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manveer ss
Love feeling-give new birth.
Part-17

M:aap ne kha tha,na ki dhusman bnake ni dost bnake bhejuga...mujhe lga ek bar dosti krke dekh leti hu..
Uday khush h or braclet leke manyata ko phnata h...
Sudden mr.frakin ate h manyata k pas
M.f-will u dance wid me?
Uday ki smile gayeb ho he thout'ye manyata k piche kyn pdh gya h?
M:yes,ofcourse sir..
U(thout):ye or shone pe suhaaga,mna bi to kr skti thi,ab kya kru main.?

Jagat:hy,uday how r u?maine kha tha,main aaunga jrur is party me..kya bat h bda tns lg rha h?mr.frankin kha h?
U:wo dance kr rhe h,jwani yad aai h unhe apni,demit..abi thodi deir me milta hu..
J:chal tu mujhe bad me milwata rhiyo,lekin main tujhe apni grlfrnd se milwana chahta hu jagat give sound'jaynandini'..
Jay aati h..
J:uday ye h jaynandini meri dost.or ye h mera yar mera bhai uday..
Jay:hi uday..jagat tumhare baare me hmesha bat krta h...
Uday ka dhyan manyata ki trf hota h'hi jay,i hope u njoy party..xcuse me..wo chala jata h...

Jay:jgt ye uday bda preshan lg rha h.kyn?
Jagat:pta ni,chalo dance krte h...
J:ofcourse..jeise hi wo dance floor ki trf bdhti h,wha se manyata aa ri hoti h then suden wo jagat ka hath pkdti h or wha se bahr chali jati h..
J:kya hua,achanak.
Jay:jagat,yha main ni ruk skti..
J:pr kyn?
Jay:yha meri di bi h,pta ni keise.?
Plz chalo..khin bi chalo lekin chalo..

Or achanak piche se vijay ata h,jay use dekh k or dar jati h..

Phr wo jagat ka hath pkdti h or whi ek hotel k rum me chup jati h...
Jy-ye di hmesha meri khushiyo pe paani fair deti h...
I m sry jagat,tumhen wha rhna jruri tha..tumhein jana h to jao.main chali jaugi.
J:tumse imp.kuch ni..

Vijay bhai nter party
Vb:manyata bhai..hm aagye,keisi car snd ki thi hmein ruk ruk k aye h.bt i m hapy hm phuch gye...
Manyata,unanti k 7th khadi thi..
M:vijay bhai,aa gye na..ye mere sir ki sis.or meri dost unanti sharma...
Or unanti ye mere vijay bhai..
V:i tell u,hi unanti..
Manyata bhai ki cmpny keisi lgi apko..
Un:hi vijay,manyata to bhoot pyari h,lekin ye bhai khne ka chaker smjh ni aya..
V:wo kya h na hm 3 bhai bhan h,bhan jeisa behave h ni kisi ka to sb ek dusre ko bhai khte h..weise aap bhai shabd se dur hi rhiye,hm srf apne bhaiyo k muh se bhai sunna pasnd krte h..
Unanti make cnfused smily face..
All launghng...

Manyata bhai agar tumhein aitraaz na ho to main unanti se kuch puch skta hu
M:ha vijay bhai puchiye na
Uday vijay k piche khda hota h
V:unanti tumhein dance krna ata h??agr ni bi ata h to main sikha dunga vijay k hath me unanti ka hath h,ab sikhne k liye to dance floor pe chlna pdega..
Manyata uday ko dekhti h'vijay bhai ye bhut jyada ho rha h,aap jra limit
V:kya,manyata bhai,unanti ko ans.dene dijiye.
M:apne piche dekhiye..
V:piche kya h,wo dekhta h,uday khda h..koi khda h,hmein kya?
U:hello mr.vijay.
M:ab to gye vijay bhai..
V:aap kaun??

