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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it was an awesome update..sorry I have read all the chapters a bit late as didn't have much time this week..but its really great an entertaining..but plz make Manyata less rude to Uday..I mean he has not done anything in the FF for her to be this rude to him...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gargib

hey it was an awesome update..sorry I have read all the chapters a bit late as didn't have much time this week..but its really great an entertaining..but plz make Manyata less rude to Uday..I mean he has not done anything in the FF for her to be this rude to him...




Thanks :D basically she don't want to marry him that's why she's being rude to him
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi everyone I hope you guys are fine, I was meant to update yesterday, I didn't save the part and my laptop froze I lost the part so I re-wrote it. It's not that good do read and comment, criticize and suggest.
Part 7
Manyata was really angry

Manyata- not everyone is desperate as them go marry them leave me alone

Uday- what can I do Princess, I am in love with you

Manyata- shut up u hardly know me so how can u say your in love with me stop talking rubbish now excuse me

He grabbed her hand made her sit down

Manyata- how dare you?

Uday- we are not done yet?

Manyata- what I already heard your baldy dad talk what else do u want?

Uday- you

Manyata- shut up I don't think so have you seen your face in the mirror

Uday- My face nothing wrong with it... I am very handsome prince you should be lucky your going to marry me

Manyata- lucky no I am not marrying you... Mama I'm done I am going to my room excuse me

Shaina- Ok beta go

Manyata left the dining table she was so relieved went straight to her room.

Manyata- thank god I got out of that dumb conversation what shall I do? I can't even run Mama and Papa are here I have no passport, I have accepted staying here as long as Mama and Papa are with me. All they care about is getting me married to that arrogant Uday, they promised his dumb family when I was little they didn't ask my permission then. When I was 20 got me engaged I agreed what a mistake they should of told me my fianc was a dumb prince, someone please help me

Uday entered

Uday- Princess I'm here to help you what is it?

Manyata- get out I don't need your help

Uday- Princess our official engagement is in 2 weeks so I have decided to take you shopping

Manyata- thanks but no thanks I am not interested in going shopping with you

Uday- come on princess girls love shopping and your refusing to go

Manyata- well I'm not like other girls right now I am not in the mood to talk to you, so get out

Uday- Princess make your mood then we don't have very long left till the engagement. The coronation will take place soon you will be crowned Yuvrani soon, we need to get to know each other end of the day we will be spending a lifetime together

Manyata- I am not interested in you, or being crowned Yuvrani, lifetime I don't even want to spend a second with you GET OUT!!!

Uday- Princess please don't be upset try and understand (he went near her)

Manyata- Don't you dare come near me GET OUT!!!

Uday- (Angrily) Princess stop shouting if you can shout so can I you have to try and understand, you are a princess you will be marrying me (interrupted)

Manyata- (Angrily)who are you to tell me what to do huh who do you think you are? no one I mean no one tells me what to do

Uday- well princess get use to it because now your not just Manya Sharma your Princess Manyata to be my queen Manyata Udayveer Singh soon. So you have to listen to me and to your family I will pick you up in half an hour so be ready its time to teach you how to be a proper rajwade where the red suit I brought for you, before you open your mouth to shout I am not taking no for a answer now hurry up

Manyata- (Angrily) I am Rajwade by blood you don't need to teach me how to be Royal. You arrogant prince you think too much of yourself I will set you straight, I will never ever marry you so get that thought out of your dirty mind. I am not going anywhere with you

Uday- Princess you finally admitted your Rajwade too, excellent now you see Rajwade always keep their promises. Dadisab has arranged our alliance since we were young ever since I have loved you. It's Dadisabs idea that we get to know each other properly and I teach you how to behave royaly, if you don't come I have my ways to take you there so if I were you Manyata baby I would quietly get ready and come downstairs ok now hurry up

Manyata- don't smirk at me I will never go with you, who cares what the old hag says

Uday- trust me Princess you will care get ready quickly or else I will be telling Dadisab and your both Moms that their Manyata has refused to obey them.
Manyata- don't blackmail me, I won't ever go

Uday- you got 20 minutes

Uday left
After a few minutes Manyata got ready wearing the red suit Uday had brought for her.
Manyata- Now I have to go I don't want Mama to be disappointed, eughhh this ugly red suit omg this kameez is so long its so bright, Uday has lost it if he wanted to gift me something should of gifted something decent not this long suit, now I have to wear heels so annoying (she wore heels) still long cant be bothered anymore (she got her scarf and bag went downstairs)

Shaina- Manyata beta what is this I could hear you screaming from downstairs

Manyata- it was Uday too he was irritating me so much

Shaina- beta u need to understand that everything has changed now your a princess to be queen, so beta get use to it Maasa
b wants you to go with Uday to learn some royal techniques see the history of the kingdom, get to know Uday beta. You look beautiful beta this colour really suits you

Manyata- Mama I look so funny this dress is so long, I am wearing heels too still long
Dadisab and Komal came

Dadisab- Manyata beta aap bahuth he pyaari lag rahiye hai
Komal saw Manyata
Komal- Aaj toh sabseh pyaari Rajkumaari lag rahiye hai

Uday was mesmerized seeing Manyata in the red suit

Manyata- Ma I look disgusting I mean who wears this I cant even handle this dress, I feel like crying

