Uske 4head pe bndage bi krte h...

Dr.2 uday
'mr.uday manyata ko aapne ryt tym pe bahar nikal liya wrna ise admit krna pdhta,jo poison tha wo bhoot zehreela hota h...'
Uday'dr.wo thik to h.
Dr.-yes,ab koi dikkat ni h lekin plz inhe rest ki jrurt h..
Uday or kuch puch ni paa rha h,wo bs manyata ko dekh rha h,or uske pas jake beith jata h...
Uske 4head check krta h,uske hatho ko pkad k beith jata h.
Dr.smile'aap apne bete se kh dijiye sb kuch thik h,kuch ni hua unki wife ko...
Ds'g..wo uday manyata k lye kuch jyada h chinta
Dr:dikh rha h,lucky h manyata h,hr trf se...main chalti hu med.tym pe.
Komal'ofcourse...dr.thanku.

Ds:sb chalo yha se,inhe akela chod do...
Sb chale jate h...

Uday cryng,uske tear ka ek drop manyata k chick pe fall on hota h..
Nd manyata ko hosh aata h nd faintly say'uday,uday
Uday uski trf dekhta h,'manyata tum thik ho
Manyata open d eyes,nd smile'uday
Uday uski ek bi ni sunta or use hug krleta h'thank god tum thik ho...or wo manyata ko lovly kisses krta h 4head,chick pe means uske pure face pe kisses krta h...or rota-2 use hug krleta h...
Manyata bi uth k bethati h,or wo bi uday ko hug krleti h...
Phr manyata wipes hm tears nd say'i m fyn uday,tum
Uday uske hand ko tightly both bondng'
Main dar gya tha manyata,agar tumhein kuch ho jata to..
Manyata'hua to ni na,tumhein chodke main ni jaugi kbi bi...
Manyata kising hm chick nd say'i love u na,hug me,main tumhare pas hu,dar bhaag jayega...
Uday use ek child ki trh hug krleta h or manyata bi..
Uday thout'ye jiska bi kam h main use choduga ni...

Precap-maya telling truth in court...

Pari
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wow loved it caant w8 to read more
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Sorry for the late comment Pari.
Awesome update. You already knowthis is my favourite SS.
Thanks for the update & PM.
Love you.🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Loving the updates pari. Story is going absolutely brilliant! Awesome work!
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd me:Soulmate

Part-48
Its morning….
Manyata gets up yawning and rubbing
her eyes….
Nd uday capture dis moment
'ye,maine apni pari ko uthate huye capture kr lye'
Manyata smile'plz hug me na shona'
uday cum hr close kissing her chick,nd one tight hug...
'last nyt i m vry feard,mujhe lga.
Thank god.
Manyata smile'or isliye aap puri rat soye ni,mrng me jaldi uthe,breakfast leke aa gye,mujhe capture bi kr liya..ha ni to
Uday romenticaly'krna to main bhoot kuch chahta hu..pr abi ye breakfast.
Manyata naugtynes'ni ye bad me phle btao or kya krna chahta ho.?
Uday'aacha,to main bta bi skta hu..phr tum kuch bol bi ni paugi.
Manyata'bolna kyn bnd ho jayega.?
Uday'touch hr juicy lips,shes blushng.
Uday uske kareeb aata h,kiss krne k liye tbi achanak unanti bhai..main upps
Unanti ekdum se bckturn ho jati h,uday bi khada hojata h,manyata bi idhr-udhr dekhne lgti h..
Uday'kya hua?unanti.
Unanti'wo wo i m sry bhai bhabhi,darwaaza khula tha,anyway main ja ri tara k 7th...ok.
Manyata'thik h.
Uday'dhyan rkhna apna.
Unanti'by.
Wo chali jati h...

Uday'tum thik to hona.
Manyata'ha bs soch ri hu aaj court me kya hoga..?
Uday'sb thik hoga...ready ho jao..love u.
Manyata smile...

Wo ready hoti h,uday or manyata god,ds and komal ki blesings lete h..
Or jaate h.