Un:ye mr.uday sharma h..sharma company k malik,or mere uday bhai..
V:kya?wo unanti ka hath chod deta h,'wo unanti dance k liye puch ri thi,maine mna kr diya uday sir..'
Sb drke khde h uday se lekin vijay ki bat sunke uday hsne lgta h,or use dekh k sb..
Jb uday hsta h,tb manyata smiy face k 7th use dekhti h she thout'aap khush bhoot ache lgte h,hste huye dekh k lgta h meri zindgi khush ho gai'
Un:manyata kya soch ri ho?
M:h,kuch ni..
U:vijay jao unanti ko dance sikhao...
Vb:manyata bhai khti thi,aap bhoot angry wale ho bt no u r vry swt...
Wo unanti ko leke chla jata h...
Uday-manyata 7th khade hoke unka dance dekhta h...
V:unanti,tum bdi cute ho..mujhe lgta h hmein ek simple dost bn jana chahiye..
Un:u try flirt with me?
V:no,i m nt try
I m definately flirt with u...
Both launghng...

Uday unhe dekhte-2 apna hath manyata ki trf bdhata h 'will u dance wid me?
Manyata surprized hoti h'yes,uday k hath me apna hath dete huye...

Both in eyecntnct..bt dis tym manyata kuch jayda lost h...
uv's hand on her waist n
movng softly..cutely eye
contact...
Than start romentic dance'
Both lost in each other
nd play d bckgrund musib are'
tu hai jo ab baaho me,karaar h
rab ka sukraana,
saanso me h nasha,khumar h,
rab ka sukraana,

Uday fuly passion k 7th use apni trf tightly touch krta h.

tuhi ab mera din h,imaan h,
rab ka sukraana..
Mera klmaa h tu,aazaam h
rab ka sukrana.

uv hold her hand n mad her
turn round round 2 tymz..

Tu mila to sb mila,
ab kisi se kya gila,
aa tujhme simtu,teri baaho me
bikhru,
tu mila to sb mila,
ab kisi se kya gila...aa main bikhru
main teri baaho me..fanaa ho jau..
he hold her in
her arms..
nd both again eye sesion..
Tu hi duniya meri,jahan h
rab ka sukraana..
khawbo k khaylo ki udan h
Rab ka sukraana..
he hold her hand and moves
from right to left...
Wo cntinusly ekdusre ko dekh rhe h..
(Music nt stop,wo chal rha h)

2sri trf jay-jagat out of cntrl ho rhe h...
Jagat ne jay ko hug kr rkha h..nd jay uski shrts k buttons open krti h...
Un dono ka bi eye session start hota h..

"Sbse ho jau pre,
Jo ishara tu kre,
Ab to rhna h tujhi me,
ghumshuda hu main o teri baaho me..
Zazbo ka ab to nya byan h,
Rab ka sukraana,
Nya rutbaa nai shan h
Rab ka sukraana.."

Ise phara pe uday imagination ki wo or manyata akele party hall me h dance kr rhe h..
Manyata ne uday ko romenticaly hug kiya h..
Or uday use pyar se 4head kiss krta h,or manyata use chick pe kiss krti h.
Tbi party me clappng hoti h nd uday ka imagination break hota h,or wo apne gaalo ko touch krta h,or phr blushng krta h..
Uday:unanti jagat kha h,mujhe mr.frakin se milwana h use..
Un:pta nh dada abi to yhi tha,lekin main uski frnd se ni mili..
U:lgta h wo chla gya apni grlfrnd k 7th ghumne..uski adat na ek din use le dubegi..
M:ye jagat kaun h?
Un:wo manyata ofice ka accountant maneger h..
U:maneger bad me h wo,sbse phle mera dost mera bhai jeisa h wo..mein uspe bhoot trust krta hu..or mera trust kbi wo todega ni mujhe pta h...
Maine kuch socha h uske liye...bad me btauga..
M:maine aaj tk ni dekha ofice me unhe..
U:ah,wo jra mr.sexsena k 7th deal krne me bg tha..bt wo jaldi hi ofice ayega...
M:hmmm...

