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Manveer SS
Without no life:u nd me:soulmate

Part-21

Uday gusse me jay k ghr jane lgta h tbi,komal aati h,uday ab kha ja rhe ho?
U:maa wo jay,wo suddn manyata ko aate huye dekhta h..wo chup ho jata h,or beith jata h...

Ds:uday,ye tie itne ajeeb tarike se kyn phni h?
Uday'ni to shi h..

Manyata ne phnaya hota h to use ajeeb lgta h,ki tia to such me tedi h.
K:kya?shi h,mrng me tumhara papa ne bi tia glt phna h bola tha,lekin tum chale gye ansuna krke unki bat ko..

Uday manyata ko dekhta h'ni,maa main savre jaldi me tha...or jaldi me ye tia bi phn li thi...

Manyata thout'ise pta tha ki tia glt h phr bi meri mehnet lgwai h'...

Uday'maa main change krke aata hu.
Komal'pta ni ise kya ho gya h,tia to ghr me sbse aachi yhi fold krta h or aaj khud hi...
Ds:arey jane de,jaldbazi me hojata h...

Manyata guse me rum me jati h'jhuth kyn bola sb se,meri glti apne sir pe kyn liya..
!or pure raste tum jaise gye ho,omg...
Wo ek saans me boli ja ri thi,tbi uday uska mouth pe hath rkhke k use chup krwata h..
U:shhh..chup.

Phli bar tumne mujhe tia phnaya tha,to keise isko utar skta tha...
To wo apna hath hta ta h,manyata phr shuru 'arey maine phnaya to iska mtlb kya jeisa phnaugi,weisa phn k chle jaoge.'

Uday hsta h uski baatein sunke'ha mere liye jo kam tum krogi,wo kam main sanjo k rkh lunga..
M:mtlb.
U:mtlb ye ki tia,jeisi tumne phnai thi weisi h..or main ise coverd me aise hi rkh rha hu...
M:tum pagal ho..wo jane lgti h,tbi uday bolta h.
Jay kya bolke gai h. Manyata 'ni kuch ni..

U:mujhse chupane ki jrurt Ni h...mujhe pta h or main jay k ghr ja rha hu...
Manyata'kya krne,kya khoge usse,usne jo kha guse me kha,agar uska dil tuita h to bolne ka haq h use..

Uday'main tumhare baare me kuch glt brdast ni kr pa rha hu.
M:to brdaast krna sikho,qki puri duniya k saamne besharmi k itne parde uthege tb tumhein ehsaas hoga,ki tumne kya kiya h...
Uday'main ja rha hu. Manyata 'agr jay k pas gye ya kuch is bare me usse bat ki to,hmari dosti khtm..ha ni to..
Wo bolke chali jati h...
Uday use dekhta rhta h,.'manyata bol ri h ye,trust ni ho rha h..bt jo bi aacha h...'

Vijay 2 jay
'jay bhai,ab bhul bi jao,jo hua..
Tum uday ki kismat me ni ho..
Jay:shut up vijay bhai,wo manyata ko aap jante kitne dino se ho jo aaj hmse pyari ho gai wo...
Vijay:jitna bi jante h,wo bhoot sidhi,or innocent h..uske 7th...
J:jo hua h wo uske 7th hua h,lekin mere 7th itna bura kyn?
Ni vijay bhai,uday ko sbak sikhana pdega...usi k ghr me rh ke...
V:kya krna chahti ho?dekho agr manyata or uday ki life me koi problem aai to..
J:vijay bhai problem to zindgi ka hissa hoti h na,or problem se ldna uday ka kam h...
Or ye manyata ki side lena bnd kijiye,just wait nd watch...kisi ka intzar h mujhe...
Jay evil luk deti h...

Uday,br nd komal.
'dad maa ko leke main chote ko dekhne k liye le jaunga..
Br:ni uday wha abi jana thik ni...
Wha chote ki tbiyet thik ni wo coma me kuch movement ni ho rha h...
Komal cryng..
'mere bcha 1 nd half year se coma me h...
Pta ni kaun si ghadi me wo shimla se wapis aa rha tha,or uska accidnt ho gya...
U:maa plz Aap chup ho jaiye,kuch ni hoga use wo thik ho jayega...

