manveer SS- Love feeling:give new birth parts-3rd to50th(page-1 to 58) - Page 31

Wow awesome yaar.loved it 2 the core as always.cont soon Pari sweetheart:-):-))
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Thnks 4 fulfiling my wish. Love the update.

Hey Pari. I'm really very happy. At last J-Jaggu ka secret out.

Wow yaar again a nice update..yeppi J ki toh helo hi keh bat abhi bye bye hogi.oh god yeh larki shudhar hi nahi sakti hum dono ki ss main.i mean yaar aise idias tere chotey seh dimaag main ata kaha seh hai.n one more thing Nia nahi Nikammi.samajhney ki koshish kar Nia agar kehty rahegi toh toh nikammi ki adad hi par jayegi itni respect ki na.anyways abhi main wait kar rahi hoo manveer ahem ahem(suhagrat)ki.hayee...cont soon.

Wow!! What a dhaasooo update. Loved it!! :)

Cant wait for uday -manyata marriage :) :)

waooo finally our manveer meet n r geeting married...plzz next part jaldi update karooo...where we have lot of manveer hot n steamy romance...

loved loved loved ur update yrr...finally J aur J ki sachayi bahar aa hi gayi...so happy...omg this gal...kaisi ladki h ye...abhi bhi apni behen ke peeche padi hui h...ufff...omg UV finally proposed M...hayeee...it was sooo cute yrr...though i didn't expect M's reaction when J did all the drama at giri's b'day...i mean c'mon she says tht she luvs him a lot aur itna sa bhi trust nhi...i know usne pehle bhi dhoka khaya hua h so uska mind pehle yehi sochega...bt still nt once she thought ki UV aisa nhi kr sakta...at tht time...i was kinda dissapointed with M then...bt thank god she acted sensibly wen she came to knw there's something going on...and omg yrr UV and Unzie are jst the best bhai behen ever...love them...J kuch seekho unzie...chalo VB se hi seekhlo yrr...vo nhi to jaggu hi sahi...dekho ab to vo bhi sudhar gaya h 😆...are yrr plzzz cont. soon...and pari sry itni dino baad cmmnt krne ke liye...and sooo sooo sry once agn cz nw i won't be commenting at all...bt jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha tha...i always loved ur story still do and will always do...toh wenever u update sochna ki i cmmnted it was awesome...cz m sure i wud be thinking the same while reading...luv ya...!!! ❤️

Manveer ss
Love feeling-give new birth..

Part-36...

Uday pic d manyata on his arms..
Or mandap ki trf jata h...

Pandit start mariage...
Jay s jealous bt cntrl krti h apne aap ko...
Manyata-uday little romentic eye-cntct.
Nd manyata blushng...

Uday dhire se manyata k kan me bolta g'ab to tumpe haq h mera.'
Manyata say'hmm sir.'
U:sir,aacha tum abi mujhe sir bulaugi...
M:to or kuch socha ni abi...
Manyata janbujh k pange leti h uday se...
U:chinta mt kro silent mode main tumhari soch badal dunga.
Manyata make face lyk kid..'ye silent mode kisko kha?
U:jb tk tum mujhe sir bulaugi tb tk tumhara nam yhi h!
M:hawww...

Pandit:manglsutr phnaaye?
Jay(dhire se):tumhare pas to mangl.
Tbi jagat mangalsutr nikalta h'jay agr tumhari sachai uday saamne ni lata to main ladeta..or main tumse shadi krne k iraade se hi aaya tha.'..

Uday bi manglsutr nikalta h,both btwn lovly cntct nd then wo use manglsutr phnata h...

Manyata use pyar se dekhti h,wo ni dekh rha h...
Manyata thout'jis din aapse pyar hua mujhe,usi din nai zindgi ka ehsaas hua tha mujhe.'thanku meri zindgi wapas krne k liye...

Pandit:aaplog apni-2 wifes ko is coin se sindur unki maang me bhariye..

Jagat fulfil jay 's maang...