Shaina- this dress is meant to be like this beta don't worry beta you guys go now, Maasab chaliye hai study mein aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Manyata- whoever designed this dress are blind. Uday let's go
Dadisab, Komal and Shaina left

Uday was too busy looking at Manyata she noticed this she wasn't very happy

Manyata- (Angrily) Udayveer what happened let's go stop staring at me, let's go I don't have all day

Uday- Princess your in a hurry to go now, I don't blame you I have that affect on girls


Manyata- oh please I cant hear that speech of yours again affect my foot I'm only going because of Mama, Ma and the old lady now let's leave I have so much to do when I come back

Uday- whatever the reason your going with me

Manyata- let's go then get this dumb trip done with

Uday- sure Princess let's go (he put his arm out)

Manyata- no I can walk myself

Uday- Princess in case you fall
Manyata- I won't fall I can look after myself now let's go your seriously wasting my precious time
Uday- ok Princess suit yourself lets go
They went outside
Manyata- Uday where is your car?
Uday- not car princess it's a jeep this black one
Manyata- Ok here I thought you will have a posh car this jeep is eww
Uday- come on Princess sit down lets go I will bring the car next time
Manyata- where is my security?
Uday- Princess I am your security for today the guards aren't going, I have personally told them to take a day off
Manyata got worried
J and Vijay Bhai came
J- Jiji where are you guys going? You look beautiful very amazing
Manyata- to see the kingdom know about its boring history, please now you don't start about this dumb suit I look disgusting cant even handle this dress. I don't know why I have to see the Kingdom and all the other Royal stuff
J- Jiju you will love it don't worry you look great you will get use to it then you wont feel weird. The kingdom and it history is truly amazing
Vijay- Yeah it's very interesting
Manyata- Right guys if it's so interesting then Vijay Bhai you and J can join us
J- Sorry Jiji I'm very busy today I have a lunch date with Arjun, anyways Jiji I have already seen the kingdom
Vijay- Aur waise bhi hum kabab mein haadi nahiye banah chateh kyun J
J- That's very true Vijay Bhai Jiji you and Jiju Sa enjoy your trip
Manyata- I don't understand what did Vijay Bhai say this dumb Uday is laughing, Vijay Bhai say it in English
Vijay- Manyata all I said is you guys enjoy your trip ok I have to go now I have an meeting Mama Sa must be waiting
Vijay and J left laughing
Manyata- what's so funny? I'm so annoyed
Uday- Princess don't be annoyed you're going to love this trip
Manyata- more like hate it now let's go
We see Shaina talking to Maasab and Komal
Shaina- Maasab humneh apna faisla sunah diya hai aapko, ab aap jo tike samjeh
Komal- Lekin Shaina Manyata abhi mehal aiyi hai abhi Yuvrani bani he nahiye aur aap chahthi hai keh hum unki shaadi bhi jald seh jald kardeh
Shaina- Jee kyunki kuch sach hai jo aap nahiye jaanthi hum nahiye chateh keh haamari beti ka guzarah hua kal phir laut aiye aur auske aaj barbaad ho
Komal- Phir bhi hum chahteh hamaari beti poori tarah seh humhe apnaiye, yuvrani baneh aur phir hum unki shaadi karenghe, abhi toh woh Uday ko janeh laghi itni jaldi woh unseh shaadi nahiye kareghi.
Rajmata- Ek maharani banah koi choti baat nahiye hai pehele woh Yuvrani toh baneh apni zimardari samjeh, hindi sikhe hai apna nazariyah badleh. Joh bhi baat hai aap humhe batiye kaunsah guzarah hua kal hai hamaari Manyata ka
Shaina- Hum abhi aap ko nahiye batha sakteh akhri faisala aapka hai jo aap tike samjeh
Back to Manyata and Uday
Manyata- Look Uday I am getting very bored looking at this kingdom and these old photographs
Uday- Manyata this is Devgar ancestrol Kingdom all these pictures are of your Ancestors, that is your Grandfather he gave his life up in the war between Devgar and Ravghar
Uday carried on explaining the history of Devgar
Uday- These are swords that the soldiers fought with and that's the practice ground
Manyata- Interesting how about a sword fight Uday?
Uday- Sword fight?
Manyata- Yeah if I win you will have to break this alliance I Princess Manyata challenges you to a Sword fight Prince Udayveer
PREVIEW- SWORD FIGHT
WHO WILL WIN???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow that was interesting Anam .When will Manyata stop shouting at Uday 😆
Precap sounds interesting. Waiting for the sword fight 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc update anam, jus waiting for sword fight
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww... that's interesting...sword fight...i hope in ur FF uday wins...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both the updates ❤️..M is so irritated all the time 😆...she seriously need to listen to others...omg sword fyt...i want UV to win...plzz UV don't lose here...and wht is M's past...??...y r they so scared of it??...so curious to knw...plzz update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Thanks for the pm.

Pls dont let M shout on Uday all the time!! Precap is interesting. I hope that sword fight will bring them close and totally opposite of what happened in the show.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Wah!!!!!! Kya bat hai!!!!!!!👏
Wow, that was fast!!!!!!!😲😃
Awesome Update, totally luved the YADU part, poor Manyata!!!!!!!!!😆
I'd like it better if Manyata was more childish than rude!!!!!!😛 And Uday falling in love wid his crazy princess, lol!!!!!😉
thnx alot!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️

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