ManVeer SS~The Princess Diaries~|Pt1/Pg 1|01 May

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Hi people!I am Sally and I have written FanFics Mainly on Maan and Geet😳This is my attemp to try something on ManVeer😃Hope you'l like it.
PS:It is the remake of my version on Maaneet in the same name😛
What happens when Mr.Arrogant meets Ms.Attitude???
What will happen if they have to stay in the same house forever????
What will happen if they fall in love????
Join me,As I take you along wid me to witness the love story of Yuvraj Uday Veer and Princess Mannyatta..
If she says,she values human relationships,he says he can get them with the help of riches and status...
If she has attitude,grace and style he has arrogance,hotness and charm with him...
If people forget themselves in her smile,they remember him because of his sarcasm...
Will they fall in love...ever????
Character Sketch
Yuvraj Uday Veer
Ashish Kapoor
Princess Mannyatta
Priyal Gor the main lead Preet Se Bandhi Ye Dori Ram Milaayi Jodi
Princess Unnatti
Ankita Bhargava
Maharaj Brijraj
Shahbaz Khan at launch of new show on Sony 'Dekha Ek Khwaab' at Taj Hotel
Please scroll down for part 1..😳
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Part One

Dear Diary..

"Urghh!I hate him!"she thought irritated as she slammed the door of her room shut.

"What the hell does he think of himself,huh?An alien from Mars?"she said as she slumped to the bed flipping her phone calling her father.

"Dad!why the hell did you have to leave me alone with that idiot!"she yelled.

"Calm down,baby.Afterall,he is Udayveer,you'll soon be married to him!"Brijraj consoled his daughter.

"Marry??Yuck!I can't stand him for five minutes and you want me to get married to him?!eww!"she told her father to which Brijraj laughed and said,"I will return from Jaigarh tomorrow after visiting your uncle.Take care and don't scream and kill Udayveer,bechara!"her father joked.

"Dad!!"she whined but only found the line dead.

"Darnit!"she said and walked towards the cupboard.

~*~

"Dadaaa!"Unnati shouted as she chased her brother around.

"Choti,no..please..Ouch!stop hitting me!!""he shouted dodging to escape the pillows aimed at him.

"You know that Mannyatta hates it when you call her basanti!!then why?"Unnati asked cornering Uday.

Uday laughed as he held Unnati by her shoulder and said,"You don't know how yummy she looks when she scowls in anger and when her nose scrunches up!"

Unnati laughed and said,"so toh hai!"and they burst out laughing ending up hugging each other..

~*~

Mannyatta opened the cupboard and took her pink diary out and started writing.

Dear Diary,

Today had started out to be an awesome day!

The sun shining*everyday it does nah?scratch that*,Birds chirping..sky clear*the way I would like it..lol*

Mmphh..The smell of muffins made by Harry,the head chef woke me up today morning.I quickly brushed my teeth and hurriedly bathed and ran down to have my fill and that was when I saw him entering with his big big bags inside the palace..

"What the heck!"I said in my mind as I continued staring at him for the longest time I've known!

I did not know that he was returning from London today but figure it out that he may be here for my coronation.He looked up at me and he too stopped and stred at me without blinking his eyes!

I felt so many buttrflies dancing in my stomach!I had never felt sooo nervous in my life.There was something in his stare that was making me too run away from there to my room.

I did not know from where all the blood rushed to my cheeks..I was blushing!as in b-l-u-s-h-i-n-g!!

I didn't know why but it felt good all of a sudden..Do you know why Dear diary?Even I do not know what I feel right now when I am reliving that moment-his stare!

It was too hot for me to handle!!

Anyways,now I slowly walked down the stairs trying to keep my heart cool,because it was beating too fast.

I walked towards him and said,"Hi"

I saw that he was smirking and he said,"Hey basanti"

"Basanti?"I scowled.

I hated it when he called me that.I mean,who would like to be called basanti?

"Don't you dare"I warned him.

He casually grinned at me and pulled me by my waist so that I banged into his iron-like hard torso.

"What are you doing?"I asked him.

Well,I was scared that if someone saw us,then what would they think of me?I am a princess and if they think that I am having a pre-marital affair with my..ermm...cousin?

I am a goner!

I wriggled out off his grip-rather say iron grip and moved back wards.He was taking some dangerous steps towards me..

"Please,stop..Udayveer!"I whined as he kept on stalking me forwards!

He was walking towards me like a tiger stalking its prey.I shot a quick prayer to babaji as I felt my back hit the wall.

He trapped me with his hands and said,"Gotcha!"

I didn't know what happened after that because at the next moment I found his lips lingering on mine!

"W*F!"My mind screamed but..but..it felt good!

I did not move.I didn't know how!

But I knew that he just brushed his lips over mine..but he did not actually suck it or..blah blah as they show in Holly wood movies.

I opened my eyes to see that he was staring at me the same way he did when I was walking down the stairs.

I felt him remove his hands from my waist as he continued,"I will wait till you're ready"and he walked away-Just Like that!!!

Eww!!

What the hell did he think of himself!I wanted to know why he did it!

I hated the influence he was having over me!

I hated the way he was making my heart go so fast whenever he smiles at me!

I simply hate the way he handles me-his stares and every single thing that is making me imagine things which I never should imagine.

Urgh!!I am hating this new feeling he is giving me.

I wish I knew what it is..

Agar aapko patha hai toh please hume bata deejiyega diary..

Love,

Rajkumari Mannyatta..

Mannyatta closed the diary feeling pretty light hearted after her entry.She smiled as she aimlessly went towards the closet and threw her diary inside and locked it.

She walked towards the dressing table and was about to comb her hair when she heard a loud thud!

She looked around and her eyes widened with shock and she exclaimed,"Aap?"

Uday grinned at her as he moved towards her,"Haan hum.Koi problem princess?"

Mannyatta blinked her eyes and when she found out that he was here for real she screamed,"Aahhh!!!"only to be silenced by the feel of his lips on hers!

To Be continued..

Extremely nervous..gals tell me how it is!Index:Part One:Dear Diary..-Page 1
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry to comment but there is no part 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaynmohin

sorry to comment but there is no part 1

updated😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely ,amazing superb :)
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Originally posted by: mahnoor246


lovely ,amazing superb :)

ooh..thnk u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's brilliant 👏
Please do continue it.
It's different. Uday and Manyata living in the same house. Now that's interesting.
Would be eagerly waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's cool 👏
Plz continue soon...
Uday and manyata is cousins cool...
It's means love story between 2 cousins...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21

It's brilliant👏
Please do continue it.
It's different. Uday and Manyata living in the same house. Now that's interesting.
Would be eagerly waiting for the next update 😊

Th ks for the comment fia21:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Love.anjlenirma

It's cool👏

Plz continue soon...
Uday and manyata is cousins cool...
It's means love story between 2 cousins...😃

Thnk u anjlenirma for the comment:)
Glad u liked it

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