Uday bi manyata ki maang me sindur bhar deta h,then manyata eyes close krleti h..
Uday use dekhta h.
Manyata again thout:'aap ho to sb h,wrna kuch ni,main bi ni'...
Manyata open d eyes,uday use dekhta h'wo ishare se puchta h kya hua??
Manyata head se reaction deti h,kuch ni..
brijraj or komal apni dono daughters k kanyadan dete h..ofcourse all cryng...

Then,

Pandit:ab aaplog agni k 7th faire(fairround)lijiye??
Jay-jagat rounds
Jay faire lete tym srf manyata ko brbaad krne k baare me soch ri h..

Uday nd manyata khade hote h,
Uday apna hath aage krta h,then manyata apna hath uske hath me rkhti h..
Wo tb faire lete h...
Manyata-uday jb faire lene start krte h,both remember all moments jo unke the...
Uday thout-'aaj se meri saanse tumhein dekh k chlegi'
M thout-'aaj main puri hui aapki.'.

Then bidaai tym..
Brijraj hath jodte h'uday k samne.
Gr:aap chinta mt kriye manyata meri beti h...
U:jagat,tum apni jimedari pe jay ko leke ja rhe ho...soch smjh k rkhna ise..

Manyata jay k pas jati h'jay tu mujhse gle ni milegi..
Jay'ni di,mujhe tumse bichdne ka gum ni h.'
Wo chali jati h..
Manyata sad ho jati h...

V:finaly,jo jiski kismat me tha,wo use mil gya..
Jay use guse se dekhti h,wo chup ho jata h.
'hm to aise hi kh rhe the...
Bhai,ab apko uday sir khna riste k 7th nainsaafi hogi,hm aapko jiju bulaynge..
U:chalo kisi ne to sir bolna choda...
Manyata smile krti h..

Then sb chale jate h...
Phle jagat-jay niklte h,wha jagat k ghr pe shanti ne saari taiyari ki h,ladies bi aai..

Obivously jagat ye sb dekh k thoda surprized hota h ki ye kisne kiya h..
Then shanti aati h'arey jagat aao beta jay ko leke.
Jo rasme hoti h wo puri krte h...
J:aunty ye sb..
S:beta,jeisa baba mere liye weisa tu..
Manyata baby meri bhu h to jay bi to h..
Uday baba ne mujhe phone krke ye sb krne ko kha...
Maine krdiya..
Ab main chalti hu wha bi jrurt h meri..
J:g aunty,yha se jyada jrurt h..
S:jay beta jo hua bhul ja,naye sire se apni zindgi shuru kr...
Jay lightly smile kr deti h...

Uday-manyata in car..
Uday apna hath manyata k hath pe rkhta h...
Dono phr hand bondng krlete h...

U:to,kya tohfa chahiye tumhein mujhse?
M:mujhe mera tohfa mil gya,ab kuch ni chahiye..
U:kya?
Manyata uday k chicks pick up krti h'aap'...
Uday use 4head kiss krta h...

Then wo phuchte h,ghr..
Un:jise main bhabhi k rup me dekhna chahti thi,mera dream pura ho gya...

1lady:arey uday tumhari dulhan bhoot khubsurat h..

2nd lady(unki godi pat animal me ek wite col. Ka choti si kitten bi h.):najr na le tum dono ki jodi ko...

Shanti saari rasme krti h..
Then wo sb ki blessings lete h...

Uday apne frnds k 7th niche ruk jata h.
Or manyata ko grls rum me lejati h...
Un:kuch mja ni aa rha h,bhabhi mind chalo apna,sbko hsane ka..kuch to koi kre,bda boring lg rha h...
M:aunty main apki ye kitten 10min.k liye le skti hu.
A:ha beta lekin dedena,weise krogi kya?
Un:of aunties bahr jaiye,ye grls k bich ki bat h..
All laughng...
M:aunty ye smjhdar to h na.?
A:arey bhut smjhdar h,suno sweety jeisa ye khe weisa krna..
Wo krti h meow meow..
Aunties chali jati h..

Then grls kya krti h including manyata bi..
Wo bad pe cution rkti h,nd uske uper sweety(kitten)ko beitha deti h'or smjha deti h bhaagna ya abi mt uthna'or uske uper manyata ka duptta leke dal deti h...

