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Megha

@IndigoBlues

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Somia3
i love it
update more

thanks..glad you like my updates! 😆 now i know one person at least likes them. 😛😆

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it! amazing. love Udayveer!

thanks yaar for reading and commenting regularly! 😳 hoping you find part 3 amazing too. 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

interesting update..the fic is very gripping...too good...please update soon...😊

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

loved it to bits.eagerly waiting for more

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

😳Awesome awesome SS

lovedd it to bits

Pleasee continue SOOON

and thank you for the PM😃

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Peda

@Peda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

WOW!!!!! Really awesome FF. I'm sooo intrigued. Please add me to your pm list. wait for the next installment

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Rumi

@moonstruck

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

very well written as always. I think I read all everything you write and it's always interesting...but loved this part particularly because of that childhood scene where manyata is brave so uday doesn't die...honestly such a sweet concept and that childish love and trust and innocent beliefs have been captured so well. loved it!!!

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

lovely Indigo🤗
the story is actually quite different...cant wait for the next part...thanx for the PM dr...

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

O.M.G!!

This is for two reasons - the childhood remembrance. It was so utterly cute!!! Both didn't want the other to die! Aww! SO SWEET! <3

Second - the preview! "About us"! Dang it! This is really captivating Megz! Just finish it soon!!

Also, please edit it yaar. Arial font is scaring me. I think you typed it on your word processor then copy/pasted it here. But yaar, please for the sake of Feelay Murgi! Edit it! It looks kinda ugly. though it's a strict personal opinion!