Mr.fakin 2 manyata:u r 2beautiful...u r dress is so pretty..

Uday kisi se bat krte-2 unki trf dekhta h..wo phr gusa ho jata h.

M:thanku sir'm dhire-2 khti g'ye buddhe ki problem kya h,jb se party me aai hu tb se picha ni chod rha h'
She feel uncom4table..
Phr ek ekdum se mr.frakin manyata ka hath pkad lete h,manyata dar jati h..
Mr.frakin uske hath pe kiss krne jate hi h ki uday manyata ka hath pkad k khinch leta h...
Manyata tb gud feel krti h jb uday aa jata h..
U:mr.frakin u meet my father or nt?
M.F:no..
U:unanti,mr.frakin ko dad k pas le jao.
Un:okay,dada...
Wo mr.frakin ko leke chali jati h..
Manyata bolna start krti h'ye agrez dikhne bi bhaynak hote h,piche pde hue h kb se,ek thapad kha liya na mere hath se to dubara india ni ayenge ha ni to,arey jan na phchaan kiss dene lge,sir aap to jan phchan k ho,aap kis...
Uday achanak surprise hoke use dekhta h...
Manyata bi use dekhti h...
U:kya?apni bat complete kro..
M:ah,ah,is mr.frakin k 7th deal kijiye or yha se bhaagaiye..bs yhi khna tha..wo jane lgta h..
Uday uska hath pkdta h'ni jo line adhuri chod di h,ki main jan phchaan ka hu..'wo wali bat..
Manyata ghabraa jati h'jaldi me,apna hath leave krti h nd wha se chali jati h'...

Manyata,unanti,vijay nd gr..
V:manyata tum yhi se mere 7th chalogi ya,kal hi aaugi.
Un:ni,manyata kal sham tk apne ghr hogi,lekin plz abi ni..
Gr:vijay aap bi chaliye,kal manyata k 7th aap bi aa jana..
V:ni,sir..actualy mujhe mrng me hi kuch jruri kam h..
M:vijay bhai,aap chinta mt kriye,kal main aa jaugi...

2nd side
Jay fuly flirt mood with jagat.
Jay:jagat mujhe ni pta tha ki meri di or mera bhai dono ayegnge..lekin tumhari baaho me ake lg rha h jo hua shi hua..
Jagat ful romentic mood,jagat is shrtless..
Both hot eyecntct nd jagat jay ko tightly hug krleta h...
Jagat(thout):tumhein drane ka tarika mil gya...
Lights off...

Precap-manyata ke jane ka tym,uday nd unanti k chote-2 ideas manyata ko rokne k...

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Wow!! Thanks for the pm honey!

LOved your update!! Even I dont want manyata to leave uday's house!!

Loving ur FF. pls continue soon

Hey nice one yaar.thanks for the meetha fruit.it was cho cute.omg kahi mujhe diabetic na ho jaye.tumhare iss ss ne mera bura haal karliya.main itne meethe fruits aur choolates keh chakkar main moti hoti jaa rahi hoon.n mr.freakin seriously budhe ko kya lagta hai ki abhi vi vo jawaan hai.n precap is so awesome.even i dont want M to leave Uv's house.because abhi toh bohout ahm ahem baki haina.

how cutee...s[ecially da dance scene...n how uday snatches manyata's hand 4m mr.franklin...is really sweet...n manyata kia baat hai uday apna hai is liay kiss kar sakhta hai...waooo...do continue soon...

