ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessnia

Wow awesome update yaar.loved it.cont soon.


Thank you! 😃 Happy u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Aw that was a great update!!! Thus ranvijay though...all of a sudden turning a new leaf??


Thank you Kat!! 😃 Hahaha..still wont believe in Ranvijay!? 😆 Gosh, you guys make me work so hard on him..but im not gonna give up! And eventually your gonna HAVE TO LOVE HIM! 😛

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

it was mind blowing very nice completely worth the wait please continue soon and add me in your pm list but it awesome


Thank you soo much!!! 😃 And dont worry, i already did! 😊

Originally posted by: arya009

it ws awsm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it!!!! cnt wi8 for the nxt update...


Thanks soo soo much!! 😃 Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: ilvuday

dat was awesome...plz upd8 fast hw long is ur summer holiday spose 2 be...??


Thank you so much!! 😃 My summer's two months off! Will try to update soon! 😊

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

lolll...🤣🤣awesome..out of the world!!


Thanks so much Jehan!! 😃 ur laughing? at which part? 😕 LOL

Originally posted by: Nashia

Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!! Missed u too!!!


Awww..nah i missed you guys more 😛 LOL..thankss!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Superb update..loved it 2 d core...so & J & ranvijay got their reality chck! Manveer was as usual fabulous! TY 4 d pm & update soon...


Thank you thank you soo much!! 😃 Im so glad you liked it and yup..Im sorting out J and RV! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fia21

Omg omg omg omg WELCOME BACK HUBBY!! 🤗
Missed you so freaking much man 😔
First off, WOAH what an amazing update and that too a longer one! Hayeee. Lol.
You know I like Ranvijay's character right? And with this update you made me like him even more. Now this is the kind of a character I would've wanted to see in the show instead of Akash. Someone who could actually match Uday. Someone who could actually be real competition for him because they are both almost exactly alike, the only difference was that Ranvijay was consumed by the bad sides of him more. Whereas Uday is balanced. Akash's character is like a foolish attempt of deliberately throwing a supposed competition for Uday on our faces when he clearly can't match him in ANY way. So yes here I would absolutely give you as much credit as I can to come up with such a brilliant character like Ranvijay. I really wish someone from DEK's team reads this SS so they could get an idea of how a character can be made interesting when he might not even be the lead. Absolutely loved the part where you so well described Ranvijay's inner turmoil. It was truly amazing.
Okay enough on Ranvijay now 😛 . Coming back to the rest of the update, do I even need to tell you how absolutely freaking amazing brilliant and fantastic it was? Seriously Ranjana, loved this sleepover idea of yours, and loved how you showed Jaynandini atleast trying to fit in with everyone now and actually enjoying it. The dare dare game was an amazing idea.
Uday and Manyata's scene was so dreamy 😍 . I love the way he flirts with her and says double meaning stuff and then blames Manyata for having a dirty mind 😆 . Hahaha so clever. The whole couch scene was brilliant. And loved the last part too where they are texting each other and Manyata finally decides to go to his room to spend some time together. Now I really want something interesting to happen following this little "movie night" of theirs 😉 . Lol, I'm sure you have something good in mind. Would be eagerly waiting to read more so please please please try to update soon!! Once again, brilliant update Hubby 👏
Love you loads ❤️


Wifey ji, thank you soo soo much! You really are the sweetest thing ever and always remind me y I decided to get married to you! 😉
Really Fia, I always look forward to your comments! 😳
First of all, OMG seriously whatever you just wrote about Ranvijay is exactly what I had in mind for his character..greyer than UV with a little bit good inside but at the end of the day, hes way more able to ever challenge UV than Akash..ooppssy..dont wanna give too much away to anyone else whos reading this LOL
no but seriously everytime anyone praises RV, makes me feel all good cuz u know UV is UV but making people like RV is like my biggest accomplishment! 😳 SO seriously thanks soo much!! 😃
and HAHA i knew you were gonna say this: I really want something interesting to happen following this little "movie night" of theirs 😉 ...Hmm..Fia whats going on in YOUR mind? huh? 😉
Okay calm down now and just wait and see..LOL i sound like I have everything planned out 😆, but really my mind is empty at the moment!
Thanks again Wifey for this! Really i love love love you!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: imkool

