You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks anny😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

L-O-V-E-D the update..!!!!!...i jst can't w8 to read the nxt chp...plzzz cont. soon 😳...and love the new title 👍🏼

awww...thanks i am glad you loved it...will cont soon😊
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Hey guys this is part 15...hope you all like it...=)

Fia... Happy birthday to you...Happy birthday to you...May you have many more...Happy birthday to you...love you sis...many many happy returns of the day...have a blast...and party hard...also do save me a piece of cake...so just for you wrote this part all over again...hope u like your birthday present...this ones for you my darling sis...love you...muahhh...🥳❤️

PART # 15

Inside the room...

Uday: princess...neeche chalna chahiye...

Manyata: haan tum joa...main peeche se aati hoon...

Uday: jee nahi...aap hamarey saath hi chaleingi...after all we are a couple...(he offers her his hand)...

Manyata: are you sure...

Uday nods, she takes his hand and both leave the room and walk down the stairs...

Manyata and Uday were walking down the stairs...hand in hand they looked just perfect...a match made in heaven...everyone was surprised to see Manyata in saari...she was looking very beautiful and much like a mahrani...Komal and DS looked at her proudly...even Jay looked really happy at seeing her...

Uday and Manyata come down...Manyata takes the blessings of dadisaahib and komal...

Dadisahib: beta aaj aap bohat bahot pyaari lag rahi hain...khush rahiye...

Komal: hamari rani bitiya ko kisi ki nazar na lagey...(she puts her kajal on her)

Brijaraj walks up to Manyata and puts his hand on her head...Manyata bends down to take his blessing...

Brijaraj: nahi beta...aapki jagah hamari peron mein nahi hamarey dil main hai...(he hugs her)...aaj aap bilkaul aasmaan ki pari lag rahi hain...(she smiles and he kisses her forehead)

Manyata goes to Giriraj who standing right next to Brijraj and was looking at her proudly and takes his blessing...

Giriraj: (he blesses her and says while looking at her) hamein yaqeen nahi hota...ke yahi wahi choti si pari hai jis ke saath hum ne Uday ka roka kiya tha...aaj aap bilkul hamari mahrani jaisi lag rahi hain...Vasundra yahan hoti toh bohat khush hoti...(he kisses her forehead)...hamesha khush rahiye beta...

On the other side Jaggadh and Jay were having a conversation...

Jay (to Jaggadh): (while looking at uday and Manyata)...aaj Manyata aur uday bilkul made for each other couple lag rahey hain...isn't it...???

Jaggadh: haan...jay tum theek keh rahi ho...they really are a match made in heaven...

Jay: jiji aaj kitni beautiful lag rahi hai...she is really lucky...

Jaggadh: woh to hai...btw jay hamein tumse kuch kehna tha...

Jay: haan Jaggadh bolo...

Jaggadh: (moves closer and whispers in her ears)...hamarey liye iss duniya ki sab se sundar larki tum ho...I love you jay...(he kisses her on the cheek)

Jay: (blushes)...I love you too Jaggadh...i'm really lucky to have you...

Jaggadh: nahi jay lucky toh hum hain...jo humein tum se pyaar hua...ab jaldi se hamari dulhan ban kar hamarey ghar aajoa...kyunke...

Jay: woah...jaggadh hamein nahi pata tha ke tum bhi itne...you know...

jaggadh: ab tumhe dekh kar toh koi bhi besabar ho jaye...(he winks)

It was time for the ring ceremony...everyone gathered around Jay and Jaggadh...Jay looked really happy and was really enjoying the spot light...on the other hand Jaggadh was the one who was blushing and all quiet...

Manyata: kya baat hai Jaggadh aaj toh aap bohat blush kar rahe hain...

Jay: haina...bilkul waisey hi jaise Manyata Jiji apni engagement main sharma rahi thi...(everyone starts laughing)

Manyata: Jay aaj bhi...tum kabhi nahi sudhro gi...

Komal: chaliye Jay beta ab ring pehnane ka time hogaya hai...

Dadisahib: komal sahi keh rahi hai...rasam shuru karte hain...

Jaggadh's mom takes out the ring and hands it over to Jaggadh and he puts it on jay...

Jay (to Jaggadh): (she looks at the ring and says)...not bad Jaggadh...hamein nahi pata tha ke tumhari choice itni achi hai...

Vijay: Come on jay bhai...choice acchi hai jabhi toh uss ne tumhe choose kiya...

Jay: I TELL YOU...

Manyata (to Vijay): Vijay bhai...please ajj aik din ke liye aap apne comments kisi ke saath share mat kijiye ga...mein promise karti hoon aaj raat ko aapke saarey faltu comments sunoongi...okay...par abhi nahi...

Vijay: oh how sweet of you...toh phir theek hai...aaj party ke baad...bohat maza aayega tumhara dimaag khaney mein...

Komal (to Jay): beta ab aapki baari

Komal (to Manyata): beta ring dijiye ga...

Manyata: jee maa...(she hands over the ring)...yeh lijiye ...

Jay puts the ring into Jaggadh's finger...and then offers her hand to Jaggadh who looks confused and he had no clue what Jay wanted...

