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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejuangel

ur doing really good job 👍🏼read all parts 2day

thnks 4r PM!!!!

Thanks dear no prob abt the pm will pm for the next part also
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing amazing amazing
i dont hav words now
but two awesome love track
ashi-arjun
uday-manyata
awesome
but ye manyata ke saath kya hua tha yaar
i m feeling pity for her now ,even before knowing the truth
ye kabaab me haddi sasha kaha aa gayi
but i trust u dear,isko jaldi get lost karna yaar
and keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update Gowri 👏
Oh man why are Uday and Manyata not on good terms? Really want to know the back story of it and I am sure Ashi would sort the matter out. And Ashi's love interest has entered the picture too. That is going to be interesting. Abey yaar yeh Sasha kahan se agai? 😛 . Lol. Looks like Ashi needs to become a detective now. Lol.
Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

amazing amazing amazing

i dont hav words now
but two awesome love track
ashi-arjun
uday-manyata
awesome
but ye manyata ke saath kya hua tha yaar
i m feeling pity for her now ,even before knowing the truth
ye kabaab me haddi sasha kaha aa gayi
but i trust u dear,isko jaldi get lost karna yaar
and keep it up

Ohhh dear thank u!!!!mein khushi se phoole na samaa pa rahi!!!! ab kabab mein haddi ki jaroorat hogi hi na thoda twist thoda turn toh banta hain na!!! jaroor jaldi hi get lost hogi!!
Thank u so much!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fia21

Great update Gowri 👏
Oh man why are Uday and Manyata not on good terms? Really want to know the back story of it and I am sure Ashi would sort the matter out. And Ashi's love interest has entered the picture too. That is going to be interesting. Abey yaar yeh Sasha kahan se agai? 😛 . Lol. Looks like Ashi needs to become a detective now. Lol.
Update soon!

Ab kya kare thodi problems toh sehni padegi na!!
Jaroor pata lagega dear thoda sabar toh karo
Thoda haddi nahi hogi toh majaa kaisa!
Haan dear ab ashi ko hi kuch karna padega!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update gowri. Update soon
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

Awesome update gowri. Update soon

Ya will update dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar...
I loved it...
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Marwa.A.W

Awesome yaar...

I loved it...
Update soon...😊

Thanks marwa!! glad u liked it!! ya will update soon!!!
Btw wen r u updating??
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER EIGHT : FINALLY REVEALED!! MISSION BY ASHI 007!!

Ohhh man pata lagana padega wats happening between these two guys!! One hand she scared for uday when she sees any nightmare and then hates him!! Goddd itni mushkil kyun hai woh samjhne mein!! She thinks and she reaches home. She searches for her sister!! Not in her room not in the garden!! Where is she?? And then she hears someone shouting on top of the voice.

"DAMNNN ITTT!!!!"

She runs down stairs and she sees manya banging the basketball in anger over the garage door. She was in a fit of rage! She didn't even change her dress! She was very angry! And when ashi tried to talk to her she stomped away to the room changed her dress and went storming outside leaving for work!!

* * *

Arjun just reached home and plopped on his sofa!! Ohhh man that was tiring!! He thought. His mom and dad didn't care about what he did what he wanted or anything of his happiness. All they cared was about how much he earned etc. They were his managers. There was nobody else in his family. But he had one friend whom he knew from when he was young and had a brotherly affection. His name was Dhruv. Actually his distant relative but a close friend of his.

Arjun spoke to him told him every thing every secret but they mocked each other so much that they called each other by their names. Always called each other dumba**, buttonhead, dustbin, a**hole and stuff but they were the best of all. Dhruv was actually elder to him but never did he call him bhai always u tubelight, buttonhead and stuff.

He remembered everything he did in school today. Ohh god he hated those girls trying to cling to him by force. He was okay with his fans but hated the desperate bimbos too much. Ufff!!! He thought and closed his eyes. He saw a girl scolding him and badmouthing him! But he couldn't guess who she was!he just opened his eyes and felt something weird about that small dream of his mini nap!

He kind of liked ashi and her sister. Her sister wasn't that interesting but Ashi was a firecracker he thought. "Ufff!! Wat attitude wat style, she just had too many flaws ,but her flaws made her even more flawless!" He thought and went into his room thinking about today.

* * *

Manyata was just banging, throwing or say it patkofying all the things in the shelfs and her shop owner Mr. Kapoor saw her and laughed. They actually knew each other since long. Manyata came there to buy but always helped him and went. Now she worked there. He knew her well enough to guess how she behave when she was sad happy etc.

He went over to her and tapped on her shoulders and called her. She reacted very fast.

"Why do u always disturb man can't u stay..." Picking up a ruler lifting it up as if to beat. But she stopped abruptly seeing Mr.kapoor.

"Sorry Kapoor uncle"

"What happened? Why are u angry?"

"Nothing uncle"

"Come on beta tell me ull feel light"

"Nothing uncle didn't eat today so just irritated"

"Are u sure?"

"Ummm ya uncle"

"Okay then"

And he goes back. Manyata keeps working in total frustration!

