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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoa! That was a cliffhanger! Great story, please continue!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi snowdream...
Hey i'm new at DEK forum...n when i came here i saw ur OS n read them...i have read all 14 parts of ur OS...n i must say that u r fabulous writter...cudos to u...u handle whole story beautifully n wrote which i always wish to see in the show...
Plz do PM me also...
PS-Watch yesterday episod n i think CVs stole ur OS some beautiful scenes like jungle part,manyata's broken leg,Uday lift Manyata in his arms etc..Am i right?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hi snowdream...
Hey i'm new at DEK forum...n when i came here i saw ur OS n read them...i have read all 14 parts of ur OS...n i must say that u r fabulous writter...cudos to u...u handle whole story beautifully n wrote which i always wish to see in the show...
Plz do PM me also...
PS-Watch yesterday episod n i think CVs stole ur OS some beautiful scenes like jungle part,manyata's broken leg,Uday lift Manyata in his arms etc..Am i right?

hey first of a hearty welcome to dek forum.k u can call me krishna...So happy to hear that u enjoyed ma OS.Ya will surely PM u my next Update...Ya perhaps its true that DEK crew do read Our forum comments,topics n all...n i do think they stole my jungle scenes🤣.anywys it was good to see on screen na broken leg,Uday lifting manyata n allšŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

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<div>hey first of a hearty welcome to dek forum.k u can call me krishna...So happy to hear that u enjoyed ma OS.Ya will surely PM u my next Update...Ya perhaps its true that DEK crew do read Our forum comments,topics n all...n i do think they stole my jungle scenes🤣.anywys it was good to see on screen na broken leg,Uday lifting manyata n allšŸ˜›


Hey thanks krishna for hearty welcome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello! I just read all 14 parts of your story, and i really enjoyed it...well-written šŸ‘ It's a refreshing change from the real thing- much more Manveer-friendly 😳 Hope the CVs go along your track- that would be fun...
Anyways, please continue soon, and please, please add me to your PM list...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixAsh

Hello! I just read all 14 parts of your story, and i really enjoyed it...well-written šŸ‘ It's a refreshing change from the real thing- much more Manveer-friendly 😳 Hope the CVs go along your track- that would be fun...
Anyways, please continue soon, and please, please add me to your PM list...

hey thanks yar😊...yup will continue soon n surely pm u ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 15

Manyata:uday chodo na.😳

Uday:Manyata bolo na.😳

Manyata:ab to tum samajh gayi hogi.šŸ˜‰

Uday:nah hum kuch bhi nahi samjhi .aaphi kahiye...šŸ˜‰..

Manyata:woh Uday...

Uday:haan princess woh kya...

Manyata:woh...kuch nahi...šŸ˜‰

saying this she gave a push to Uday.He was falling but manyata's dupatta was struck in Uday's watch and manyata too falled above Uday..Uday hugged her..and said.

Uday:ab bolo.

Manyata:Uday pls humme chodo.

Uday:Nahi princess aapko batana hi hoga apna jawab...

Manyata:accha teek hain bol dethi hoon.pehle khade ho jaaye..

Uday and man got up...Uday was staring at manyata.Manyata somehow couldn't look at uday's face.

Uday:bolo manyata.jo bhi hain bolo na...

Manyata: haan Uday ye sach hein ki tumhare bina mein kuch nahi karsakti.Tum mere zindagi ka sabse aham hissa ban chuki hoon.Mein har pal tumhe apne aas paas dekhna chahti hoon.Mujhe tumhare saath waqt bithana accha lagtha hain.Mein tumhe kissi aur ke saath share nahi kar sakti..hain.tumhare saath mein hamesha apne aap ko safe feel karti hoon.ye ehsaas mujhe pehli baar ho rahi .mujhe nahi pata ki kya yehi pyar hain

Uday lifted her face and kissed on her forehead...he hugged her tightly.😳

Uday:Manyata isi ehsaas ko pyaar kehte hain.hum ek doosre ke bina adoora hoon..manyata kabhi mujhe chodkar math jaana...

Manyata broked the hug

Manyata:Lekin Uday mein kuch kehna chahti hoon...akash...shayad tum sahi kehti thi ki woh mera bas infactuation hain aur kuch nahi..par uske saath jo bhihua kahi na kahi main zimmedar hoon.Uday humhe usse doondna hain aur uske parivaar ko vapas dena hoga..

Uday turned pale.He was silent.

Manyata:kya tum mera saath nahi doongi..

Uday...mmm ofcourse princess.

Manyata:ab chale...she was moving and uday caught her hand

Uday:itni jaldi kya hain.vaise abhi bhi aapne humse I love You nahi kaha..

Manyata:accha uske liye aapko intezaar karna hoga beta

Uday:wow tu se seede aap good..challo pata nahi iss phatichar rajkumari humhe kitna intezzar karvayengi

Manyata:kya kaha phatichar tumhe toh.

she was going to push him but she slipped and about to fall.Uday caught her in his arms..

They share a beautiful eyelock.Finally uday spoke

Uday:princess aapko to koi mauka chahiye humari bahom mein aane ke liye..n he make her steady

Manyata:vaise tumhare bahom mein ab sirf hum hi hogi Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh...Tum sirf mera hain...

Uday:accha to unn hazzaron ladkiyon ka kya hoga jo humari bahom mein aane ki sapne dekti rahti hoon.vaise princess apko pata nahi India forum mein aisi bahut ladkiyan hain jo Yuvraj Udaybeer singh se beimthihaan pyaar karti hain...

Manyata:Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh hum bi rajwade hain .agar tumne mere alawa kissi aur ladki ko dekha bhi na mein tumhe chodungi nahi .yeYuvrani Manyata Kumari ki vaada hain ...

Uday:Haan Nahi Toh...

Manyata:Ab chale...its 8pm

Uday nodded and they set back to Mumbai.on the way they had their first dinner date n also Uday and manyata had a romantic Dance ...They reached mumbai early morning.Manyata was asleep.So Uday decided to take her to Jaigarh since all at devgarh mahal will b sleeping and he don't want to disturb them.They reached his hotel.He didn't wanted to disturb her sleep.So he carried manyata to his room.He laid her slowly on his bed.

He glared at his sleeping beauty for a while.and he kissed on her forehead.Manyata was half sleeping

Manyata:Uday sone do na.

Uday:K princess gud ni8,i love you.

He was also too tired .He took his pillow n slept at sofa...

To b continued...

so this was for today.hope u love it...Pls leave ur opinion...and don't 4get to hit like button


Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT...šŸ‘U MENTIONED INDIAN FORUM DEEWANIS...šŸ˜†GIRLS HUM POPULAR HUTY JA RAHY HAIN...šŸ˜‰
OKAY UPDATE WAS AWESOME...COUNTINUE SOON...AND THANKS ALOOT FOR THE PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome awesome n awesome.just loved it n thanks for pm.
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Originally posted by: dekhaekkhawab

LOVED IT...šŸ‘U MENTIONED INDIAN FORUM DEEWANIS...šŸ˜†GIRLS HUM POPULAR HUTY JA RAHY HAIN...šŸ˜‰

OKAY UPDATE WAS AWESOME...COUNTINUE SOON...AND THANKS ALOOT FOR THE PM...

where else can Uday find his true lovers other than India forum dek segment.What ever shades let the mad CV's show.whether they potray him as evil/demon/villian we just love him...the bloody bad boy who stole million of hearts the one and only Udaybeer singh...n thanks.😊

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