Jaggadh: (stares at her blankly in confusion...)

Jay: what...humara haath kiss nahi karo gey...???

Jaggadh: oh...(starts blushing and takes Jay's hand and kisses it)

Uday (to Manyata): (whispers to her)...bechara Jaggadh pata nahi kaisey jhaile ga Jay ko...

Manyata (to Uday): bechari main...pata nahi kaisey jhailon gi tumhe...(she winks at him and tries to walk away)

Uday: (pulls her back and holds her from waist)...accha...bataoon kaisey...

Manyata: choro Uday...sab hain yahan pe...

Uday: toh kya hua...hum kisi se nahi darte...

A voice from behind...calls Uday's name...

Giriraj: Uday beta...everything okay...???

Uday quickly backs off and looks embarrassed...Manyata looks the same...

Uday: yes dad...

Giriraj (to manyata): Manyata beta...uday aapko pareshaan kar kaha tha kya...toh aap hamein batayiye...

Manyata: nahi uncle Giri kuch khaass nahi...

Giriraj: phir uncle Giri...bachey kitni baar hum ne aap se kaha hai ke Uncle Giri nahi Dad...Dad bulayiye hamein...okay...

Manyata: jee Dad...hum yaad rakhien gey...

Giriraj: ab bas aik hafte main aap hamarey ghar aane wali hain...tab tak agar yeh Uday aap ko zaraa bhi pareshaan kare toh humse kahiye ga...

Uday: come on Dad...hum Manyata ko bilkul bhi tang nahi karte hain...aap manyata se hi pooch lijiye...batao manyata...???

Manyata: (silence...no answer just a smile)

Uday: princess tum bhi...

Giriraj (to Manyata): beta uday ko hum theek kar dingey...(she taps her cheek and leaves)

Manyata: thanks dad... (She looks at Uday and smiles teasingly)

Uday: I'll get back at you...

The party ended...all the guests were left...only Uday's family was there...dadisahib deided to have a conversation with everyone...

Dadisahib: chaliye accha hua sab kuch acche se hogaya...waisa jaisa Jay chahti thein...

Jay: jee dadisahib...thank you so much for everything...

Brijraj: Maa sahib ab hamein Uday aur Manyata ki shaadi ki preparations shuru karni chahiye...

Giriaj: brijraj theek keh rahe hain...shaadi mein sirf aik hafta reh gaya hai...

Komal: aur shaadi se pehle ki rasamein woh bhi toh hain...haldi, mehndi, sangeet and all...

Dadisahib: aap theek keh rahi hain...kafi saarey functions hongey...aur waqt bohat kam hai...

Mainka: maa sahib sab kuch organize karne mein kafi waqt jaye ga...

Dadisahib: issi liye...humein abhi se hi sab ready karna hoga...hum ne decide kya hai ke ajj se do din baad haldi aur mehndi, phir sangeet aur aaj se che (6) dinoo mein shaadi...aap sab kya kehte hain...???

Komal: hamein bhi lagta hai ke yahi sahi rahe ga...

Giriraj: hum bhi maashaib se sehmat hain...

Brijraj: (goes to Manyata) hum yaqeen nahi hota ke hamari choti si gudiya ab hamara ghar chor kar chali jayegi...(tears in his eyes)...

Manyata: (getting emotional)...Baba...aisa mat bolo...(she hugs him)...

Brijraj: aapke baba aapko bohat yaad kareingey...

Manyata: (starts crying)...baba...main aapko chor ke nahi jaongi...

Dadisahib: nahi beta aisa nahi kehte...aur kya brijraj bacchon ki tarah ro rahe hain aap...

Komal: rola diya na bacchi ko...

Giriraj: Manyata...beta hum bhi toh aapke baba hi hain...hum aap se vaada karte hain ke hum aapko itna pyaar deingey ke aapko apne baba ki yaad nahi aayegi...aur phir Uday bhi toh hai...woh aapka bohat khayal rakhein gey...

Uday: come on Manyata...you are a drama queen...abhi toh kuch der pehle khushi se jump laga rahi thi...(everyone starts laughing)...

Manyata: chup...jhoota kahin ka...(to brijraj)...dekho baba yeh har waqt aisey hi tang karta hai...

Brijraj: really...par jump lagate hue toh hum ne bhi aapko dekha tha...(teasingly)

Manyata: BABAAA...(complaining)...aap bhi...jayiye main aap sab se gussa hoon...

Giriraj: bas kijiye...ab hamari beti ko koi nahi chediga...

Uday (to Manyata): not bad princess...abhi tak toh hamarey mahal aayi bhi nahi ho aur abhi se hi tum ne hamarey dad par kabza karliya...not fair...

Vijay: Uday sweetheart...ahi toh jiji tum se kya kya cheeney gi tumhe khud bhi nahi pata...pehle tumharey dad, phir tumhara room, tumhara baath room, tumhara chain aur sakoon aur pata nahi kya kya...you know hamein tumharey liye bohat bura lagta hai...

Mainka: bas karo Vijay...Uday ko darra band karo okay...aur waisey bhi usse chinne ki kya zarroorat hai yeh sab ussi ka toh hai...