Great job!!!specially the dance seen...loved it dear...please update soon...

omg it so so so awesome...i don't knw where to start...first of all the dance was fab...loved it ❤️...plus the song...i totally love the song...and the way u wrote it with the scenes...was awesome...and UV ki jealousy toh mashallah h 😆...lol...the ways he tried to get M out of Mr. franklin's chungul ws really funny...and M ka kiss wala dialogue...ahem ahem...even i wanna knw the full dialogue 😉...aww...M don't leave UV's house...plzz...hope UV and Unzie ki tricks kaam kr jaye...really eager to know wht they'll do...update soon!!!

loved it...awesome...thanks for the PM and update soon...

Beautiful,cute,amazing update...aww dance seq was awesome...vijay,unnati,n manyata conversation was amazing...ughhh i hate dat mr,frakkin budha,wat did he think of himself,ABI TOH MEIN JAVAN HOON...hope manyata stay at udayz home

Manveer ss
Love feeling-give new birth.
Part-18
Uday,manyata nd gr...
Mr.frakin:mr.uday party was awosum..
I love u r style u r attitude..
Bt u r so lucky becoz manayata u r secretry is gud grl nd responsibility grl..
I like it...
Uday manyata ki trf dekhta h..or manyata khush ho jati h apni tarif sunke..
M:sir,mr.frakin kbi-2 aachi baatein bi krlete h.ha ni to.
U:manyata chup ho jao..
M.F-I will meet u 2mmrow in u r ofice
Mr.uday..
U:ya sure sir.u r most welcum..in my company.
M.r:nd u r dad mr.GIRIRAj grt man...
Okay fyn,tc all of u...bye.c u 2mmrow..
U:gud nyt mr.frakin..
I hope u njoy party.tc..both hand shake.
Wo chale jate h...
U:to dad hm bi chale..
Vijay aata h
'manyata bhai hmbi chlte h ab,kal milege ghr pe'
M:ha bhai,chalo bye.gud nyt.
Vb:unanti nd uday sir nd ofcourse uncle aap se milke bhoot aacha lga,nd thanku hmein party me aane k permision dene k liye..
Bye ol of u..

Gr:beta aap or manyata aaiye..
Main or unanti dusri car me aa jayenge..
U:pr dad hm 7th..
Un:of oh,to dusri car kaun leke ayega dada..
U:oh,ha..ok...
Manyata-uday ek car me jate h...
M:sir aapko kya lgta h,mr.frakin impres huye h mujhse to huye hi h lekin kya hmari party se...
U(irritation me):ha tumse impres ho gye h to party bi to tumne arange ki thi...lgta to yhi h..bt fingr crosed sb shi ho..
M:ye vamp.ko dost bna liya,pta ni kb-2 bdhak jaye..ha ni to.
U:ye tum dhire-2 apne aap me kya bolti rhti ho.
M:ni,kuch ni..apne aap se bat krne ka mja hi kuch or hota h..

M:don't wory sir sb shi hoga...
U:manyata ek bat puch skta hu?...
M:ha,ha jruri,mna krugi tb bi to puchege hi..
U:wo apni lyn complete kro na jo party ne adhuri chod di thi..
Manyata ghbra jati h,apni chuni ko bar-2 fold kr ri h.
'mere muh se ye bat kya nikali,ye to piche hi pd gye'..bhagwan g bchao...
U:relax,mt btao.happy.
He thout ek din tum khud btaogi...

Wo dono ghr phuchte h...
M:sir,gud nyt
Mujhe packing bi krni h..or kal sham tk main chali jaugi...bye.
U:suno to.man..
'main tumhain jane ni dena chahta,main jb tumhare 7th hota hu,to bs..kuch ajeeb sa aacha lgta h'
Uday make a sad face wo apne rum me chla jata h...

Manyata in hr rum...
Finaly,kal main apne ghr chali jaugi...lekin mujhe aacha ni lg rha h..kyn?chodo,mujhe papa,maa,dadi,jay sbse milugi 10days k bad...

Uday(apne rum me) manyata ki snap dekhta h,
Or udhr manyata(apne rum me) uday ki snap dekhti h,
U:mt jao manyata,abi to dosti kiye hue ek din bh ni hua..