To suddn bahr se chilane ki awaz aati h.
To sb bahr jate h...
Meneka manyata pe chila h.
Meneka:aao sb aao,in madam ko apni glti ni lgti,saari glti uday ki lgti h...

K:hua kya?
Meneka:bhabhi,maine bs ise pucha uday k 7th khush to ho tum...
To khti h,maine ye shadi ni ki,ye shadi uday ne ki h...

Manyata shocked'lekin aapne ye ni kha tha bua g aapne to..
Br:bs kro manyata ab meneka ko glt saabit krne ki koshish kr ri ho...

M:ni papa main to...
Meneka:sunliya,uday ye tumhare baare me ye sochti h...
Ek izzatdar ldki ka hona...

Uday'bs kijiye bua,
Manyata aisa bol hi ni skti,mujhe pta h..
Or agr usne aisa bola h to kuch glt ni bola...h.

All shocked..ki ye manyata ki side le rha h..
Unanti khush hoti h.

Meneka:uday tum apne pariwar...

Uday manyata ko dekhta h'aap sb ko phle din hi smjh jana chahiye tha,ki main manyata k liye kisi se ld jaunga..'or itne dino me mujhe ye to pta lg gya h,ki manyata kya bol skti h or kya ni...

Br:ek din khin rona na pde is ldki k liye tumhein uday..ye ldki ek din tumhein bhoot rulayegi..


Uday jane lgta h'wo din kbi ni ayega.,
or ha bua,manyata kbi bi kuch aisa ni khegi jise family me ldai ho'...
Wo chala jata h...

Meneka:aacha fsaya h apne jal me hmare uday ko...

Meneka,br chale jate h guse me...
Komal unanti manyata k pas aate h.

K:why u r cryng beta?
M:maa,maine aisa kuch ni kha tha..wo bua g..
Un:bhabhi aapko btane ki jrurt ni h,maine dekha tha...

K:rona bnd kijiye..aap ke pas to aisa jeevansathi h,jo Aapki respct k liye kisi se bi ld skta h... Un:ha bhabhi aap to bhoot lucky ho ki aapko bhai mile h...

Manyata uday k baare me sochne lgti h...

Manyata apne rum me jati h,uday wha beith k file pdh rha h...
Uday use dekhta wo bi dekhti h pr kuch bolte ni...

Phr wha vijay or unanti dono unke rum me aate h.
Un'bhai apni file bnd kijiye,arey kam bad me krlena.
U:pr hua kya?
V:kuch ni hua,manyata bhai aap bi idhr aaiye...
Un:hm ek game khelge,bhoot mja ayega or tym pass bi ho jayega...
U:tum log khelo mujhe kam h..
V:plz uday.hmare liye na shi manyata k liye hi shi..
Uday ruk jata h...

Un:okay,game ye h ki ye ek bowl pe alg alg type ki chits h,uspe jo likha h wo agar btane wala h to btana h,or daring h to krna h...ok.now.
Charo game start krte h..
Phle bhai aap..chaliye ek chit lijiye...
Uday ek chit leta h...
To usme word hota h'beautiful.who?why?'
V:jaldi bolo..
Uday manyata ki trf dekhta h or khta h'manyata'..
Manyata achanak se use dekhti h...
Un:how cute...why? Ka ans.do.
Uday use dekhte huye hi bolta h'qki is khubsurti me koi milawat ni h,puri trh pure h...
Manyata man hi man muskura ri thi...
V:okay,nxt manyata bhai..
Manyata pick up 1chit...
Manyata's chit word'pyar'kya hota h?
M:pyar wo hota h jo hmein hmesha khushi de...jiski ek muskurahat ko dekh k hm pura din gujar le...
Uday manyata ka answer sunke,uski trf pyar se dekhta h...
Nxt vijay bhai.
Vijay's chit 'clasical dance'krna h...
'arey ye kb likha tha hmne,
Un:natak mt kro,likha tha,chalo kro..
All laughng...
Vijay khada Hota h,uday clasic music start krdeta h.
Or vijay dance krna start krta h.
Wo dance km jokergiri jyada kr rha tha...
Or sb uske steps dekh k hs hs k pagal ho rhe the...
Vijay stop dancing'glti krdi ye game khelke,mujhe kya pta tha,phla dare mujhe krna pdega.'...
All laughng...
Manyata to bhoot hs ri h,use dekh k 3no khush h.
U:chl unanti ab teri baari h..
Unanti 's chit 'bst couple.. who?why?
Un:uday-manyata
Made 4 each other..becoz wo kbi 7th ni chodhege ek dusre ka..

