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As ds has decided to teach manyata a lesson so she does not allow her 2 enter the rajmahal (though she wants manyata 2 bcome a princess n bcome the yuvrani of devgarh but she has not told this thing 2 anyone except Uday,ds has also told Uday not 2 tell thing 2 anyone n specially Manyata) As Manyata was crying n going out of the rajmahal suddenly she got a takkar with uv's car.Uv get out of the car n wiped Manyata's tears. Manyata told Uv that ds had not allowed her 2 enter the rajmahal n that she is going to her chawl. Suddenly she faints in Uv's arms.He decided 2 take manyata to his hotel.He put her in the backseat of his car n drive to his hotel.When they reached theirhe put her on the bed comfortably and sit next to her.Manyata woke up after 2 hours then Uv told her to get a bath as she had not taken a bath since she had started her strike.When Manyata was taking a bath she had put her cloths outside the washroom.Uv asked her from the outside that what she will wear ?She answered that she will wear the same cloths.So Uv decided that he should change her cloths with a designer gown. As he called a servant and told him to throw Manyata's cloths and to bring a gown.The servant brought a beautiful gown and give it to Uv . Uv kept the gown outside the washroom.When Manyata picked the cloths from the outside she suddenly shouted that someone has stolen her cloths.Uv came n told her that he had thrown her cloths and now she has to wear this only.Manyata got angry on Uv but she had no option so she weared the gown n came outside,there were three ladies in the room.Mnyata asked them y had they come here.THey said that they had come here to do her make up and that uv had told them to do so.Manyata went out of the room that she dont want 2 do make up but Uv said if u will not do make up he will not allow 2 go her out of the house.Manyata wanted to talk to akash's mom so she decide 2 do makeup and when she was going inside the room Uv came behind her and gently closed her chain n whispered in her ear ''aap chain band karna toh bhul hi gayi thi''then she said band kar dijiye .Uv said humne pehle hi band kar di thi.She blushed☺️ and ran inside the roon.When her makeup was done she looked really beautiful in the pink gown.When the day of ashtami arrived Uv decided to take Manyata to the Devgarh palace .But he didnt told her that she had to be choosen the yuvrani of devgarh today.When they reached there Ds was standing at stage for anouncing her vaaris.When DS spoked Manyata's name tears come to her eyes n she go to the stage .Manyata thanked Uv and hugged her for making her a princess.😲 So guys this was chapter 1 i will write more soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY 2 ALL THE USERS OF IF IM A NEW USER AND DIDNT HAVE AN EXPIRIENCE OF WRITING STORIES SO MAY BE U ALL DISLIKE IT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i liked 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 but could you put in a scene where uday helps her with her dress ka zipper and eyelock in the mirror too.😉😃😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanxx for commenting the next time ill write stories ill try to put more manveer scenes u could imagine as when manyata came out of the room to tell uv that she dont want to do makeup when uv saw her chain opened he closes her chain i think now u will b satisfied

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