MANVEER FF on DEK future.(ch 2 pg 2)

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chapter- 1


the sound of manyata weeping softly beside the bed tortured him... though he did nt stir, did nt speak a word,and pretended to be asleep, he was far frm being so... his heart ached at her soft whimpering.. he understood that she was nt crying loudly in case he wakes up, bt this was intolerable for him. he slowly pushed away his blanket and sat up on his bed... there she was, crounching at the corner of the bed,on the floor,knees tightly clasped to her chest and her face buried in them.. he cud make out clearly frm her shivers that she was crying..only that she was doing it silently..which was soo unlike her...

uday clered his throat noisily.. manyata did nt move... he licked his dry lips and tried to smile.. bt it only resulted in a nasty twist of his mouth and nothing else.. he felt terrible... unable to hold it any longer he called out to her- princess...!!
the whimpering stopped...
uday called out agen- princess..!! soyi nhi aabtak?
manyata turned her head towards him slowly.. uday was shocked to see her face... it was swollen.. red.. and she looked ghastly...
he quickly got down and walked round the bed to be by her side... she turned away frm him and wiped her tears- tu bhi to soya nhi...
uday- nhi... hum so gaye the... par... he lied..
manyata- oh... sorry yar... wo kuch nhi...bas... maa ki yaad aa rahi thi...
uday- komal aunty ki?
manyata- hm..
uday- tum humse jhut bol rahi ho princess? tume komal aunty ki nhi.. kisi aur ki yaad aa rahi hain.. hain na?
manyata- kya adhi raat ko bakwas kar raha hain...? ek to main itni pareshan hu.. aur tu...
uday- dekho princess agar tum is wajese pareshan ho ki tumhe ghar se nikal diya gaya hain... aur tumhare pass rehne ki koi jagah nhi hain.. to woh prblm to humne alredy solve kar diya hain.. tum jitne din chahe yahan reh sakti ho...koi tumse kuch nhi kahega yahan... par princess.. hume tumhari aankhon mein ansu bardasht nhi hoti... he wiped away her tears and made her look into his eyes... manyta stared at him for a while and then smiled- its okay yar... aab so soja... ja.. jakar soja...mujhe kch der ke liye akela chod de ...
uday sighed bt did nt get up...
manyata- kya hua? tu ja na...
uday- nhi... hum tumhare pass hi rahenge princess...
manyata- abey..plzz.udayveer mere dimag ki dahi mat kar... ja tu yahan se... she startedto push him...- tu jana.. yar plzzz.. mujhe aur pareshan mat kar.. main thak chuki hu... a cry escaped her lips and immediately uday put his arms around her and pulled her towards him... without saying a single word, she clasped him tightly,hid her face in his chest and poured out all her frustrations,emotions, pains and everything in his arms... uday felt as if his own heart will burst with her outburst bt he kept really still and cntinued to stroke her hair...
he thot in his mind- manyata hume maaf kar do...hum zimedaar hain tumhare iss halat ke liye... agr humse kuch bhi ho sakta tha.. to tumhari muskurahat ko wapas lane ke liye hum woh sab karte...lekin... hume maaf kar do... hum akash ko wapas nhi la sakte... uski maut ke sath sath humne tumhe bhi mar dala hain manyata.. hume maaf kar do...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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its amazing chapter...
you have written it brilliantly...
will be looking forward to next chapter...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityah

its amazing chapter...
you have written it brilliantly...
will be looking forward to next chapter...

