So the lion fell in love with the lamb. FF

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey welcome 2 the dream land of manveer.u r such a good writer cont soon.cant wait 4 the next update.n pliz add me in ur pm list please.

Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago

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awsome.moments

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shana0127
Its well written only thing I feel if u r inspired by Manveer then it title should be 'Lion fell in love with Liones as Manayata is more like a lioness then a lamb.

anyways a very good post 👏

Thanks Shana. Glad you liked the way I write.

I get your point completely and I completely agree. The personality of manyata does suit a lioness more than that of a lamb. But here I was just going for the analogy. In that - Currently Uv is the lion and manyata is the prey that he predates on. He wants to hurt her, abuse her, destroy her because she has hurt him so much before, quite like the lamb who is being stalked by a hungry lion. He is the predator and she is the prey. But what he doesnt realise is, hurting her, hurts him even more coz he loves her so much, hence the masochism..

Thanks a lot for your comments Shana.😊😊

Forgive my indiscrepencies and call them creative liberty. 😉

Love, Shal.

Edited by shal1983 - 13 years ago

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Welc0me to manveerland swty!
L0vd it! It was pure intense beautifuly written u r amazing writer i l0ve twilight n ur ff name plx update ASAP:)

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fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I absolutely loved this.
It was amazing.
Would have loved to see a scene like that in the show too. Sigh.
Update the next part soon.

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

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luvd it😊😊 its beautiful😳😳

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awsome.moments

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessnia
hey welcome 2 the dream land of manveer.u r such a good writer cont soon.cant wait 4 the next update.n pliz add me in ur pm list please.

he he... thank you. In dreams of UV - sigh!!! 😍 Ill update soon enough, probably another day or two. just finishing touches left. but gled you like my style of writing...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Welc0me to manveerland swty!
L0vd it! It was pure intense beautifuly written u r amazing writer i l0ve twilight n ur ff name plx update ASAP:)

Thank you. Sigh... Why dont I meet guys like ashish kapoor? Oh well, atleast on the reel. But seriously, Ive never been as obsessed with any other actor as ashish kapoor after Johnny Depp. Eeep! He makes my heart go ga ga ga ga. So the honour is all mine.

thganks for liking my style of writing. And yep, twilight is my current favourite book, and i love the lines i quoted above. Hmmm...

Ill update ASAP. Probably in a day or two.

shal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: fia21
I absolutely loved this.
It was amazing.
Would have loved to see a scene like that in the show too. Sigh.
Update the next part soon.

Awww... thank you so so much.

yup i would too have loved to see their dance sequence like above - he he thats why wrote it. but ihave full confidance in the Cv's that we'll get such a sequence again. aftre all they would be foolish to not capitalise on the chemistry of manveer. And any way, we know manveer are the leads. So... awww... in love already.

Ill update the next part soon. but i have to warn you it ill be nothing like the show, just plain old me and my imagination. so hope u'll like their 24 hours spent together my way too. Still, if you have any suggestions of their 24 hors together date that u'll like to see, do let me know.

shal.