Manyata thout'main ye sb sunke kyn muskura ri hu...

Precap-game me jay ki ntry..ab 4 ki jgh 5 plyng d game..

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love Uday- Manyata scenes. Lovely update.
Thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yaar... As usuall ...but becoming more and more intresting...please update soon...thanks for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar its not fair
pari u always write such an awesome part,now i m short at words to praise it
i literally dont hav words to praise,
i just want to give a loud round of applause
keep it up
Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it PaRi !!! ur updates r awesome as usual . gr8 idea wid de game . and J s entry in de game waiting 2 read abt it . thank you for de PMs
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW 😳, what a cute game, Unnati and Vijay have come up with. Loved it, and J kamini ki entry off, Hope just like in serial even here she acts like a reverse cupid for our manveer, waitng for some more intense scene between Manveer 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer SS
Without no life:u nd me:soulmate

Part-22

Un:dada nxt ur
Suddn jay cum'mujhe chodke game khelna nt fair'

Unanti uday ka muh utar jata h...
M:ha jay aao na..
J:wo to tum ni bi bulaogi to main aajaungi..
'main bi khelungi.

Un:ha thik aao.
V:soch lo clasical dance aya to krna pdega..
Jay:shutup..chalo start kro...

Un:jay nxt tumhari baari h
Jay pickup d chit
'zid'
Jay uday ki trf dekhti h'kisi ko paane ki...
Vijay:kisko?
J:sry vijay bhai,ques.me whos ni pucha h...

Vijay:jay k suspnci baatein use hi mubarak ho..
Chlo uday tumhari baari...

Uday pick up nxt chit..
'Zindgi' kya h?
Uday again manyata ki trf dekhta h
'kisi ki muskuraht h meri zindgi'
Jay jealous hoti h'kiski muskuraht uday'

V::sry jay,ques.me who s ni pucha gya
U:ryt vijay lekin itna jrur bta skta wo tum ni ho,wo muskurahat to duniya ki bst smile h...

Unanti nd vijay laughng..
'uday jay gltmahmi palne me bhut tej h'...

Manyata ko mja ane lga khelne me'ab meri baari h,
Un:ha bhabhi...

Manyata pick up chit.
'Ehsaas'koi solid feeling btao...

Manyata'ehsaas,jise hm jante tk ni h,or hmein lgta h ki wo hmare liye khush h hmare liye ro rha h.

Uday uski trf dekhta h,qki uske 7th aisa hua h.

Manayata'jb main jail me thi tb,pta ni lekin aisa lgta tha,jeise mera drd dekh k koi rota tha...or mujhe ehsaas hota tha ki kisi ko frq pdhta h meri khushi se mere drd se...

Uday thout'ye sb to mere 7th,yani manyata ko bi...

Jay'manyata tumhara ans.to bda boring type tha.

Vijay:hmesha glt word use krti ho,nt boring,romentic tha,Weise manyata bhai
Wo ehsaas kiskeliye tha...

Manyata'main bi use dhundti hu,vijay bhai.'
Un:bhabhi,wo to pta ni kaun h,lekin kuch cheeze hmare pas rhti h or hm use khin or dhundte h..

Manyata unanti ko ajeeb trike se dekhti h,ki akhir wo khna kya chahti h...

Vijay bhai,nxt
Vijay bhai pic up nxt chit
'deewangi'
V:ye word kb likha tha,bda mushkil h.
Anyway,jo uday ki aankho me hmesha hota h'

U:meri aankho me.
V:ha tumhari aankho me,sry pucha nh kyn?
Wrna main btata..

