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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 16

Manyata went back to the palace

Shanaya was sitting in the lounge

Shanaya- Manyata how is my UV?

Manyata- Uday is much better he gave me a message to give you, he misses you and loves you

Shanaya- AWWW!!!!! Miss you love you to UV!!!

Manyata- Yh now let me explain to you one thing Uday is a nice guy don't mess around with his brain, so if you are with him it better be long term not like 1-2 months. Shanaya I love you loads your one of my best friends but I know how you're like you never stay with one guy. Uday is my friend so I don't want you hurting him are you sure you're serious?

Now Shanaya was worried Manyata was taking all this very seriously

Manyata- if you ever hurt Uday I won't spare you

Shanaya- Manyata oh please enough of the lecture you're so concerned about UV don't tell your in love with him

Manyata- No I am not I care about him he's my friend I don't want him to be upset

Vijay comes

Vijay- Manyata Mami sa is calling you

Manyata- ok Vijay bhai.. I will talk to you later Shanaya

Manyata left

J was already with Komal and Shaina

J- Mama hum shagun kaise lehjasakteh hai I mean Jiji

Shaina- J tum tike keh rahiye ho lekin humneh Giriraj bhai seh vaada kiya tha jab hum Jaigar aiyeghe shagun lekeh aiyeghe, ab hum kaise Komal kya kareh

Komal- Hum Maasab aur Maharaj seh baat karteh hai

Shaina- Tike hai aap baat kijiye

Manyata- Mama, Ma I'm here what happened?

Shaina- Manyata beta your Ma has brought you this suit and jewellery we are going Jaigar so you should wear something traditional

Komal- Beta hum bareh pyaar seh aap keh liye yeh suit lekeh aiye hai

Manyata- (happily she hugged Komal) I will wear it Ma thank you

Dadisab- Manyata

Manyata- Jee Dadisab what is it?

Dadisab- Beta ab aap aur J jakeh jaldi seh tyaar hojayi aur haan humneh aapke dosto ko bhi keh diye woh bhi hamare saat chaleghe

J explained to Manyata

Manyata- ok lets go J get ready

J- Ji Jiji

Manyata and J leave

Komal- Maasab hum Jaigar jah rehay toh aapke vaade keh mutabhik kya hum shagun lekeh jaygheh

Shaina- Maasab Manyata sawaal poachenghi

Maasab- hum shagun saat mein lekeh jayghe Manyata aur Uday ki shaadi ka

Komal- Maasab hum bahuth jaldbazi kar rehay hai

Maasab- nahiye koi jaldbaazi nahiye kar rehay humneh dekha hai Manyata aur Uday ache dost bangaye hai, ab kuchi dinoh ki baad donah ki dosti pyaar mein badal jayghi.. jo hum chateh hai wahi hogha ab aap sab bhi tyaar hojayi

Komal- Jee Maasab jaise aap tike samjeh

Shaina- Maasab aap (interrupted)

Maasab- Nahiye hum apna faisala nahiye badlenghe aap tyaar hojayi hum Manyata ko samajaydenghe

Shaina- Jee Maasab

Komal and Shaina left

Manyata got ready and went to J's room

Manyata- J I'm done where are you?

J- I'm here Jiji I'm done too

Just then Vijay Bhai came

Vijay- My both sisters look beautiful now hurry up lets go Unnanti just phoned me she said Uday banaa is home now

J- you know Vijay bhai these day Unnanti is phoning you quite a lot and same with you what's going on? Jiji I'm sure something going on

Manyata- Vijay Bhai what's going on? I think you want to make Unnanti our Bhabhi very soon I can see it in your eyes

Vijay- Manyata, J you guys are so stupid now stop talking rubbish and let's go

J- we aren't talking rubbish now I'm convinced you like Unnanti

Manyata- Yeah I agree with J don't worry Vijay Bhai we are with you

Vijay- Manyata I like Unnanti a lot but I haven't told her yet ok so please don't tell her

J- see I was right now I will tell jiju sa

Vijay- No please don't tell Uday baana J I haven't even told Unnanti yet I don't know what she thinks about me and you want to go and tell Uday baana. Now I'm convinced J you really are Uday baana sister, see Manyata

Manyata- Vijay Bhai I'm on your side ok so please don't worry, yh J you should support Vijay Bhai not Uday end of the day Vijay bhai is our big brother

J- Yeah I know but you do know I love teasing you guys

Just then Menaka Vijay's Mom came

Menaka- Bacho chaliye ab niche sab intezaar kar rehay hai, Manyata beta your looking beautiful

Manyata- Thank You Bua sa

J- Bua sa aur hum

Menaka- Hamesha ki tarah beautiful

J- Thank you bua sa

Menaka- ab chaliye warna Maasab bahuth ghusah hoghi

They go downstairs

Manyata- Dadisab why are we taking all these gifts

Maasab- Beta hum rajwade hai yeh hamaari rasam hai yeh sab Uday keh liye hai

Shaina explained

Manyata- Ok Dadisab thats good now let's go

Shanaya- let me just fix my make up

Nishimah- Shanaya your make up is fine now let's go

Manyata- Yeah its fine stop complaining and let's go

Shanaya- Manyata why are you in a hurry to go I mean UV is my boyfriend not yours

Manyata wasn't very happy

Manyata- Uday is my friend ok why are you being so possessive for

Nishmah- Guys please stop it lets go your not little girls anymore stop fighting

Shanaya- Nishmah bhabhi its UV you know my UV!!!

