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..yajnaseni..

@..yajnaseni..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Loved it.Thanks for the PM

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rasiya.

@rasiya.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Such a cute and sweet update!😍

Just love the last bit...☺️

thank you so much Surya for such a beautiful manveer story!👏

hayee...humare DEK mein bhi aisa kuch ho jaye...😍

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@wendy25

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

MIND BLOWING SURYA,👏

EXCELLENT WORK, go and join DEK cvs team!

LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSES THEIR FEELINGS IN WORDS,

LAST PART WAS JUST AWESOME😳,

when would you update next part?

eagerly waiting for next update😉 and thanx for pm

Edited by wendy25 - 13 years ago

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

awesome update as always...just awesome...very well written...ur words made me feel the emotions...and thats what i love about ur SS...plz do PM me when u update...👍🏼

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

awesome cont soon loved the way udayveer told manyata to live her life the way she wants to live

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ria

@mythical

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

thanks for the pm. loved it

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Havii

@Havii

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Surya hats of to u. You define manveer's emotions their difficulties their relation so beautifully. I wish Uday get back his jungli princess someday. Manveer are trully soulmate. They are incomplete without each other. You are amaging writer. I wish kabhi cvs ke dimag ki batti jale nd aise manvees scene dekhne ko mile. Well great work.thanx for pm. Egarlly waiting for next update.

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Hey Surya 🤗 hope you are fine and enjoying ur wk-end Thxs for the pm yaar ...am busy today with family so i will come back tomorrow with my comments after reading ...ok yaar😉 Tc Love u 🤗