OS: Strong Feelings...(ManVeer)

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Manyata tries to convince Aryan that he is Akaash...But Aryan denies Manyata of being Akaash...

Instead he smirks at her and tells her that if she wants he can be Akaash for her for one night...

Manyata gets shocked hearing Akaash speak like that with her...but befor she could react Uday appears in front of them and punches Aryan with all his might...

A fight starts between the both of them...

Manyata is in shock to see her fianc and her lover fighting... she coulden't understand what to do...

Uday meanwhile punched Akaash really hard and he started bleeding profusely...

Akaash was almost succumbing to his injuries when Manyata scream his name aloud and ran towards him... She is showing so much concern for him...while Uday's wound was bleeding even more than Akaash's...

Manyata: Akaash tum thik toh ho na??

Akaash: Aagh...

She dresses his wounds with her dupatta... and Uday just stares at her hurt...to see his princess tending to Majnu's wounds instead of his...

Manyata realised that Uday was also hurt...she wanted to ask him if he was okay...but she thought that it was important to tend to Akaash's wounds and J was there na to take care of Uday...

But Uday after seeing so much ignorance form his Princess could not take it anymore and ignoring the wound in his arm he furiously got into his car and drove away...

Manyata heard his car leaving and shouted after him...

Manyata: Uday...Uday...Ruk...

But Uday didn't wait...

Meanwhile Tara came out hearing the commotion...

Tara rushes foreward when she sees Aryan hurt...

Tara: Aryan... tum thik toh hona???

She asks concerned...Manyata stares at them in disbelief...

She asks Aryaan who Tara was?

Aryaan tells her that Tara is the love of his life... and that he doesn't love Manyata but Tara... and that they are engaged...

Manyata hearing the truth gets shatterd... She starts backing away from them...and leans on the car's bonnet for support... Tears fast rolling down her soft pink cheeks... It felt as if the ground had shifted from beneath her feet...

She was dazed and somehow Jay got her home...

Meanwhile Uday... in angry and hurt went to Uday Nivas... and straight to his room...

There he opened a bottle of whisky and poured him self a glass full of it... His chest was heaving...and perspiration trickled down from his forehead as quickly gulped down his drink and drank furiously one glass after the other...everytime the scene of Manyata's concern for Akaash kept flashing back to him... He kept replaying all those moments that Majnu and Manyata had spent together despite of his presence in her life...

He was a hurt lion ready to strike back...and his heart was wounded badly...His heart was aching and he could not bear his Princess's concern for any other man...

Meanwhile a still dazed Manyata came back to the Raajmahal expecting to find an angry Uday mocking at her telling her he is not Akaash and i Told U SO!!!

But Uday wasn't in the RAajmahal...she asked the servants...they said that Jamaisa had not come home since he had left... Now Manyata was highly concerned for him...A pang of fear arose i her heart... She knew that when he was Angry he was hell bent on doin anything even if that meant hurting himself... she felt like she needed to be beside him now at any cost... She Suddenly knew where he was... she took the car keys and drove off to Uday Niwas...

Arriving at the hotel she ran up the stairs and banged into his room without knocking...

She had though right Uday was there... he was still drinking...continuosly... Manayata didn't know why she cared for him...but seeing him hurting himself like that a pain seared through her heart...she coulden't bear to see him hurt himself like that because of her...

He was about to drink another glass of whisky...when Manyata rushed foreward and caught his hand...

Yeh kya kar raha hain tu uday... kyun apne aap ko aise chot pohoncha raha hain???

Tumhe kya pharak parta hain Princess hum apne aap ko chot pohonchaye yaa nahin...??? Tum apne Majnu ke paas kyun nahin jaati?

Humari phikr tum mat karo... akaash ko bura lag sakta hain... Aur Waise bhi tum toh humse nafrat karti ho na???

Please Uday aisa mot bol... Main tujhe takleef main nahin dekh sakhti... Tune sach kaha tha... woh Mera Akaash nahin hain...

Waah princess... tumhara toh jawan nahin...ab yakeen ho gaya tumhe jab usne khud tumse keh diya... Acha chalo maan lete hain ki yeh aapka Aaaksh nahin hain toh aapka akaash kahan hain... Kya woh humare shadi wale din aakar appko mandap se bhaga kar le jayega???

Manyata is on the verge of breaking down into tears... hearing such harsh and cold words form him... She didn't know why she coulden't answer his taunts with some sharp replies of hers ehich she usually went around doin... She just coulden't today... it was as if each word that he said was tearing her apart inch by inch...

Aisa nahin hain Uday...

Toh phir Kaisa hain princess...tumne humare mohabbat ka humare chahat k ek mazaak bana ke rakh diya hain... Kya chati hon tum...Ki hum tumhari zindagi se chale jaaye??? Toh thik hain hum tumhare zindagi se chale jaayenge...pata hain kyun??? Issliye nahin ki hum haar gaye aur yum jeet gayi balki issliye kyunki... hum tumse pyaar karte hain...aur pata hain ...jisse humsabse zyaad a pyaar karte hain use hum khush dekhna chate hain...

Manyata kept shaking her head vigorously and bit her lips tears rolling down her cheeks thick and fast...

Uday... main nahin chahti ki tu meri zindagi se chala jaaye... Main...main toh yeh zindagi tere saath bitana chahti hun...????

Kyun...Kyun...Taaki har kaam ke liye humara istemal kar sakon...aur jab tumhara kaam khatam ho jaaye tab humare jasbadon ke saath khel sakon...

Saying so he holds the glass in his hand so tightly that the glass cracks and his hand starts bleeding...

Manyat gets super concerned for him and quickly gets the first aid box and bandages his hand...While Manyata is bandaging his hand tears continuously roll from her eyes...

Uday gazes at her intently for a while and then lifts his hand and wipes away the tears from Manyata's cheek...

Princess hum tumhe rota nahin dekh sakte... pls chup ho jaayo...

Manyata finishes bandaging his hand... and takes his hand in her hand and says...

Uday main tukhse waada kiya tha ki main humare bich kissi ko aane nahin dungi... Main woh vaada nibhaongi... Main tujhse hi shaadi karongi...Kyunki main samajh chuki hoon ki agar mere liye iss duniya main koi bana hain toh woh sirf tu hain...

Uday doesn't let her complete her sentence and grabs her in a passionate and powerful kiss that takes Manyata by surprise... the insides of her get jolted like they were on fire... his strong hands cupped her delicate face... He as usual made a note not to hurt her... So stong yet so gentle... so manly and so passionate... she wanted to resist but her insides melted and she gave in to the Yuvraaj...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY...awww...it was sooo sweet and passionate.. 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

fantastic story:)loved it..


Thank You So much!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank U guys
Ur appreciation means a lot to me...😛
I am planning to write a few more OS's so i hope u guys wud take them the same way as u did for my first one!
thanx a lot again
nd pls forgive me if i bored u guys or made some mistakes...
as m still learnin the threads...😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahhh Touching really really touching
I love emotional stories but I'm not good at writing them
Good job
keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cham42195

Ahhh Touching really really touching
I love emotional stories but I'm not good at writing them
Good job
keep it up


Ur being modest...😉 i totally totally!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃 loved ur

"The meeting Manveer OS"😳😳😳😳😳 and i so badly wnat u 2 continue!!!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it. Especially the end.
Great job 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww yarrr...really cool one...loved it... 👏 👏 👏
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awesome loved it great work👍🏼

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