* * *

"Wat I did is it right or no?ahhh so much confusion"speaks to himself while sitting on his bed watching tv.

"Wat happened dada?"

"Ohh choti nothing come sit"

"Oh come on tell dada u know u can't lie to me"

"Hmm okay"

"So now wat happened?"

He tells her everything and unnati shake her head.

"Dada ye aapne kya kiya?"

"Wat do u mean by kya kiya?"

"Dada u hurt her na and everyone knows that u r such a big flirt."

"So if I am a flirt does that mean ki I can't have girlfirend or wat?"

"Did I say that? No na!"

"Okay okay"

"Dada u hurt her"

"Wat do u mean that I can't bring new crew members for creww?"

"Oh dada I mean she didn't expect her best friend to break her trust"

"Means she trusted u na! She always thought YOU ARE THE ONE who will be with her ,help her and u toh"

"Okay I understood! Now should I ask for forgiveness"

"Hmm depends on you you have to decide it dada"

"Okay"

"Okay then I am going out dada see u later"

"Okay bye choti tc"

"Bye dada"

She hugs him and goes . All he can think about is unnati's words. Was she right? Kya maafi maangni chahiye? Confused man.

* * *

Manyata came back home all tired,irritated, frustrated and agitated. She just was too angry to speak to anyone. She sat on the sofa changing channels and stopped at vh1. Music. It always cooled her down. No matter how angry or frustrated she was. Especially when she heard linkin park she felt soothed. Her favourite song was playing. NUMB!! It was something close to her heart. But even before the song finished she was called for dinner. Again back to her frustration mode. She went to her room, literally threw the bag washed her face and came running to eat.

Ohhh boy!! She was hungry. After all usse kutto jaisi bhook jo lagti thi. She sat on her chair. Everyone was present there except her uncle. He had gone on a business trip. So the servants served her food. She closed her eyes prayed and started eating.

Everyone was silent. Usually they spoke, chit chatted during food. But no one opened their mouth today. She was halfway through to finish her food, when Ashi took a step to speak to her.

"So how was ur day manya?"

"As usual and urs?"

"Okay not that good!"

"Hmmm"

"So wassup withh ermmm you and emmm uday?"

The moment she heard uday's name she just banged her spoon on her plate and gave Ashi a angry look.

"Why do u always have to speak abt him?" Saying this she stormed off to her bedroom.

"Kya ashi bhai manyata bhai ko phir gussa dila diya"

"Ab wat did I do?"

"Jaiye beta jaake bulaiye unhe nahi toh phir bhooke pet so jaayengi"

"Ya jiji warna phirse kal unke sar mein dard hoga aur poore ghar ko kabad khaana bana diya hoga"

"Jk tum toh chup hi raho samjhi!! Zyada bak math"

"Watever jiji"

* * *

Manyata just plops on the bed on the verge of crying. She grabs a pillow and rests her chin on it and sleeping on the bed. She closes her eyes tightly and a lone tear flows down her cheeks!

"Manyaaa"

She gets up and wipes her tears. Just then ashi came inside and gave a sigh!

"Oh man manya tum yaaha ho I am sorry baba next time se uska naam nahi loongi"

"Tumhe sorry kehne ki zaroorat Nahi haim ashi"

"Hey phir bhi ab chal khaana khate hain"

"Hmm not hungry u go"

"Khayegi zoor ka mere haath se chal"

"Nahi tu ja yaar"

"Nahi tu nahi aayegi toh I am also not going"

"Theeke baith idhar hi"

"Hooo waise tere aur us idiot ke beech kya hua??"

"Poosch maath ashi!!"

"Kya hua bol na"

"Ek hafte se saala phone calls pick nahi kar raha, emails ka no reply, texts ke no reply, gym me milta hai toh gadbad mein hi bol ke bhaag jaata aur ghar jaati hoon toh unnati bolti hain ki woh ghar pe nahi hain"

"Haan toh gussa is keliye hain ki woh tujhe ignore kar raha hain"

"Nahi yaar aisa nahi poori baat toh sun poore teen din baad practice mein mila" and she begins the story.

*flashback*

She was waiting for him to come so that she could start her practice! Everyone was practicing! For the nth tym she saw her watch! Ahh wen would he come!!!

She came out of the rehersal hall and walked on to the street to see if he was coming!! She looked all decked up to practice but she was going out of patience.

The boys on the streets were just staring at her and some of them bumped into a pole. When suddenly she saw him come on his bicycle pedalling in full speed. Finally he came she thought. He stopped in front of him panting and breathing heavily.

"Where the heck were u? No reply calls ignore kar rahe the what's up with u dude?" In anger

"Sorry princess I was held up in some work"

"Don't princess me ok"

"Okay baba btw u are looking hot today"

"Hot toh hongi na full gusse mein jo hoon"

"Woh toh hain"

"Ab chale ya niyotha dena hoga"

"Chalo madam"

And he hugs her and then they both go in and then start to practice. They were practicing and were giving killer moves. Meanwhile everyone was taking a break and so they were watching them dance they just looked perfect together. Match made in heaven.