Wo aisa lg rha h jeise bridal beithi h...
All grls waitng uday...sb parde k piche chip gai h...

Uday aata h khushi-2

Or bad ki trf dekh k smile krta h...

Or all grls apni hsi pe bdi mushkil se cntrl kr ri h...
Sbne apna hath muh pe rkh k tightly hs ri h,manyata bi..

Then uday bolna start krta h'pta h manyata tum meri zindgi me aagai ho,ab tum mujhse kbi dur ni hoaugi,infact main tumhein dur hone ni dunga...
Wo ake beith jata bad pe,us kitten saamne..'wo little cryng krke bolta h main dar gya tha,ki tum mujhe hmesha k liye aaj juda ho jaogi..'

Manyata wo bhul gai ki kya plan kiya h,wo uday ki baatoin me lost hogai thi...

'main tumhare liye gft ni,tum mere liye ho,wo ek nackless uske saamne khol k rkh deta h,ye h mera gft tumhare liye.ek or bi h pr wo kal milega...

Jb manyata koi reaction ni deti to uday ko ajeeb lgta h.
'lgta h sharma ri h,ghunghat uthana hi pdega...

Jb wo ghunghat uthata h to wo dar j khada ho jata h,or wo billi meow meow krti niche khud jati h,

U:manyata..

Saari grls tej hsti-2 bahar aati h...
Manyata ka cncentration break hota h,nd suddn she start laughng..

Un:hahaha,o my god,bhabhi bi mst mst trike nikalti h...
Ye manyata ni h dada..ye billi hi h...

U:o,to ye tumhari bhabhi...ka plan h.

Un:ha main chlti hu,ab..jitna ldna h ld lo...
Uday manyata ko naughty tarike se dekhta h'ldna to bhut h,or bhut se tarike se...
Manyata blushng..

Un:gud nyt both...

Jay standng nearng window,jagat cum in rum...
Jay dar jati h,lekin kuch bolti ni h...
Jagat alg gusse me h,
Jay ka alg gussa h...
Jagat:mind me manyata-uday k khilaaf bna ri hogi...tum isi kam me tej ho...
Jay:shut up jagat sb tumhar i wjh se hua h..
Main whi hu jha se aai hu...
Or uday ne apni richnes dikhani shuru krdi..
Jagat:faltu ki baatein mt kro...or chilana bnd kro..harm phuchega tumhein ni mere bacche ko..

Jay:wo guse me sone chali jati h...
Jagat thout'ab tumhein jhelne ki adat dalni pdegi'roj ki afat..

Uday close d door..
Nd wo dhire-2 manyata k pas jata h..
Manyata bck turn ho jati h...
Uday softly touched her hand..
Manyata breath fastly up nd down...

Uday touched manyata waist...
Manyata totaly lost his arms...
Nd then she s tightly hug krleti h...
He rubbed hr bck,
Manyata 's feel lyk swt pain in ful body,nd she s lightly smile...
Uday don't cntrl his fellings,bt use cntrl krna tha...
Sudden wo manyata ko chod deta h'main tumhare liye gift laya hu,tumne dekha ni.'..

Manyata ko bda ajeeb lgta h,lekin wo bole bi to keise...
U:ye nackless main tumhare liye laya hu,phn k dekho...

Manyata wo mirror k saamne khadi hoke phnti h
Uday thout'pta h manyata ye ajeeb h pr tumhare liye surprize h mrng tk ka wait kr lo,main khud tumhari baaho me kho jana chahta hu pr...

Uday chup-chap janbhujh k use khta h
Gud nyt...manyata..

Manyata sochti h jo mjak kiya wo inhe bura lg gya...
Wo bad pe dusri side baith jati h or uday ko sry feel najro se dekhti h...

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Pari



I m sry is couple ko thoda thadpane k liye,bt jiska(ahem-ahem)wo jaldi hoga...mere pe na shi lekin uday pe to trust kro...sb hoga...lol.

Pari

Waitng for ahem ahem scene