M:dosti ho gai h sir,maine aappe trust krke apko dost bnaya h,bhagwan kre ye dosti saalo tk janmo tk rhe..

U:mujhe ni pta main tumhein kyn rokna chahta hu,bs in 10dino me tumhari adat ho gai h..

M:in 10dino me apnapan lgne lga tha,lekin main to kam se aai thi...

U:main waada krta hu manyata,tumhara trust dubara kbi ni toduga..

M:mujhe pta h sir aap apni dosti aache se nibhayenge...

Both snap se talk krte-2 so gye,snap dono k sine se lgi thi...

Vb:dadi g kya abi tk party me se jay ni aai?

Ds:uska phone aya tha,apni frnd k ghr ruk gai h,kal aajayegi.manyata keisi thi vijay?
V:dadi,manyata ne apne pure kam me100%diya.
Bhoot aachi party arrane ki thi usne..
Dadi wo khush thi,aap chinta mt kro,usne apne aap ko sambhal liya h...
Ds:main uski zindgi phle jeisi rangeen dekhna chahti hu..bhagwan kre meri bachi k pas ab koi dukh na aye...

In mrng...
Uday wake up nd apne hath me wo manyata ki snap dekhta h,or phr ekdum se use yad aata h'oh shit aaj to manyata ko...no..
Uday uth jata h,or manyata k rokne k tricks sochne lgta h,udhr unanti bi yhi soch ri h...
U:kya kru?aisa ki manyata ruk jaye...
Wo bahr jata h,or 2no car ki hwa nikal deta h...dad to manyata ko car se hi bhejenge,lekin car to...wo eyes mermizing krta h.

Udhr unanti manyata k rum ka drwaza bnd krdeti h'ab na darwaaza khulega,na manyata baahr niklegi...
Manyata tbi uske piche se aati h'unanti tum yha kya kr ri ho,aaj itni jaldi uth gai.'
Unanti dar jati h'main kuch ni,wo tum bahr ho...
M:ha,aaj ghr jana h,to jaldi aankh khul gai...to apne liye tea bnane chali gai...
Un:aacha,tum tea piyo,main aati hu..bye.
M:bye,ise kya ho gya?wo apna door kholti h to wo dekhti h bnd h to ye unanti ye krne aai thi..of oh pta ni kya ho rha h...

Gr bahr atae h mrng walk pe jaane k liye..wo apni car ko dekhte h'driver ye dono car ek 7th pancture keise ho gye'
D:g shaheb pta ni.
Gr:pta ni,jald se jald thik krwaiye...9bje se phle thik ho jana chahiye...
D:g..
Manyata nhane jati h,tbi rum me unanti nter krti h'or wo manyata k kuch kpde,kuch saaman uthake apne rum me le ja ri hoti h tb uday bi wha phuch jata h
Wo unanti ko aise dekh k apna muh bnaleta h'idhr kya kr ri ho?or ye manyata ka saaman'
Unanti uday ko apne rum me le jati h'dada plz aap manyata ko mt btana,lekin main manyata ko or kuch din rokna chahti hu.'
Uday ye bat sunke khush hota h'phle btadeti hm dono milke plan soch lete.'
Un:dada,aap bhi...
U:ha,mera man bi use...wo chla jata h...
Unanti'dada aap badal gye ho,apki zindgi pe pyar aa gya h'...
Manyata bathrum se bahr ati h,'ye mera saaman kha gya,ye ho kya rha h?
Shanti 2 manyata
M:aunty mera kuch saaman ni mil rha h,pta ni abi to rum me tha..
S:tu chinta mt kr main dhund dungi..tu ja apni or taiyari kr,main tera saaman dhund k lati hu..
M:g..
Shanti unanti k kmre me uski tea leke jati h unanti bathrum me h
'unanti beta apni tea le lena..
Phr wo dekhti h manyata ka saaman uske rum me h,to wo uthati h saara saaman or manyata k rum me le jati h..
S:manyata beta,ye rha apka saaman..
M:thanku anuty,bs ho gai meri packing..chle aunty.
S(thout):main tujhe is ghr ki bahu k rup me dekhna chahti hu..uday baba jitna tere 7th khush rhte h,utna kisi k 7th ni...
'ha beta chalo'

