FUN E.A -OUT OF CONTROL

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First E.A on this forum don't know if someone already made some sort of this its not totally an EA but something like that not an os too..'..so here I start my bak bak'read slowly Its going to be daam serious so I warn heartpatients to stay out of it 'this is my first effort '.and do imagine it is needed for this'😉.

Narrator 'Time has passed 6 months eversince HE left him '.He The new creator of his life now '.Today where akaash stands oh sorry sits is all due to him'.the chair which places him close to his dead heart is all Due to HE'..He is no one UDAYVEER and his no one akaash'.sigh'.

Scene-Akaash sitting in balcony on his chair looking to the deep blue sky outside the window'.thinking it why it is blue'.why it is not black as his life'.

Narrator- Arrey why it should be black! Andhere mein mangal karna kaa iraada hai kya'...chal continue dreaming'.

Akaash- (Thinking the day when his HEART was taken by him'.Thinking why UDAYVEER betrayed him'.why he left him here in this hospital all ALONE '.Does he remember him'.)

Narrator- Why should HE remember u'..shukar hai musibat talli'.

Wheelchair(Akaash tum niraash kyoon hotey ho MAIN HOON NA'.tummey sambhala hai to sab sambhaal loongii'..)

Narrator- wo to hai'.😆

Akaash- Zindagi badi udaas hai '

Mujhe lagi pyaas hai

Pyaar hota nahin hai baar baar

Mujhe phir se karna hoga UDAYVEER se apney pyaar kaa izhaar

Narrator-Abbey ruk'.itni shayeri karna band kar I understand u '..PAR REPLAY button ON kar aur yaad kar Police thaney mein kya hua tha'.Tuney to Udayveer ko jealous kiya tha uskii honewali kaa naam lekar but he took other meaning and u know end result'.chal waaki teri marzi'

Wheelchair- (Nahin akaash main tummey janey nahin de sakti'.Tum meri dhadkan tum mere hero jo mujhe kabhi nahin kosta'.aisa pehlii baar hua hai kii mujhe 2 saalon ke baad koi aisa mila hai jo mera saath nibhaa sakey'.mere wheels(pheeye) ko itne pyaar se gol gol gumma sakey'.tum mere HERO ho'.itna pyaar aaj tak kisey ne nahin diya'.tumne mujhe nayi zindagii dii hai'.)

Narrator- Bas kar yahan forumwasi teri lovestory sun kar pak jayengey'.Pata nahin akaash mein kya jadoo hai kisi ko nayi bakshata'.

Akaash-(Mujhe usey samajhana hoga ab bhi wo din yaad hai jab main un gorey gorey mukhrey se mila tha '.uske baal reshmi ,uskii ungli meri taraf thi ye bataney ke liye kii main uska hoon'.bas kami thi to mere haan karney kii jo main nahin kar paya kyoonkii mujhe uske pyaar ko parakhna tha(had to make sure HE really loves him)

Narrator- Lagta hai bahut zyaada ho raha hai'.kya karoon ye akaash kisi cheez mein kam nahin job hi karta hai zyaada hii karta hai''.chalo doctor ko bula liya jaye'

(Just Doctor rastogii'comes to give medicine to his only patient-Only is liye as akaash is ALONE BHARRI ON ALL'.)

Doctor to nurse- Iskii tabiyat kaisi hai'.

Nurse slowly winks at akaash and says- MAIN HOON NA'.YE HALAT SE MAJBOOR HAI aur main halaat se'.warna ab tak to'.

At this doctor coufs'.ahem ahem'.

(then she goes to doctor and says)-Doctor aap phikar mat kariye mere hotey huye ye patient ekdum PATIENT HAI'.kyoonkii mujhe patience bahut pasand hai''

Doctor slowly sees her face and her blushing'..and gets angry'.she sees this and hides her feelings'.

Narrator- ahem ahem'.Isme akaash kii koi galti nahin hai aakhir public kaa hero ko bhala kaun mana karega'.

Nurse- Doctor maine patient ko dawai de dii hai'.

Doctor-SHEELA'.tum iska dhyaan rakho main aur patient ko dekh kar aata hoon

Narrator-Han jaa jaa'.Waise bhi tera yahan ab koi role nayi Sheela yahan akele jawan ho jayegii'.till then I call next contestant GLUCOSE'..

SHEELA- (slowly goes close to him smiles and says tum kha to saktey nahin par main tummey khila to sakti hoon')

Akaash (can't speak due to current he received saying in mind-Nahin Udayveer kab tak naraz rahoge mujhse'..aajo'and Tanhayi song starts in backround)

Nurse- DARO MAT main tummey zinda rakhoongii intezaar kiya hai to darna kya'.pyaar kiya hai to maarna kya'

Akaash- (in mind--Dialogues bhi nahin orderwise yaad kar sakti mujhe kya sambhaalegi'Mujh inspiration leti to pata nahin kahan khaddi hoti,')

Narrator- Uff! Khadii hii to hai'.pehle ye bata kaunsi inspiration'.???