"Thank god tu aaya warna toh mein aaj bhi practice nahi kar paati"

"Aana toh tha hi aaj tumhe kisi se milwana jo tha"

"Kis se"

"Bas aati hi hogi"

And then we see a girl coming inside and her eyes searching for someone.

"Ye lo naam liya aur shaaitaan haazir"

And manyata turns back to see who it is and becomes angry she knew who it was. SASHA her blood enemy. A school bimbo. Oh man she hated her she knew her in middle school she was now in some other school. But they were frnds before for some reason they became enemies. But ashi didn't know abt that because in middle school ashi was some where else as the ashi had crossed the cut off bday date.

"So everyone meet our new crew member sasha"

Pheww she was relieved that she wouldn't take her place. But then uday continued.

"And she is going to be my partner in duos"

"WHATTT!!!!" Manya shouted

"Ya I mean she is my girlfriend too"

"What !!! This bimbo is ur galfrnd!! Can't believe this. And she doesn't know how to dance"

"Oh she does actually and latin american dance she does better than u"

"U are telling that she is better than me and I am a waste right?"

"Nooo not like that dear just that..."

"Just what uday.. U think u can take all the decisions or what huh?? Didn't u even think once abt us"

"I mean what is so bad in it?"

" She is a show off and first we still need a partner for ashi no one is agreeing and on top of that this.. Can't get more complicated"

"I know we need a partner but we can use a better dancer I thought and I thought u would support me"

"Now I get it why u have been missing practices and are not in contact with ur frnds u were romancing her right??"

"Actually kind of"

"I never expected this from u!! U forgot ur best frnds for a girl who came two days ago!! I meannn ughhh!!!"

"But we still are friends and u are still in the group na"

"Yes I am but I aint doing duos with u and I am not going to choreograph any more routines"

"U can't do that"

"Why can't I my decision?? U think I will let u do what u want and let this bi*** take over my place and show off and I sit here like one dummy chinese porcelian doll!! No ways!! When I am not here then I will see kis cheez ka ye ghamand karegi!!bye bye!! At least jab tak ye kamini yaha hai!! dude now enjoy with ur girlfriend!! And don't worry guys I am still in our group but I aint doing duos till this bi*** is here"

"Maaannnyaaa" her friends cried out

But she had already left and banged the door behind her with full force.

*flashback ends*

"Isiliye yaar he says I am his best friend and then koi best friend ko aise karta hain kya"

"Woh toh hain"

"Upar se bol raha hain ki uski koi galti nahi"

" I will slaappp himm!! Idiot!! How can he do this"

"I know but forget it no use"

" I will take care of him u leave it to me now"

"Okay I am sleepingg"

She drifts to sleep and ashi moves out of the room. I amd telling u uday I will not leave u I will find out y u r doing this. Just wait now this ashi and champ of urs is going to become ashi 007 to know ur truth I tell u! She said to her self and went to the dinner table.

* * *

Uday didn't actually say unnati the truth why he had actually done this with manyata. Sasha and all was a act for him or a play. Did he really hurt manyata so much?? Does she really feel for him as a bff or something more? Or she is reacting just because it was SASHA! Her swear enemy?? Oh man so many questions!!!! But really so many answers for them!!!! Ughhh!! Confused!! Totally confused!!

"Dada why are u not eating??"

"Uhhh wat?? Oh food not hungry choti"

"Don't lie dada what happen?"

"Nothing was thinking something"

"About manyata na!"

"Uhhh no...just is that"

"Ohhh hoo dada u think I can't understand aapka face dekh ke hi pata chal jata hai mujhe"

"Chutkiii "

"Accha ok silent lock kardiya meine"

"challo khaoo"

"Aap bhi"

They finish their dinner but all uday could think was about manyata!! He knew he did that to tease her but she got really angry was it good?? Was she really that hurt?? Ohh mannn!! What do I do now??????

* * *

In the night around 11 30 uday suddenly wakes up hearing a knock. He waits for some time to see if he really heard someone knocking or not. There is a knock again, so he goes to the door and opens it but his surprise no one present there.

"Hmmm no one is there guess I was dreaming"

And then he hears someone screaming and banging the window.

"ABBEY OH!!! PAGAL THAKUR!!!! OPEN THE GOD DAMN WINDOW MAN!!!! OR I SWEAR I WILL BREAK IT"

He goes to the window and cautiously opens it and to his surprise he found someone he knew.

"ASHIII!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE U DOING HERE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT AND THAT TOO LIKE ONE THIEF!!!!!????"

* * *

THANKS FOR READING GUYS!! SORRY FOR THE DELAY!! NOW ITS UR TURN TO COMMENT AND LIKE!! U BETTER LIKE IT WARNA BOHUT PACHTAOGE DEAR!!! I TELL U!!! JUST KIDDING DONT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY!! DO LIKE AND COMMENT!! CRITICIZE AND SUGGEST!! I NEED UR SUGGESTIONS THEY MOTIVATE ME !! THANKS AGAIN!!

XXX:| CHEERZ |:XXX

GOWRI...

Edited by Gowri05 - 13 years ago

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