breakfast table pe...
Manyata apna saaman leke aati h
Uday or unanti dono shocked ki ye pcking keise...
Un:tumhari pckng puri hogai manyata..
S:ha ho gai,puri ni hoti pckng agr tumhare rum me se uske kapde ni milte to..
U:aacha,to apne kpde de diye manyata ko...gud
Manyata ko kuch ajeeb sa lg rha h...

Uday or unanti phr bi khush h,qki car pancture krke beithe h dono.
Gr:to manyata aap dubara kb aaoge..
M:uncle,aapki or aunty ki jb yad ayegi tb aa jaugi...
Gr:chaliye,phle aap ghr jayegi ya ofice.
M:uncle,main apna saaman car me hi rhne dungi,or ofice attand krke sham ko ghr chali jaugi...
Gr:thik h beta,pta ni mrng me dono car puncture the,maine thik krwa diya h.
Uday again make a naugty face..
U(thout):koi ise rok ni rha h,sb gadbad ho rha h...
M:chalo,unanti tumhare 7th ye 10din keise gujre pta ni chla,dubaara milege.bye aunty..uncle aapko bhoot mis krugi...
Or wo ek dum se uday ki trf dekhti h or uday uski trf dono ki aankho me lightly tears aa jate h.
Dono apne aap se..
U:mt jao manyata..
M:mera man ni kr rha jane ko,pta ni kuch ajeeb sa lg rha h,pr ye ghr mera ni h..
U:manyata tum bhoot aachi ho..ab to tumse ldai krne me bi mja aata h..
M:sir,aap bhoot ache ho..
Gr:manyata beta ye apke liye chota sa gft...
Break eyecntct..
M:uncle iski kya jrurt thi..
Un:jrurt thi manyata,taki aa hmein yad rkhe hmesha.i mish u alot..
Manyata uday ek car me niklte h,dono chup h..uday bhoot udas h..

Jay ghr aati h
Ds:jay,tum aa gai.
J:dadi main sone ja ri hu,kal party me mja aya..bye.
J rum me jati h,or wo mirror me smile krte huye dekhti h,or uske neck pe mark hota h ofcourse nails ka..ghr me kya khugi?

In ofice..
Manyata,uday nd mr.frakin
M.F wo uday se bat krne me lge h,lekin uday ka dhayan manyata ki trf h..
Mr.frakin:mr.uday ek req.h aapse..i hope u complete my req.nd definately dis deal nly with u r company..
U:yes,mr.frakin
Wht s u r req.?
M.F:i realy lyk u r secretry,main ise apne 7th USA lejana chahta hu..
Uday nd manyata both shocked
Uday ko to gusa aajata h'wo khada hota h,or mr.frakin ka hath pkdta h or ofice se bahr krdeta h.'mr.frakin i m nt intersted deal with u,now get out.'..
Mr.F:soch lijiye...mere 7th deal krna apne aap me bdi bat h.
U:i don't care...
M:ye kya ho gya,sir ka itna bda dream or..sir main bat krti hu mr.frakin se meri wjh se..
U:shoutng ni manyata,tumhari bejati,tumhein koi buri njr se dekhe mujhe ni pasnd,tumhare samne mera hr dream chota...chup,tum dimag khraab mt kro mera,ye deal ni hogi to ni hogi..
wo phr use dekhta h or chla jata h...
M:ye kya ho gya,itna bdi deal,aise keise chod skte h sir..meri mehnt bi to lgi h..main aisa hone ni dungi..ha ni to.

Precap-manyata decided again stay wid uday home...
Pari