Nurse abhi main tummey glucose chaddati hoon'

(She pricks needle in his hand'.and at one in pain says ahhh'..

Akaash(roni surat in mind mujhe dard hua ya nahin wo pata nahin isey ho gaya'kaash usey bhi HOTA mere dard kaa ehsaas'.)

Narrator ' she puts glucose bottle and leaves saying main abhi aati hoon'..

Akaash(nahin mujhe akela chod do'.and song starts in backround ye pyaar kis mod pe le aaya kii dil bole haye yoon pachtaye kya hoga'.'.)

Wheelchair(starts now,'.acha hua SHEELA chali gayi warna mera izhaar kaise poora hota'.han to main kahan thi'.

Narrator ' mujhe kya pata kahan thi'filaal to jahan par khadi ho wahin ho'.

Glucose-Haye jab bhi mujhe tum mil jaatey ho meri zindaggi khil jaati hai'.meri eke k boond sirf tumhare liye'on special discount'.free too'.ek boond liya to life jinga laa laa'..

Narrator-Door se dekha to mickeymouse nazar aa raha tha paas jaakey dekha to chicky kaa pyaar aa raha tha'.chalo song for u Bhag D.K..bose Bhag D.k bose bhaag 'ya aali'.

People reading it do sing it'..

Chicky-Akaash '.huh huh huh(nabaz thamti hui'.saansein phooltii hui'..)

Wheelchair-(nahin song-tum jo aaye meri'zindagii chali gayi'.sapne dekhe the tumharey sapney dekhey the tumhaarey'..sapney ud gaye'..wheel hai sona aur chandii'.meri baat na bani)

Glucose-Ye kya hua 'kaise hua'.

Chicky(slowly removes her rubber bands on buns open them up and smiles up and says)- Dekho A-K-A-A-S-H tumhare pyaar ne mujhe mickey mouse se madhuri dixit bana diya'..bhool jayo jo hua aagey kii socho'.main tum tum main'.hum dono Ek kamre mein band hon aur chaabi kho jaye'

Narrator- Bada filmy ho raha hai par kya karoon dil to bacha hai jii'.par sacha hai jii'

Akaash(looks into the eyes of her sees the intensity of love of passion for him in her eyes..she clearly looked like madhuri dixit'sorry I mean his madhoori dixit'..but he is confused whom to choose Sheela,madhuri or '..

Narrator- Tere liye ye hospital chota hai itni lambi list hai'.

Chicky- Bolo na'.bolo na'.

Narrator-Yaar kaise boley '.thoda sabar rakh arey ye kaun aa raha hai jaibhai'oh sorry ye aayi jai'.😆

Jai asking to nurse-Where is akaash?

Sheela-(in mind Arey ye kya mere wali pe line marne phir aa gayi..isey abhi dekhti hoon)

The nurse other one tells her where Akaash is'.

Narrator-AAO madam aao aap hii kaa intezaar tha'.😳

Jai goes to see his lifesaver Akaash'.ahem ahem'.

Jai-A-K-A-A-S-H'..runs like a Juliet to him but chicky comes in between puts both his hands outward hands open in exercising position'.u understood na'.and says-

Tum kahan jaa rahi ho

Jai-Don't u see main akaash se milne jaa rahi hoon'.

Chicky 'Kyon'???

Jai-Kyoonkii mujhe Manayata kii Udayveer ke saath marriage rokni hai'.dekho chicky hatoo..samne se'leave u fool'and she just sides her off'.

Narrator-Pyaar aur jang mein sab jayez hai😆

Jai to akaash-Akaash tum hii meri aakhri umeed ho'.aagey kyat ha..Vijaybhai aap kahan reh gaye'.

Vijaybhai-AAya jaibhai wo aap apni dialogues car mein bhool gaye the'

Jai-AAgey kya hai'.zara batana'..

Vijaybhai-Arey ye kya jaibhai aap dialogue script kii jagah manayata aur udayveer kii marriage invitation le aaye'

Jai-Arey ye kya keh rahe ho'.aap hii ne to kaha tha kii hindi emotional script pink lifaafey mein hai'.

Vijaybhai-PINK'.matlab sundar pink lifaafa ye to aap unkey shaadi kaa invitation le aaye'

Jai-Ab kya'?

Chicky ,wheelchair,glucose'. thinking till now

Chicky-Nahin iska matlab akaash phir se manayata ke saath nahin main aisa nahin honey doongii'akaash tum mere ho'.zindagi na milegi dubaara.

