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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

omg m totally loving the story till nw...it's so awesome...omg wat happpened in M's past tht scares her so much???...pretty sure it's gonna be someone else at the window...and y did she feel so restless at jaigarh palace???...is her past related to jaigarh somehow...or jaigarh palace just reminded her of it??...lastly loved all the parts till nw...plzz cont. soon...waiting eagerly!!! 😊

Thanks😃 you will have to wait and see😆 you're very confident in that keep reading to find out it might or might not be someone else😆 I will do soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shals9

Thanks for the pm. Nice update! Pls do continue.

Thanks😃 I will do😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Thanks😃 you will have to wait and see😆 you're very confident in that keep reading to find out it might or might not be someone else😆 I will do soon😊

wait and see for the window part or jaigarh palace part??? 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

wait and see for the window part or jaigarh palace part??? 😲

the window part😆 next part inabit
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 18

Manyata- Uday please let's go don't open the window please

She started crying

Uday- Princess please don't cry I don't understand what happened?

Manyata- I told you let's go

Uday- no let me see who it is (he opened the window)

Manyata closed her eyes hid by Uday

The security guard was by the window

Security guard- gustakhi maaf Yurvraj sah yeh letter hai Rajkumariji keh liye

Uday took the letter

Uday- yeh aapko kisneh diya

Security guard- kisi admi neh aur keh raha tha yeh Rajkumari Manyaaa keh liye' humneh kahan Rajkumaari Manyata hai unka naam toh keh raha tha haan wahi uneh dehdo.. aur aap ja rehay teh isliyehkeh raha tha bahuth he zaroori message hai

Uday- tike hai aap jayee

The security guard went

Uday- Manyata please look it's nothing look at me it's just a letter nobody is there, here you go

Manyata took the letter

Manyata- nothing Uday lets go

Uday- princess there is something wrong I know I'm not going to force you to tell me but whenever you want to talk I'm always here ok now cheer up

Uday carried on driving

He stopped the car at the ice cream store

Manyata- Uday why did you stop the car?

Uday- princess I will be back ok I know this will cheer you up

Uday went to buy Manyata her favourite ice cream

Uday- here you go princess your strawberry ice cream

Manyata- thanks Uday

Uday- princess cheer up now eat it's so yummy

Manyata ate the ice cream

Uday- princess you sure your alright

Manyata- (smiles) yeah I'm fine don't worry Uday

Uday- what can I do princess I have to worry end of the day you're my wi.. I mean best friend

Manyata- I know ok now be quiet and let me eat my ice cream peacefully

Uday- ok ok eat I wont disturb

Manyata finished her ice cream

Uday- princess you have something here

Manyata- where?

Uday- here no princess here hold on I will do it (he wiped ice cream from the side of her lip) all done

Manyata got embarrassed

Manyata- Uday can we go now please Ma, Mama should be waiting

Uday- yeah

They reached the palace

Manyata- Uday aren't you coming inside

Uday- no princess I have to go back to Jaigar I have a meeting, Dad must be waiting

Manyata- ok bye

Uday- bye princess take care of yourself

Manyata- I will bye

Manyata went home

J- Jiji how was your day with Jiju sa

Manyata- J my day was good and please stop calling Uday your Jiju sa he isn't, now excuse me I'm very tired I'm going to sleep

Shaina/Komal- Manyata beta

Manyata- Ma, Mama I'm tired I really need to sleep goodnight

Shaina- ok beta go

Manyata went to her room she read the letter

Dear Manyaaa

It's been so long I'm really missing you us being together I'm here in India I will meet you very soon, I'm missing you so much. I'm sure your missing me too can't wait to meet you. Stay away from that Yuvraj Udayveer he isn't good for you don't forget you belong to me. I'm coming very soon

I LOVE YOU!!!

Manyata- hes back

She ripped the letter and threw it in the bin and started crying.

Manyata- I HATE YOU!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!

We see Uday in jaigar

Giriraj- Uday beta aapko patha hai keh bahuth jald aapki shaadi honeh walhi hai

Uday- haan Dad patha hai hamaari aur Manyata ki shaadi

Giriraj- nahiye aapki aur Devgar ki Yuvrani ki shaadi, agar Manyata Yuvrani nah bani aapko J keh saat shaadi karni pareghi

Uday- Dad yeh aap kya keh rehay hai J toh hamaari behen hai, agar Manyata Yuvrani baneh na baneh hum phirbhi auseh shaadi kareghe kyunki hum Manyata seh pyaar karteh hai

Giriraj- Uday beta yeh pyaar vyaar chorah tum ek Yuvraj ho aur tumhaari zimaadari pehele Jaigar seh hai... hum bhi chahateh hai Manyata Yuvrani baneh aur jald seh jald Jaigar mein ajaye lekin beta agar aisa nahiye hua toh yeh shaadi nahiye ho sakthi

Uday- Dadisab shagun bhi lah chukhi hai shaadi to hokar reghi, Manyata Yuvrani zaroor baneghi aap chintha maat kijiye humneh Manyata ko ache seh samjayah hai aur woh ab hum par bharosoh bhi karneh laghi hai. Ab aap dekthe jayee hum kya karteh hai

preview- the 3 tasks

-the decision of Rajprohitji

will Manyata become Yuvrani???

Edited by Anam Ali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!! I really hope Manyata becomes yuvraani!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...eagerly waiting for the next part...wanna know who is mr.unknown!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏thanks.awesome...brillaint...loved it...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww nice one.loved it.cont soon.n precap iz so interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...awesome update...plz update the next part soon...n plz break the suspense of Mr. unknown and why M is so scared of him...

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