why it had to end so soon...😭

gosh i totally loved and enjoyed reading this part...eagerly waiting for the next part...plz post soon...
btw u dont know me...as for the first time i m posting a comment here but as a silent reader i have read ur ff from beginning and must say u r awesum fab and a very talented writer👏👏👏
as ur exams are over so do post the next part soon.😛


awww!!! OMG like seriously u just made my day!! 😳 Thanks soo soo much!!
I'm so happy you decided to comment, my silent reader 😳..well dont be silent any longer okay? or else...😈 ..LOL
Thanks again!! 😃 and yea will try to continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

loved it loved it loved it!!!!...i think u've finally succeeded in making me un-hate rannvijay 😆...awww he's actually become a good guy...so he just behaved as such only to suppress the loneliness...and nw even J's going good...i likey bt i guess no baddie then??😲...i loved M-UV nok jhok...it was soo funny...and the txt msg...lol 😆...and their light off adventure was toh mashallah...this was a really entertaining chapter...loved it to the core...plzz update the nxt part soon dear!!! 😊


😲 I made you un-hate Ranvijay!? Yippeee!! 🥳 hahha, sorry cant control my happiness 😆..and Akshi who said theres no more baddie? who knows I might just enter some other villain 😈..k that was me just joking and trying to confuse you 😆 ..all ill say is that in DEK and this SS, everyone is pretty much good and bad..they are the villains and heroes themselves..alright im gonna shutup now and let you read and see for urself 😊
awww im so happy u liked the ManVeer stuff!! LOL just my poor attempt at writing something romantic😆
thanks so much for loving it! and yea will try to update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sim1623

That was amazing! I always love it when they fight like that, it is just sooo married-couple-type! I love it! You know whats weird? The fact that I am taking a summer online school too! I am taking it for geometry cause I wanna get a level ahead from my friends, hbu? Very good job and I liked how you wrote Ranvijay's POV :)


Simran :D...


Hahaha!! I guess they do sound like married couples!! LOL
and wow you too? We'll be suffering together! 😆 Im taking accounting for the first time, caz i never got to take it during the school year..really dont know how its gonna be like though 🤔
Thanks for liking and happy u enjoyed the RV bits! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you!! 😃

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing update luved it... Ranvijay is actually gone good now even J so no more villans... I guess its good for Manveer now luved the ending part really funny should of continued more although it was a long update

Cont Soon


Aww thanks so much Anam..and dont worry will continue their banter in next update! 😉
im happy u liked it and yup..giving JN and RV reality checks 😊

Originally posted by: jav101

Loved it when manyata saw the picture of udays mom.


Awww im so happy u liked that part! ur actually the first to mention it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

that was a lovely long update... loved the dare game and then the lovely manveer scene too gd... also like ranvijay part in dis to gd update soon and thanks for the pm


Thank you soo much!! Im so glad you loved it!! 😃 and that u liked RV 😉
and no problem!😊

Originally posted by: Grenade

Gosh! Everytime I read your ss I go spellbound..!! I have to say now..you are THE BEST here!! My exams just started today but its utterly impossible to keep myself from reading this knowing you've updated. All I can say is that just keep writing as BEAUTIFULLY as you do!!
And thanks for the pm !! :)


Thank youu soo soo much Payal!! You really are soo sweeet!! 😳 Make me look forward to ur comment! .although I still doubt that im that good🤔 LOL
And now go and study for ur exams! Im sure you'll ace them! And after ur done u better update ur own writing! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it, just awesome.
Are u about to make RV-M-UV love triangle or RV-J story. I seriously love manyata UV scenes in your ff, they are the best. please tweet these scenes to SA. they are so amazing and subtle.there nok jhok seems to be so real and so manveer like.
Loved your writing skill
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

loved it, just awesome.

Are u about to make RV-M-UV love triangle or RV-J story. I seriously love manyata UV scenes in your ff, they are the best. please tweet these scenes to SA. they are so amazing and subtle.there nok jhok seems to be so real and so manveer like.
Loved your writing skill


awww thank you soo much Wendy!!! 😳
and lol u'll seee 😉 ..im so glad you enjoy the ManVeer scenes 😃 i try to make them as realistic i can.. thanks so much again! 😳

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