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Rashmi

@_Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nizza,i luved it.the lined suited VB vry well

waiting fr J😆

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Malvika R B

@MalvikaRB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

You have lots of patience to think & type so much for DEK fans! Liked the intense romantic lines of Udayveer.. Could literally imagine him saying those things to Manyata.. Some of the lines are heart touching.. Felt like reading them again & again.. For eg, something like this.. "Aankh bandh karke bhi tum hii tum dikhti ho.. Aankh kholke bhi tum hii saamne khadi chikhti ho" That was sweet :) Other shaayaris on Akash were funny & creative :D Thank you

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lojain

@LifeOfTheParty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: lakshyasss
Yes I'll definitely write in English for u'.😳

thanx sweetheart means loads for me 😳

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Malvika R B

@MalvikaRB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Good work :) Thank you for the effort u took to write.. Waiting for J's turn.. Answers of paheli: 1) Akash (LOL for the description.. It was superb) 2) Jaynandini Am I right?