In court
Maya nd mr.choudhry..
'latter kha h maya?
Maya'wo shayed court me submit h...
Mr.c'aaj manyata phr se ek bar bdnaam hogi..or mere bete ko thoda chain milega.
Maya evil smile'manyata ko to jail jaana hi h,uday is bat ko smjhna ni chahta...
Mr.c:chodo hmein kya?uday ki,uske ghr ki bdnaami hogi...
Tbi uday-manyata jagat phuchte h.
Mr.c'o hello mr.uday,aaj ek bar phr se apni har dekhne ko taiyar rhiye.
Uday smile'mr.c cnfidnent hona aachi bat h,over confindent hone ye glt.ek bar aapne mujhe ye bat khi thi,or wo bat aaj main aapke lye kh rha hu..
Maya'manyata,aadhe se jyada game aaj hi finish jb wo latter duniya k saamne ayega tb.
Jagat'let c..kya hota maya nd mr.c.hm bi aap bi sb idhr hi h..chale uday.
Uday'yup,
Mr.c:all d bst uday.
Uday'thanku.sir...
Wo 3no chale jate h..
Mr.c:maya jaldi aana,case shuru hone wala h.main chalta hu.
Mr.c chale jate h.
Maya bi kisi se bat krne k bad jati h court me,tbi
Tara bhagi-2 aati h
'aunty,aunty wo akansha.
Tara ko chot lgi hui h,maya uski halat dekh k upset'kya hua beta,akansha ko kya hua?
Tara'use kuch log utha k le gye'
Unanti bi aati h uske sir se hatho se khun nikal rha h
'tara maine gundo ka bhoot picha kiya,pr wo akansha ko legye.'
Maya stand lyk stone'meri beti,kha leke gye h use?she s cryng tum log jb uska khayal ni rkh skte to,use leke jate kyn ho?
Wo pagal type ho ri h..

In other side
Uday'u owner ye h wo latter jo manyata ne sing kiya tha jail me..
Mr.c:kmal h mr.uday jo chiz manyata ko bcha skti h wo aapne court me pesh krdiya..waah.

Uday'honestly mere me bhoot h mr.c...cheatng ni kr skta..
Judge'mrs.maya diwaana ko pesh kre,is mamle me unse bat ki jayegi...

Sb idhr-udhr dekh rhe h,lekin wo ni h..

Baahr maya'meri akansha ki kisi se kya dushmani thi?meri beti.she cryng alot.
Tarat'aunty police ko
Maya'ni kisi ko kuch mt btana,bdnaami hogi,kya bigaada tha meri beti ne.
Tara'aunty bigaada to manyata ne bi ni tha kisi ka,atleast aapka to bilkul bi ni..kya pta god ne uski sja..
Maya mtlb usko feel ho rha h,ki ha meri glti h...
Unanti'ldki ldki hi hoti,manyata bi to kisi ki beti hogi,..
Maya kuch ni bol ri h,wo ro ri h sun ri h.bs..
Jagat maya ko dhundta-2 baahr aata h'maya,tumhara nam liya ja chuka h ander jao,or tara unanti idhr aisi halat me.
Tara jagat ko bolti h'aunty ki beti akansha ko bchalo. Jagat'kyn?kya hua?
Unanti btati h'hm 3no ghumne ja rhe the,or 2log akansha ko uthake le gye..
Jagat'don't wory main police team
Maya'kuch ni krege aap,mujhe bdnaami ni chahiye.
Jagat fake smile'kmal h maya,beti pyari na hoke,apni izzat pyari h,weise jo tumne manyata k 7th kiya h,wo agr tumhare 7th ho rha h to kuch glt ni h.as u wsh tum court me aajao..

Maya feel guilty,cryng alot,nd wo jagat k pairo pe gir jati h'meri beti ko bchalo,plz..

Jagat unse dur jake cal krta h,'maya sb thik hojayega,team faila di h maine,tum court me aao...