Wheelchair- nahin iska matlab mere upar ek nayi sawaari'.main aisa nahin hone de sakti'MERA DOST YAHI MERA PYAAR YAHI'.

Glucose-Main abhi baaki hoon'..meri boond boond sirf akaash ke liye bani hai'.

Jai-Akaash chalo mere saath'.humein ye hone se rokna hoga'.and holds one hand'..nazuk sa mulayam haath getting current in her body'.

Jai goes to another world'..uff hot hot'.dreams of him and akaash running in her mind'.then she comes to her present looks at komal akaash's face and stops

Vijaybhai-He too touches other hand of his gets 1000 volt kaa jhatka'.as akaash had received when he was sent here and got sticks to one hand'..starts imagining..ahem ahem'.can't wite more'u keep imagining'.

Sheela-runing'..akaash nahin main abhi jawan hoon'..tum mere ho'..sirf mere'..6 mahiney 6 mahiney mainey tummey pala posa bada kiya

Narrator bas kar MAA mat ban jana

Meanwhile akaash thinking-Main kisey chunno chicky ko'..1.glucose ko ,2.wheelchair ko,3.sheela..4.jai, 5.vijaybhai,6.chicky I mean madhuri'.''..(sunno inke dil kii dhadkan akaash sun sakta hai'he has six sense'..he can listen to them I forgot to mention)'..

Narrator ' zyaada soch mat'..time nahin hai mere paas'

All come back to their senses'.and jai holds one hand of akaash chalo'.chicky other..sheela looks to see he gets his one feet'.vijaybhai sees all taking akaash's organs he takes other feet'.wheelchair seeing all taken feet,legs he takes his back and gets him stick on chair as well as back'..thinking it will also go with akaash as its only love'.glucose bottle sees jai already taking the hand where it is stick it holds him tightly his arm'.to do kaam tamaam'.

Narrator- ab aagey kya hoga ye aap jaanon'.this is my question what do u want to happen next'..??waise I want him to be pulled but all pull him and so..ahem ahem'.😆

Nizza'.

See how serious I can be in anything'..this E.A deicated to my team'.Arya(aryline)..POLO(poulami12)'kiara(tigerlily)..and Mais'.(mais..)we five team'this is surprise for them as well as u all hope u like it don't leave without commentingalso if u want to join this team do pm...me...

NO OFFENCE TO ANYONE

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one
loved the bechara akash u created
varna hes becoming a pain in the neck for my poor UV
waise next mein if u show manveer...then so show some nice romance also na of their 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nizzi! Bacchu! Kya karu mein tera *finking*

Kehkar ghoomti hai Kiara besharam hai aur tujhe dekh!

Awesome!

Sab log akash ko doond rahe hai!

Ek kam kar ek VM maker ko pakad and yeah VM banade just like how cariie used to do!


Yeh nurse toh besharam nikli!

Akash UV ke pyaar mein tadapraha hai!

Manyata and UV ki shaadi!

J,Chikki,Vijay vaah bhai vaah!

Doctor toh sharam se laal haan nai toh!

Over all I love you!

Hum paanch toh awsome hai I tell you!
Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WHAT….I DON'YT UNDESTAND SHORT FORM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelina_angel

nice one

loved the bechara akash u created
varna hes becoming a pain in the neck for my poor UV
waise next mein if u show manveer...then so show some nice romance also na of their 😳

THIS IS AN E.A…I'll take sallah mushwara of my team and see for romance….😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my my...i need to breathe first... seriously Out Of Control...
my cheek muscles and stomach are hurting now from my constant giggling...
now.. its really out of this world...loved it
...
you have done a great job...
Akash was actually in love with Uday

the narration is really funny...
I really don't understand
..whats there in Akash that everybody is behind him...in show M..and here wheelchair,sheila,glucose,chikki,J,VB..
Poor Akash..last me toh beechaare ki halat kaharab kar di sab ne mil kar...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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great job.. thanx for the pm :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks Nizza that was funny now I think I should write an os myself

I was so🤣 as I read this thanks for pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH MY GOD!!!🤣🤣

what did you eat when you were writing this? Kitney peg mari tune? Ekdam fultu phatak, complete madness.
🤣🤣
Yaar Akash ka sex appeal tou UdayVeer se jyada hai! 🤣

I cant believe this!😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityah


Oh my my...i need to breathe first... seriously Out Of Control...
my cheek muscles and stomach are hurting now from my constant giggling...
now.. its really out of this world...loved it
...
you have done a great job...
Akash was actually in love with Uday

the narration is really funny...
I really don't understand
..whats there in Akash that everybody is behind him...in show M..and here wheelchair,sheila,glucose,chikki,J,VB..
Poor Akash..last me toh beechaare ki halat kaharab kar di sab ne mil kar...




hey nizza...i cant stop myself🤣quoted the above reply ...whic is same i want to say...hohohoho...

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