Unanti next pic up chit
'msti'kya?
Un:mere liye msti frnds,my family...

Jay'boaring ques.dal rkhe h,jiska koi jwab ni.
V:tumhein khelna h to khelo,wrna hmara mood mt bigaado..

J:ok,now my turn..
Jay s chit
'nafrat'kyn?
Jay'nafrat,ye to meri zindgi ka hissa bn chuki h..
Well,us hr insan se jisne meri insult ki h...
Sb uske khne ka mtlb smjh rhe h.
V:jay bhai aapke jwab bhoot drawne h...

Uday'ab bs kro,mujhe kam h..

Un:aacha bhai,ek bar or plz...plz.
Uday beith jata h,ok lao,meri baari h.

Uday's nxt chit..
'Makshad'
U:hmmm...kisi ko zindgi bhr ki khushi dena...chahe kuch bi krna pde...

Again manyata nxt
Manyata chit
'dosti'better ya bad..

Sb ko pta h,to sb ko bura lgta h jay ko chodke...
Jay hsti h'bnd kro game,yha to sb chup h...

Manyata bolna start krti h'mere past k frnds bure the,bhoot bure the.'

All sad ki manyata k pass heartbreak chit aagya...
Uday ko bhoot bura lgta h,wo uthke jane lgta h.
Tbi manyata bolti h.
Or mera aaj ka wo ek dost jisne mujhe jine ki wjh di h,ye kh ke ki wo mujhe justice dilayega...

Uday stop,Ki wo to usko bol ri h,wo phr se beith jata h.
Sb smjh bi jate h...

V:manyata bhai i m sry,wo glti se...
M:vijay bhai koi bat ni,kbi na kbi saamna to krna pdega...
'aacha chalo unanti tumhari baari,
Unanti chit
'pagalpan'
Unanti sochne lgti h,
Vijay say tym khtm...
Unanti tum game se bahr,now my turn..

Un:ha thik h,main bhaith k dekhugi...

Ab vijay ko pagal pan ka ans. Dena tha,bt vijay bi ni depata.
J:vijay bhai aapka tym bi khtm,ab aap whi bathiye jha unanti h.meri baari.
Jay'pagalpan'
'ishq hota h,ek bar jo dimag pe cha jaye to ishq pane k liye kuch bi kra skti h'

Uday tum chit uthao.
'dar'
'kisi ko khone ka,use main kbi khona ni chahta.'

Jay to smjhti h,isliye jealous ho ri h...manyata smjh ni paa ri h lekin use uday answer sunke aacha lg rha h...

Nxt manyata
'aadat'kaun si?jise kbi chodna ni chahte..
Manyata'main bolna bhul gai thi lekin wo adat phr se ho gai h 'ha ni to'bolne ki...

All smile nt jay..
Jay nxt chit
'bndish..

Jay sochne lg gai,use smjh ni aay wo kya bole.
Vijay'hahaha jay bhai aap bi idhr aajao...
Ab aap chah k bi ni khel skti..
Jay ko ab or gusa aata h,chup chap ake beith jati h...

Uday khush hota h'hmm..bndish,kisi k 7th jeene ki,ye bndish kbi ni htni chahiye'

Manyata nxt.
'punishment'

'usko sja honi chahiye jisne meri... Uday bolta'jrur puri hogi..

Uday
'sbse muskil kya h?

Both eye cntect'kisi ki ankho me aashu dekhna mushkil h'

Dono ek dusre ko dekh rhe h..
To unanti manyata ki side se vijay uday ki side..
Hm chits pick up krte h or aapdono ans.dena.
Then break Eye cntct..
Unanti pic up chit manyata ki side se
'sapna'kya h??

Manyata'mera sapna tha ki meri zindgi me...wo suddn uday ki trf dekhti h.
Qki uska sapna tha ki mujhe koi aisa lfepartner mile jo hr mushkil me hr khushi me uske 7th ho..or wo uday tha.. Un:bhabhi bolo,tym khtm ho jayega.

Manyata uday ko dekh ri h,wo meri wjh se koi dukhi na ho..

Uday phr uski trf dekhta h,ki isne bat bdal di...