Manyata witnes box me khadi h,sb maya ka hi wait kr rhe h.
Maya nter court nd wo manyata ko dekhti h,uske front manyata k 7th jo usne kiya wo sb aa rha h,or wo innocentmanyata k dekh ri h..
Wo bi witnes box me khadi hoti h.
Mr.c-ha to mrs.maya btaiye manyata ka rape hua ni,isne khud krwaya h..
Maya cntinuoly took manyata.
Judge'boliye maya,is latter me yhi likha h ki manyata ne paiso k lye apni izazt ki parwaah ni ki,or un 3no ko bdnaam krna chaha...
Manyata niche sir krke khadi h.
Maya say'ni u owner,wo latter jhuth h..
All shocked manyata vry shocked,wo fir eye cntct krti h maya se..
Maya cryng'isne kiya kya tha,kuch ni,maine paiso ko liye wo sb kiya jo ni krna chahiye tha..
Mr.c'maya ye kya bol ri ho?
Judge'jo bolna h such-2 btaiye.
Maya sb btati h,ki keise usne paiso k lye manyata ko tourcher ki,ise jhuthe latter pe iske fake sign liye,isko marte-2 iska miscourage krdiya..all truth wo sbke saamne bol deti h...
Manyata cryng alot..wo chilla ri h aa..aa..or wo rote-2 witnes box me beith gai h..
Maya bi roti h'i m sory manyata,mujhe maaf krdo..
Maine paiso ko jyada izzat di,tumhari izzat k Saamne..
Mujhe maaf krdo plz...
Manyata cryng alot,phr uday jata h uske pas'manyata,
Manyata took hs,uday bolke wo whi hug kr leti h,'uday thanku thanku.
Uday also cryng'manyata utho,plz mere lye...ye proof ho gya h ki tumne aisa kuch ni kiya..manyata plz stnd...
Uday wipes hr tears,or phr manyata khadi hoti h.
Maya'u owner,zindgi ne bhoot bda sbak sikhaya h,koi frq ni pdhta,kya sja milegi mujhe..main wo sb deserve krti hu...
She s also cryng...

All shocked.
Judge'law k sahre,law ki aad me itna ganda kam kiya aapne,kanoon ka njriya hi bdal diya aapne..
Law sbke liye brabr h,tumse tumhari degree chini jati h,3lakh tk ka jurmaana,or 7years ki sja..
Maya sittng witnes box nd cryng..
Judge'manyata tumhare 7th jo hua uske lye hm maafi maangte h,aaj is law pe court me sharm aa ri h..hmein...
Agli sunwai after 1mnth bad hogi...
Judge chale jate h.
Mr.c-maya,game s over,ye kya kr diya tumne.. Sudden akansha cum nd say'why u r cryng mom,
Maya shocked'akansha tum thik ho.
Akansha'ya i m fyn mom..u deserve mom.,manyata ki izzat utarte uarte aap ye bhul gai ki aap bi ek din maa bnegi..
I feel shame ki main aapki beti hu..wo roke chali jati h.

Maya'ye to thik h.
Jagat'sb kuch thik tha maya,phle bi abi bi..
Uday,jagat,tara nd unanti hmne milke ek plan bnaya.
Ki tumhari beti ko kidnap kiya jaye.
Uday'kidnap,ni bs ghr me rkha jaye.akansha ko sb such btaya hmeine use bi apne plan me shamil kiya.
Mr.c.:ye glt h.
Uday'glt to wo bi h jo aap kr rhe ho.
Tara'aunty hmare pas
Maya'jo bi kiya sb thik tha,wo manyata k pas Jati h,'manyata zindgi ajab gjab k rang dikhati h...
Mujhe lga pgr se hm ni milege,lekin itne saalo bad hmara phr saamna hua...
Wo uday ka hath pkdti h or manyata ka hath ek dusre k hath me deti h
'manyata zindgi,aise jeevansathi bdi kismat se milte h tum lucky ho,kbi juda mt hona...
Chalo jagat...7th saal ki zindgi ab jail me...
Jagat'ye bat such h,jeisa kroge weisa bharoge...bt i m hapy ki tum smjh to gai jo hua wo glt hua...
Mr.c jealous hoke chale jate h...

Continuoes

Pari
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Ufff kya update hain!!
Read nearly half of ur ss in a go!!
Loved it!!
Ab us akash ka bhi kuch karo na!!
Edited by Gowri05 - 13 years ago

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