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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Count me in! I wanna read our ideas based on Manveer.. Just read first part. It made me have tears after learning the pain of Jainadani.

Please continue soon

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago

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S.B.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Hmm.. that was good..

do add me to ur pm list..

take care and continue soon

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Reeha, you are such a fabulous writer👏👏👏👏

Your sense of imagination & empathy is so clear & well expressed, that you can actually make all your readers feel what you want them to feel. I personally always felt sad for J...its the same case as Princes Will & Harry...like they are known as The Heir & The Spare!!! No one at home is shown to care much for J...she was just the substitute princess till Manyata was found, and now is back to the being an 'extra'

Kudos to you for getting out J's anguish so well!

Do PM me when you update this one as well

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Omg Ri! Fab.. I almost cried. And coming to a guy for J, I want someone rich and sophisticated who understands her and is there for her. I initially wanted to start a JM ff, then I thought no 1 will read it and as u know I am horrible when it comes to updating stuff. So i dont think I will start one

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Gauri Sharma

@gauri92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

i've always liked J to an extent...in fact it's manyata and the family that i have disliked because yes, they are pretty cold in their treatment towards J...

you did a brilliant job posting J's perspective here...post more soon please!!!

and add me to the PM list if u have one. this is one story im definitely following.

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Mehndi

@-Cupcake-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Your idea of a JN FF is amazing...I've never hated J...sure she does get on my nerves sometimes in the show but I just can't hate her...the poor thing is royally ignored by the family, no wonder she feels so lost in her own house...its heart breaking to see her being treated like that...hopefully after Manyata becomes a princess she'll make efforts to bring J closer to the family...

The first part was fabulous...I could feel a lump in my throat reading JN's point of view...she's so lonely 💔...really looking forward to the next part...😳

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

JN has always been one of my favourite characters on this show...And I would love to know more about her through your FF...Btw...it was very well-written👏
Please PM me when you update next....😊

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

nice part...really felt for J...update soon...pm me

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NightStarr

@NightStarr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: reeha...k

THANK YOU! I honestly do think J deserves a little more credit- she's a brat, yes- but even brats have their reasons. And It do think it's unfair how UV was shoved up against her, only to throw her to the curb. It's simply not just. That's not saying what she does is better, but I do understand what's going on a little more when I try to think of things from her perspective.

Your welcome! And yes I totally agree with you I often see and I myself am guilty of doing this but we see all the reasoning and cause of UV's actions but not JN. I wanted to start an FF or a short story but couldn't as I am preparing for a graduate exam😭So i am glad you did it. She is bratty, true but there are many reasons why she is the way she is. As you said it doesn't excuse her being bad it's just nice to know WHY she is bad.

Read the first chapter and ABSOLUTELY LOVED!!!👏 I love that you didn't go far from the original plot or story of UVC but stuck with the same time line and is basically telling it from a different point of view and different focus. I don't know how close the two stories will run but I think that's the great part of a story that's its always different when told from a different point of view. As I am not writing anything right now if you ever need an editor or just a second set of eyes I would be happy to be that person 😊

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

REEHA. OMG THIS IS AMAZING. A JAY-BASED FIC. THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY. DOES THE FACT THAT I AM USING ALL CAPS SHOW YOU THAT BECAUSE IT REALLY SHOULD!!!!

my heart aches for Jay so much. the poor girl, society really does suck like that. with two rishtas falling through for reasons beyond her control, society will look down on her. and they never show that in the show. and her family not really being there for her? that just really sucks. I feel though, that if she had Manyata or Unnati on her side, she'd be able to get through anything. I'm hoping Manyata keeps trying. and Unnati. to see the girl behind the make-up and behind the royal facade. her 'friends' suck. she needs better ones.

cannot wait for more!

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