Vijay pick up nxt chit uday side
'aitbar'
Uday'apni dhdkno pe'

Unanti pic up nxt
'tnhai'
M:tnhai me jeena bhul jate h.

Uday nxt
'kismat'

Uday' ab jo kismat h,ush me hmesha rhna chahta hu'

Then ab dono k bich eye cntct h.
'such'
Manyata'jo aaj h mera wo such h..

'jhuth'
Uday'wo sb jo tumhein(manyata)dukh,drd de..

'waada'
Manyata'koi tumse nibhana sikhe..

'sbse masum kaun?
Uday'tum...

'rishte'
Manyata 'khuda bnata h...kbi bi kisi bi tym pe...

'Luita'
Uday:tumhari bolti njr ki bekhudi ne,tumhari sadgi ne luita h...

'ehsaan'

Manyata'ehsaan use to lgta h ki uday ne uspe ehsaan kiya h,lekin wo bolti ni h,qki use pta h bolungi to uday apni family mere 7th chidchida ho jayega...wo phr chup hi rhti h...

V:chalo,uday u r win.
Manyata bhai chup keise ho gai tum...

Manyata'bhai bolne ka man ni kiya...

Un:chalo thik h,lekin bhai aap jeet gye ho,aap ek bar last chit uthao na.plz...

Uday chit uthata h..
To vijay leleta h'o teri,uday is tym to chit me tumhare liye dare h'...krna na krna tumhari mrzi...

Jay:chit me h kya?
Vijay:kiss krna h kisiko...

Jay:thank god ye game khtm ho gya...uday cngrats..
Manyata niche face krke beithi h...

Un:chalo,chlte h bhai jeet gye,bhabhi nxt tym aap pkka...

Uday use dekhta h or bolta h'ek min.mujhe dare pura to krne do..

3no ruk jate h.
Manyata weise hi beithi h...
Manyata apne hair ear k piche krti h,weise hi uday use uske chick pe kiss kr deta h...

Unanti vijay khush hote h,jay to buri trh jealous ho jati h...
Manyata shocked surprize hoke u hi beithi h...

Uday use pyar se dekhta h,or chla jata h bahr...

To uday ko jay rokti h'uday bhoot pasnd h na tumhein behaa ldki'
Uday smile krta h'manyata nam h uska jay..weise tum jealous to bhoot hui hogi,jo tumhare 7th ni kiya aajtk wo manyata k 7th kiya...
Jay'bhoot hwa me ud rhe ho uday main bi dekhti hu kb tk tumhare pankh tumhara 7th dete h!
Weise chinta mt kro jb pankh tuit jayenge tb honge tumhare 7th...

Uday'hmesha khayli baatein palne me age rhti ho tum,phli bat jay sher udta ni h,to pankh tuitne ka swal hi paida ni hota,or chahe zindgi me kitni musibate aaye,mujhe tumhari zrurt to kbi ni pdegi.'
Ye bat yad rkhna...
Wo khke chla jata h...

Jay'ni uday tum andaaza bi ni lga skte ki mere mind me kya chl rha h,is ghr me parmanantly apni jgh bnaugi main,tumhein paane k liye,or us manyata ko tumse dur krne k liye..'


Manyata apne rum me mirror me dekhti h'maine jwab kyn ni diya,maine to phle bi bola h,lekin aaj main kyn dar ri thi ki,mera jwab sunne k bad wo mujhse bat ni krega...

Uday garden me ghum rha h or wo rum scene yad krke muskurata h...
'sb jwab manyata k liye hi bole maine...drect
na shi indrect hi shi...
Game me sbki jwaan se such baatein nikal ri thi,lekin kuch baaton k jwab abi bi adhure h...

Jha manyata jate jate chup ho gah thi,ek jgh vijay bi chup ho gya tha...kyn??

Continueos

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
just awesome
awww first kiss
jay is always a bitch
keep it up nice one
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE PARI. I HAVE NO WORDS TO PRAISE YOU..
👏 THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL UPDATE& PM.
LOVE U.🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum...specially da kiss...waooo plsss aise scenes dalti rahooo plsss...

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