thank you.. kash DEK aisa ho jaye...😍
Posted: 13 years ago
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this was very nice kashu pls pm me next time when u update . n pls dont keep us waiting updateasap . coz i really liked it
hey may i ask u a question if u dont feel bad
why did not u update ur previous ff dreamgirl i was totally in love with that ff
if i annoyed u u can ignore this question dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneta

this was very nice kashu pls pm me next time when u update . n pls dont keep us waiting updateasap . coz i really liked it

hey may i ask u a question if u dont feel bad
why did not u update ur previous ff dreamgirl i was totally in love with that ff
if i annoyed u u can ignore this question dear

abey yaar.. y will i be angry.. i will update that ff for sure.. once i have my manveer.. coz it requires a lot of manveer to write that ff.. 😉😛 and this i will agen update tomoro...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo gr88 writing...hope to see more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous start!! Lookin forward to chapter 2!!:)<3
Posted: 13 years ago
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oye kash tune mere dil ka bhoj halka kar dia {i think thoda zyaada cheesy dialogue mar dia}
yaar manveer hume zaroor milenge par i hope mere jawaani ke din rahte rahte miljaye to bahut acha hoga.
filhaal itna positive hone ke lie aur forum main positivity phela ne ke lie hats off to u.
n i too luv ashu n priyal as well as our royalish manveer
majnu jai bhaad main ya phir kabaad main
but i hope uv prove sto be innocent.
warana uska character sketch dheela ho jaega
waise pm karna mat bhulna lekin agar yeh wala oaur woh wwala ff update nehin kia to seedhe tumhare ghar pahunch jaongi aur phir jam ke tumhare khabar lungi warna if kafi hai tumhe pm kar ke yaad dilaongi.
ok enough of blabbering chalti hoon par phir aaongi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😛😳awesomeee ff
loooveed it
REALLY INTERSTING
pLEASEEE CONTINUE SOON
pLEASE pm ME IF POSSIBLE,...
aWSOMEEE😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter - 2



uday storming towards the planace, face red in rage... he met vijay on the way..
uday- J kahan hain vijay?
vijay.. stammered.. he cudnt put up with a clear answer.. uday trembled in anger..
uday- humnepucha J kahan hain?
vijay- woh...woh terrace par..
without waiting a moment longer.. uday strode towards the stairs...
J was there al right on the terrace,probably waiting for him...
uday- J..!!!!
she turned and smile sarcastically- aao uday.. hum tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the...
uday clenched his fingers into fists and walked towards her.. without a single word he grabbed her neck.. jai was totally taken aback.. she struggled to get free.. her face became pale.. bt uday did nt leave her.. it was as if some evil has entered his head and made him his slave...
uday said in a hissing voice- humne tumhe warn kiya tha J.. ki agar tum hamare aur manyata ke beech ane ki koshish ki.. to hum tumhe nhi chodenge... woh video clip tum manyata ko dikhane se pehle hum tumhe mar dalenge...
he let go of her.. she put her hands on her neck and coughed hard...
J- u...uday...tum...
uday kept his finger on his lips--- ssshhh... rajkumari jainandini...sshhh.. then he took her face in his hands and said- tum kitni khubsurat ho J... agar apni khubsurti barkaraar rakhna chahti ho.. to us video clip ko mita dena... aur agr manyata se cntact karne ki oshish ki... aur use kuch bhi batane ki koshish ki... to...
he took out a pistol and put it on J's forehead...-- to is khubsurat chehre ka hum kya hal banayenge ye tum soch bhi nhi sakti...
J started breathing heavily and her hands and feet started sweating... she almost choked in fear...
a crooked smile appeared on his lips- dar lag raha hain? dar lag raha hain J? lagna bhi chahiye.. .. J.. agr tum soch rahi ho ki manyata ko chodke hum tumse shaadi karenge.. to ek baat dhyan se sunlo.. agr hume manyata nhi mili na.. to hum aag lag denge.. jalakar rakh kar denge sabkuch...
he turned and was abt to leave wen J said out loud- tumhe kya lagta hain manyata ko jab sacchayi pata chal jayegi to woh tumse pyaar karegi? huh..!! nafrat karegi woh tumse uday... nafrat ...
uday turned and smiled at her- manyata humse nafrat karegi ya pyaar ye to waqt hi batayega... akash ko hum marna nhi chahte the.. par agr manyata ko ye baat kahin se bhi pata chali. to HUM TUMHE MAAR DALENGE J...
with that he left... leaving jainandini totally devastated,shocked and pale in fear...



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