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Posted: 13 years ago
hey I read part 12,13,14,15, and 16 at one go...it was just awesome...eagerly waiting for ur next post..Plllzzz update sooonnn...n thanks for the PM...
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I will do later on😊
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Originally posted by: alissa345

Awesome part anam, loved it...sooper dooper good job :)

Thanks Alissa😃
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Originally posted by: ARDMG

Heyy love your post I just finish reading it. it is very amazing. I am just wondering wat is manyata past really? Continue soon

Thanks😃 you will find out as the story goes on.. I will do later on😊
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Originally posted by: gargib

hey I read part 12,13,14,15, and 16 at one go...it was just awesome...eagerly waiting for ur next post..Plllzzz update sooonnn...n thanks for the PM...

Thanks😃 I will do its ok
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Part 17

Raz- Manyata what happened? Why you gone so quiet?

Manyata- don't know Bro I'm feeling restless

Raz- everything is ok nothing bad is going to happen my little sister will get only happiness now, stop thinking bad things (he hugged her) let's go inside everyone is worried about you

Manyata- I want to go home please

Raz- go down and tell Aunty I will go get the others

Manyata- ok Bro

Manyata went downstairs

Shaina- beta we were just coming upstairs to see Uday after that we are going home

Manyata- ok Mama

Giriraj- beta kaise lagha aapko aapka naya mahal

Shaina- your Uncle is saying did you like the royal house

Manyata- it's nice Uncle

Brijraj- ab hum upar chalteh hai Uday bte ko dekh aiye

Maasab- haan chaliyeh

They all go to see Uday

Maasab- Kaise ho Uday beta

Uday- hum tike hai Dadisab

Maasab- achi baat hai beta hm aaj aapka shagun lekar aiye hai, aur jab Manyata Yuvrani banjayghee hum apneh vade keh mutabik auseki shaadi aapseh karvayghe

Uday- jee Dadisab

Now we see everyone back at home Manyata was pacing back and forth.

Nishimah- Manyata what's the problem? Even in Jaigar you weren't happy

Manyata- no nothing (happily) Bhabhi I can't wait for this dumb Yuvrani training to be done, then I can go to London pursue my career

Nishimah- don't worry you will ace the training I promise now come on lets go down, I made Biryani your cook wasn't allowing us then I told Aunty Shaina, and your Raz Bro is making your favourite chocolate fudge brownies and a strawberry sponge cake now cheer up let go down

Manyata and Nishimah go downstairs

Now we see everyone in the kitchen

Manyata- Raz bro the cake smells delicious can't wait to eat it

Raz- thank you it's nearly done now sit down and have some biryani

Raz served Manyata biryani

Nishimah- how is it?

Raz- Nishimah it's ok I would say 5 out of 10 mines is better

Viks- Bro its amazing 10 out of 10 Bhabhi

Manyata- Bro it's yummy 100 out of 100 bhabhi bro is jst joking with you, it's really nice

J/Vijay- its amazing we had 2 plates

Manyata- I know bhabhi makes the best biryani. Where's Shanaya?

Viks- on the phone to Uday she's so shameless we just came from Jaigar

Vijay- I tell you we have to do something otherwise this Shanaya (J stepped on his foot)

Vijay started screaming

J- (whispers) Vijay Bhai stop ruining the plan

Manyata- (angrily) yeah she is worse than shameless

Raz- Manyata you want custard with cake or ice cream

Manyata- custard

Raz- ok I will make it

Nishimah- I will help

Raz- ok

J- Jiji lets go to the garden it's so nice weather

Vijay- let's go get up Manyata

Manyata- Ok

Everyone went to the garden ate custard and cake Manyata was happy again.

After a while she rang Uday to apologise

Uday- Hello

Manyata- Hi Uday it's Manyata how are you feeling now?

Uday- I'm much better princess

Manyata- that's good I'm really sorry for today I was just in a bad mood in my own world

Uday- it's ok princess… how are you now? If there is anything or anyone bothering you please tell me

Manyata- nothing Uday I'm fine you get well soon I have to go now bye goodnight

Uday- ok Princess, goodnight

It was night time Manyata and J were talking in Manyata's room.

Manyata- I will just go wash my face and brush my teeth (she went to the bathroom, she washed her face suddenly she saw someones face in the mirror)

Someone- Hi Manyaaa……Manyaaa

She looked up started screaming

J was on the phone to Arjun she came running

Manyata went inside the shower and locked it

Arjn- J what happened? Who screamed?

J- I will explain later g2g now bye

J disconnected the phone before Arjun can say anything

Manyata was scared hiding and crying

J- Jiji what happened?

Manyata was holding the shower door really tightly J couldn't open it

J- Jiji open the door please

Manyata wasn't listening to J

Eeveryone was asleep so J went to wake Nishimah

Nishimah came running but Manyata still wouldn't listen to her, so Nishimah went to wake Raz up.