Jay: you are right bua...I mean hamien toh Jaggadh ke liye bohat bura lagta hai...pata nahi usse kya kya sacrifice karna padega...poor babyyy...

Vijay: you are so evil Jay bhai...

Manyata: I TELL YOU...Vijay bhai...(she winks at Vijay bhai)

Dadisahib: chaliye toh phir it's decided...do din baad Manyata aur Uday ki haldi ki rasm hai...

Everyone agrees and take their leave for the day...

But Manyata stops Uday and takes him outside as she wanted to tell him something...

Uday: kya hua princess...akelay main n all...kya baat hai badi romantic ho rahi ho...(with a flirty smile)

Manyata: romance meri jooti...kabhi romance ke aagey bhi soch liya karo...veday...

Uday: kya karein princess...tum ho hi itni HOT...romance ke ilawa aur koch yaad hi nahi rehta...(he starts moving closer)

Manyata:(she pushes him back)... HOT...tumhe toh mein apni hotness shaadi ke baad dikhati hoon...

Uday: hayyeee...princess ab agar tum aisey bolo gi toh hum se control kaisey hoga...

Manyata: chiii...tum nahi sudhro gey...accha hum yeh kehne aaye the ke...(she gets on her toes and kisses him and says...)...byeee...

Uday: (looking confused)...kya...???

Manyata: kya...kya...byee kehna tha...kyun ke ab se shaadi tak mein thori na tumse miloon gi...haan nahi toh...

Uday: Oye miss haan nahi toh...kisne kaha tum hum se nahi milo gi...

Manyata: main ne...shaadi ke pehle nahi milte na iss liye...samjhey merey jhalley...(she pulls his cheek)

Uday: jee nahi...hum nahi nsamjhey meri jhalli...(he pulls her cheek also)

Manyata: uday main serious hoon...

Uday: hum bhi Manyata...jab tumharey ghar wale inn chizon ko nahi maante hain toh phir tum kyun...

Manyata: bas aisey hi...pata hai mujhey na tumhe tarpaney main bara hi maza aata hai...

Uday: oohhh...theek hai...ab tum bhi dikhna hum tumse kaisey nahi miltey...bach ke rehna princess...kuch bhi hosakta hai...(in her ear)

Manyata: haan haan...theek hai...dekh lein gey par ab tum jao...theek hai goodnight...

Uday: hamari kiss...???

Manyata: di toh...???

Uday: real wali kiss sweetheart...(with a flirty smile)

Manyata: ab yeh real wali kiss kya hoti hai...(uday tries to say something but she cuts him off)...haan haan pata hai...par uday abhi nahi koi dekh lega...

Uday: (pulls her close)...koi nahi dekhey ga meri jaan...

He wraps around her bare waste...which makes Manyata a little uncomfortable...

Manyata: (whispers) Uday kya kar rahey ho...???

Uday: pyaar...sweetheart...(in her ear)

Bends down and kisses her on the neck which makes Manyata's heart beat faster and gives her chills and she closes her eyes...

Manyata: (whispers under her breath) please Uday jaaney do...

Uday: aahaann...pehle kiss...

he traces her neckline with his lips and follow his way up to her chin...and his lips were touching hers...Manyata was freezing in that saari her teeth were tittering and Uday started kissing her...their lips were intertwined...they were both lost in each other...Manyata was breathing really fast...the kiss was still going on...Manyata wasn't willing to give up...kiss continued until Uday's phone rang...

Uday took out his phone and pressed ignore...Manyata was blushing red she tried to avoid looking him in the eyes and he understood that...he smiled at her actions and said..

Uday: good night princess... (He leaves)

Manyata calls him name from behind and blows a flying kiss...and he catches it with his hand, smiles and leaves...

Two days went by really fast in preparations and all...today was the day of haldi...DS decided that Uday and Manyata are going to have a combined haldi...but as per Manyata's wish there would be a devider between the two of them so that he would not be able to see her...

Manyata was in her room...she was busy deciding what to wear...she all of a sudden started to feel dizzy...her head was spinning...she sat on the side of her bed and was holding her head when Jay came inside...

Jay: Manyata jij...kya hua...you okay...???

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 15...I really hoped that you guys liked it... Please do comment and hit the like button...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

PS: thank you so much guys for so much love and appreciation...i am glad you guys liked it soo much...thanks once again...love you all...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoa! The wait was so worthwhile :) I am now really worried about Manyata but why to fear when Uday is here :P loved the long update! More!!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dis z beautiful, not only manyata ,even i was jumping here and dere,,,,,,,,,,,,, jiska intezzar kya woh aaj b nhi ,haye meri kismat:(;>;(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Dis z beautiful, not only manyata ,even i was jumping here and dere,,,,,,,,,,,,, jiska intezzar kya woh aaj b nhi ,haye meri kismat:(;>;(

Awww anny ur soo cute..it will happen in coming parts...😆..u look too eager..lmao...just love you girl..😊
Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nutts

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plz continue

thanks will surely cont 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooo good!!! Love it cannot wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm. Loved it. Awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update keep it up!

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