Nishmah- we know lets go now you stop your UV jhap

We see everyone in the Royal cars with security going to Jaigar

After a while we see everyone arrive in Jaigar

Unnanti and Giriraj greet everyone and a special welcome for Manyata they throw roses on her and Unnanti does her aarti

Manyata- (to herself) why are they doing so much for me? I'm so confused we just came to see Uday he's ill these lot done so much arrangement... I think I'm over thinking too much as usual must be some Rajwade rasam

Giriraj- Ghama khani hum toh aaj bahuth khush hai aap sab hamare mahal aiye hai shagun lekar aiyi andar chalteh hai

Everyone goes inside

Giriraj- hamaari bahu toh bahuth hi pyaari lag rahiye hai (looking at Manyata)

Manyata- Thank you, everyone praising me today.. Unnanti where is Uday?

Unnanti- Dada apneh kamreh hai

Giriraj- Aap sab upar chalijayee

Shanaya- Thank you Giri uncle

Shanaya and everyone go upstairs

Shanaya hugged Uday

Shanaya- how are you UV darling

Uday- I'm fine Shanaya as you can see

Uday eyes were on Manyata

Shanaya hugged him

Shanaya- (whispers) UV stop looking at Manyata ok please do you want our plan to fail so focus on me not her ok…. Otherwise our plan won't be successful

Uday- Sorry she is looking beautiful I can't take my eyes of her

Shanaya- UV you have to ok

J- Shanaya will you get of now please you see we are all here to meet Jiju sa

Shanaya- yeah I know here you meet him too

J- jiju sa I hope you get well soon I'm very bored I want to go out, you Arjun has no time for me you get better soon then you can sort him out he's scared of you

Uday laughed

Uday- J don't worry once I'm fully recovered first thing I will do is sort Arjun baana

J- Thank you jiju sa (she hugged him)

All Manyata friends talked to Uday besides Manyata

Uday- princess what's the matter?

Manyata- nothing Uday how are you? I was just thinking something

Uday- I'm much better in a few days I will be fine come sit down

Manyata- no I'm fine here

Raz- Manyata sit down

Shanaya- leave her there don't know what's wrong with her you know UV since ages she wanted to come to see you, didn't even let me do my make up properly now look at her not even sitting down. UV I'm going to write on your arm ok as I'm here first she got a pen and wrote on his bandage

Everyone wrote something

Uday- princess you write something too

Manyata- Yeah to my best friend Uday get well soon lots of love from Manyata here you go done

Uday- princess what's the matter? You don't look happy

Manyata- Uday I'm fine don't worry about you take care of yourself you know my yuvrani training is delayed because of you

Uday- I know princess don't I will be fine in a few days I don't know princess I think there is something wrong

Manyata- nothings wrong, I'm just tired this necklace is too heavy I will be right back just going downstairs

Uday- princess

Manyata went downstairs

Raz- I will just go and see what's wrong with Manyata

Vijay- Uday banna don't know what's wrong with Manyata did the police arrest Raghubeer

Uday- No they didn't

Unnanti- The police are finding him he should be caught soon

Shanaya- guys I think my acting skills are awesome Manyata is gone in serious mode

Uday- Shanaya I don't think it's because of me and you there is something wrong somewhere

PRECAP- YUVRANI TRAINING BEGINS

Hey everyone I hope you enjoy the next part I know it's less Manveer scenes in this in the next part there will be loads, I been updating regularly and thanks to all my wonderful readers the fanfic has past 50 pages😃

I wont be updating 2mrw I'm going dentist there gna do my remaining 2 fillings😭🤢 last week i got saved coz dentist was ill this week have to go...so no update till thursdy/friday now keep reading 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
okayy anam nice 1 shyana n uv wow!! stupid M again update son intimate scenes nw lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Anam. I miss ManVeer scenes though 😔
But I'm sure you'll make up for it 😉
Waiting for the next part. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Anam! Thanks for the pm.

Eekks. Dentish! Take care and hope its not painful
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW how cute is that, everyone in Uday's family are welcoming Manyata as their Bahu, and she is so unware of it and also jealous of that shanaya😉.I want some Manveer scenes in the next chapter, enough of this kabab mein hadi shanaya, she is now getting on my nervers😡 And thanks for the PM doll. read the last three chapters in one go, loved it.😛
Edited by chitra_rao - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice one Anam.cont soon.egarly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing upate anam...manveer scenes were very less :( well pls get rid ov Kabab mein haddi shanaya...hope to see love confession ov manveer in a romantic place ;) in d nxt chapter..TY 4 d pm & update as soon as possible 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for d PM dear:)awesome update..waiting for d next one..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much for d PM yaar:)fantastic update...pls continue ASAP...

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