Raz ran to Manyatas room

Raz- Manyata look it's me Bro open the door please I beg you

Manyata was still crying

Somehow Raz convinced Manyata to open the door

Manyata came out

Raz hugged Manyata

Manayta- Bro I saw him his face keeps coming

Raz- he isn't here I promise you sleep in Nishimahs room

J- I'm here with Jiji

Manyata- I want to go to Mama

Raz- Aunty is asleep

Everyone went to Nishimahs room

Raz- Manyata please try and sleep Nishimah and J are here with you and my room is right next door don't worry nothing is going to happen

Manyata- I'm trying Bro can I have sleeping tablets

Nishimah- No! sleeping tablets are bad for health look I'm here so and so is J

J- Jiji here's my ipod listen to music and you will fall asleep

Manyata- Thanks J, I will be ok Bhabhi is here you get some sleep now if I need anything I will call you

J- No Jiji I want to stay with you

Manyata- ok J

After a couple of days Uday came to visit the mahal it was time for Yuvrani training to begin

Shanaya- UV is downstairs (interrupted)

Manyata- I know he is it's time for Yuvrani training to begin, so Shanaya you better stay away from Uday

Shanaya- don't worry Manyata I will do me, Unnanti and J are going to the salon

Manyata- Ok good have fun

Shanaya- we will do same to you lucky tramp gets to spend time with UV. Byee

Shanaya left

We see Uday and Manyata in the study room

Uday- Princess these are a few book for you to read regarding royalty read them in your own time

Manyata- Uday these are such big book it's too much

Uday- come on Princess you're a lawyer you must of read so many thick books, these are nothing compared to them so don't complain. Now let's move on you have to be a good human being before being princess of Yuvrani

Manyata- yes I am a good person next

Uday- most of all Princess your hindi needs to improve see we are Rajwade meaning royals so we call ourselves 'hum' so whenever we speak we should mention the word 'hum' if we are talking about ourselves so for a example hum aapseh bhauth pyaar karteh hai

Manyata- I don't understand Uday speak English

Uday- Manyata you have to try and speak in hindi from now on your hindi teacher will come 4 times a day to teach you and your hindi exams will be end of the month

Manyata- right ok I will do

Uday- by the way I said I love you in rajwade language

Manyata- I love you too as a friend ok nothing more

Uday- Princess don't worry I know ok we are friends (to himself) aur bahuth jald aapko hamareh pyaar ka ehsaas hojaygha hamaari shaadi honehwalhi hai Princess very soon

Manyata- Uday carry on stop daydreaming

Uday- yeah once you are fluent in hindi rajpurohit ji will come and give you some tasks to do once you complete them, he will then decide if you should be crowned Yuvrani or not

Manyata- Uday I will try my best but you have to help me ok what are these tasks about?

Uday- I will help you Princess but I don't know what the tasks are? But I will make sure you are prepared mentally, physically and emotionally for these tasks. Most of all of the best traits of a Yuvrani/Yuvraj is patience, intelligence, cleverness. You need to know exactly what you are doing for the kingdom and its people. Sometime you have to think with the brain more than the heart.

Manyata- Uday I always think with the heart and brain both

Uday- Princess as Yuvrani you have to think with the brain because sometime our heart misleads us, our first priority is the kingdom and it's people.

Manyata- yeah but Uday it depends on the situation

Uday- yeah I agree well princess I have told you the important parts royal etiquettes you already know so that's fine. Your dressing style need to be like Yuvrani not just Manya… I have told the designer to design you some nice Indian dresses for you all different colours and designs of m choice hopefully you will like it.

Manyata- Uday I don't agree with this I wear what I feel comfortable in I can't handle all these asian clothes with heavy jewellery and high heels that's just not me.

Uday- come on Princess you are going to be crowned Yuvrani so you have to know all this you can't wear jeans and t-shirt

Manyata- Uday first of all how can you be so sure that I will be crowned Yuvrani first I have to complete all the tasks adequately then it will be decided if I am Yuvrani or not. (Angrily) To be honest I don't care anymore I wear what I like no one tell me what to wear

Uday- Princess you cant be angry about all this ok you need to obey the rules like you promised you do want to pursue your career so you have to make some sacrifices

Manyata- ok fine!! Now stop blackmailing you really are Yuvraj honestly who blackmails their friend you're so mean

Uday- sorry Princess what can I do if I don't blackmail you don't listen so yeah so Princess after your hindi class me and you will be having dinner together in my hotel

Manyata- yeah unfortunately I have to listen…. Yeah fine I will see you in the evening byee

Uday- Princess

Manyata- What?

Uday- you forgot these book take them all with you to your room

Manyata- Uday can you hold half please it's too many books

Uday- sorry Princess you need to hold them yourself

Manyata got all the books and went upstairs

It was evening now we see Uday and Manyata having dinner together.

Manyata- Uday I want to say something

Uday- yes Princess what is it?

Manyata- what if I don't pass any of the tasks will I still be able to become Yuvrani, you see I need to go London asap to fulfil my dream

Uday- Princess I'm sure you will pass and become Yuvrani so don't worry, but if the worse comes to the worse you don't pass the Yuvrani crown will be given to the next princess which is J

Manyata- Awesome yes so I will fail and then go to London yes yes nice plan

Uday- Princess don't get too happy if you are not crowned Yuvrani, there will be a swayambar for you in which you have to marry a Prince and become his queen. Your dream of doing your career will be over no going back to London.

Manyata- no that can't happen I will try my best to win

Uday- yes Princess you should

Manyata and Uday finished their dinner they were going to the car park, just the Manyata heard a familiar voice

Manyata got really scared

Manyata- Uday please lets go from here

Uday- what happened Princess?

Manyata- please lets go quickly (she was about to cry)

Uday- ok Princess

They got in the car

Someone knocked the door window

To be continued…………….

Hi guys so sorry for the late update got really busy so couldn't update yesterday, here's the next part I hope you all enjoy it. Do read and comment, criticise, suggest.

Thanks😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update. I think a strom is about to come in manayta's life. I'm really excited. Try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice...but really excited for the mysterious person...please update soon...thanks for PM and update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally finished exams! Got all ur pms LOL ..girl ur on a roll! so many updates in two weeks! impressive! ...gotta learn from u 😉 well, keep up the great work! I'm gonna try to catch up as soon as I can..Will be back 😉
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