Beyond life and death.. Chpt 2 updated pg 3

beyond life in death...

Hii guys..this is my first ff...manveer is a couple meant for great love story..so here is my attempt

Introduction

This story is about couple manveer..who's love clears all tests of time,fate and predicaments..since love is an emotion..it can't be aged by time..damaged by fulminations...or altered by adversity

In contemprorary world..love has been narrowed down to physical aspects only..

True love still remains aloof of corporeal aspects, ego and materialistic attainments..

Its the one that rebuf rules defined by the life's monarch "TIME"

Prologue

Its a story of manayata's journey from teenager to a person of depths..she is a girl at heart and spirit and man by will and strength...she dreams of conquiring the world by her dreams..relation are of utmost imp to her..either she loves some people or hates some..Extremely loyal and commited friend...qualities of nobleman resides in her...for her girl and boy are no two different groups in terms of achievement and life's philosphy...

Major.Udayveer

He is an army person recently promoted to post of Major.

Commitment and patriotism are his personals...he is protector of others..a happy go lucky archangel

Service to mankind is his life

Plot: Manayata is on her annual school trip after completion of her 11th standard..she is on her most anticipated trip..

Having a keen interest in cultures and architecture finally she is down to south india..to discover an unknown world..

Uday is too traversing to banglore to join his friend for wedding...though he preffers travelling by air..but this time it was his destiny who placed him in same train as of manayata..

Manayata with her school mates and uday with his army bunch

Both uncertain of what is held by future for time..

How will their life..change.. Let see..

Note: ill be introducting other characters as story progresses

Ill be updating first chap soon..tell me if u guys like it..

I cant wait to get in..when will my tour finally commence..its seems like journey..since morning i am having gut feeling..why i am being so restless . All feeling of intrigue and excitement had captured Manyata frm within...Mani what are u dreaming abt arent we getting late now...said unnati. Unnati had been her frnd only for a year but both of them were more than sisters and inseperable buddies of good and bad time..they were soul sisters.. I am coming unniez..ill get the luggage to the terminal..Manayata was serving purpose of boys in her group everyone loaded her with the heaviest of weights..thank god i practice martial art otherwise we would have to ask ppl for assistance again and again..being a student that too on a school trip it isn't quite prudential to spent money on baggage carrier..concluded manyata

In train

Guys..ohh man i cant believe our tour is begining finally said chetanaya another of manayata's classmate..I know chets..will you no stop being over excited and help me in adjusting the luggage..why are u losing it manayata..jst chill we are on a holiday..atleast we arent sitting in physics class hammering are heads against desks...

Well will you set my bags too there..a stranger voice addressed frm behind..excuse me do i look like train assistant..and for ur kind info we dnt have one in indian railways..replyed manayata..and turned around in rage...since she was surrounded by luggage her foot sliped sround a bag and she lost balance and landed into stranger's arms..she tried to to make out what just had occured..and found herself s in proximity of young casually dressed man..still he seemed so tidy and actually commenable..her gut feeling intensified more..it wasnt that she never had been close to any guy...see had seen enough of them..but wasnt affected much..she could genuinely say that a person is goodlooking but anyone out there wasnt able to influence her...never ever that to so much..all this happing at just a touch had she gone really crazy this time..having some serious mental illness..

I am really sorry mam if u are offended..actually...ehh stop it..i noe ppl like u...seeing a girls group..ur colours jst showed up..isnt it so..dont u think i will withstand any nuisance ..no one here is a poor girls type..so u better have all that for yourself..she bawled at stranger while finding ground for herself and recovering from his muscular arms..

Are u done with it said the guy..mani was raged beyond limits at this comment. Look at him...see his guts how can be so clam not a sign of shame or regret...and his smirk..that making me more irritated..what the hell. All of this was going in Manayasta's mind...unniez and chetanaya were already lost in deep brown eyes of intruder...yes he was one for manayata since it was him who tried to steal her peace by his scoundrel acts

Goodevening Miss...I am sorry for inconvience but thats my berth u are occupying...

Haah...no way its ours we got it booked

May be you are right mam but in my opinion you must the check the list to confirm

Unnati wait m let me go through it once...fine get it done quickly i am not in mood to entertain any street teasers..she said staunchly

Wat on earth took u so long unnati.said manayata..her eyes blistering with intolerence now...will u speak up now

I am really sorry sir said unnati to guy...manayata watched in astonishment..her fingers clasped tighly the handle of berth she felt liking blowing the guy's head now...Badly!!!!

Manayata no need to get mad at any one..its their seat

I am really sorry sir ..please accept our apology..major uday if i am right..

What an army person ..manayata was taken over by abashment

Firstly she absent minded quarreled with a person...than accused and welcomed him with all so honourable words on earth..wat more he was from defence..

Well its fine lady..i just tried to explain the same replyed uday

Shall I...huh wat retorted manayata.. Can i have my place..

Suddenly manyata was struck with reality if its his and his frnds berth than wat were they going to do now ...school authorities did'nt get them seats booked...or wat..seemed like her journey ended before its start..

Maam Maam uday beckoned manayata..but she was lost in her thoughts..her tour..turned into nightmare..

Pls tell me if u like it..shall i continue...😊

the concept is really new and different...

I really loved the character sketch...specially Manayata's...

And the chapter is outstanding...

very beautifully written and binded...

continue soon...

loved all the charcters especially manyata

i also luved the line when it said "manayata watched in astonishment..her fingers clasped tighly the handle of berth she felt liking blowing the guy's head now...Badly!!!!"

that was soo funny😆

continue soon, great start

i just love it, thanks😊