A bit too soon?

I felt that today they progressed the story - but half baked.

It was very unsettling both the events and how they took place (whether you're a Uday or Akash fan).

Family finding out about Akash - and the way they did, the time they did - They hadn't even developed their relationship with Moniya so well. They needed to work on this more. I wanted them to have a bigger impact shock. It would have been interesting. Right now, they don't understand their daughter.

Now they won't trust Moniya not matter what. The story will be less dynamic and one-sided (about getting Uday-Moniya married, controlling Moniya - interesting, but won't be enough to pull audiences).

I didn't expect Uday to reveal Akash infront of the entire family - I thought he loved his ego tooo much for that. I thought that he would see Akash today, but blackmail Moniya/Akash and use it to his advantage.

The laila majnu thing wasn't carried off stonger. I felt sorry for Akash, but Moniya was not compelling.

Jai tasting success - what type. The only thing coming from this is that Moniya will be forced up against Uday. Where does Jai see herself?

Moniya may try to run away from the mansion - and Uday will constantly blackmail her.

what next...

I think:

• The writers still needed to develop the relations with Moniya et family
• Uday - Moniya still needed some confrontations
• Akash needs to be understood carefully
  
• Uday needs to fall in love for real
• Unnati needs to pitch in
  

I think Arya said it the best "This was the end of the first chapter" and I can see why- it was dramatic, left an open ending, and raw. I can see why it had to happen the way it did: Manyata needs to grow with her family and learn- but she can do it only will she is given a chance to change. She is stuck between two realities with Akash: One where she is "Monia" the other where she is "Manyata" She can't be BOTH, and with Akash gone, atleast temporarily, she can start progressing towards the "Manyata".

ur right... i agree..

reeha...k:

I see what you're saying - but I just think they needed to stretch it longer.

Originally posted by: Chitrashi

I disagree Nivi. We've all repeatedly remarked that Aakash was the stumbling block in M's development. He was projecting his insecurities on her and keeping her from developing a normal relationship with her family. He was the one who was dinning constantly in her head that the family was against her and they were caging her. His removal was necessary for M's transformation.

M anyway has been given too much leverage. The family trusted her and she chose to betray them. Let alone a royal family, no self respecting family would accept a man hiding in their daughter's room. Would such an incident be acceptable to Murari? Didn't he lock up Monya and threaten Aakash to stay away from his daughter? So if Aakash could accept the restrictions placed by Muarari, why did he think he got the right to defy the royal family? Why mix-up status and wealth into this issue? His intentions and actions were not those of a self-respecting honorable man and he deserved to be thrown out.

As for the family not developing their relationship, did Monya and Aakash give them the time to understand each other,or get to know each other? Aakash was monopolizing M and poisoning her mind against the family and even teaching her tricks to fool them. So it's not the family's fault that the relationship was not matured.

As for UV exposing the two, UV did not expose, he played the catalyst. It was Monya who did it all to herself. UV would've dealt the same way if he found someone hiding in Unnzie's bedroom or J's bedroom for that matter. Monya might blame UV for now, I see a drifting apart and actual love-hate track between MaanVeer for a few episodes at least. But I would definitely not say that UV doesn't love Manyata. He loves her and has from the first day.

What I see now, is UV wiping away Aakash from Manyata's heart. Like he said, she's not Monya, she's Manyata and its time for the caterpillar to die, so the butterfly cam emerge, and in between comes the cocoon stage where the delicate creature hides from the world.

I agree ..nice post 😃

I feel Uday has feelings for Manyata deeper than he thinks ..he waited for her and avoided committing to anyone.
Family has done a lot too for their lost daughter..they deserve better..

Its high time she realizes her responsibilities..

I think it happened at the right time.

One - Manyata slowly began becoming close to her family and it left them at ease. They kinda became lenient with her. The result? Full of shattering of the trust! At least they realized that for Manyata to become a princess, more than love and some strictness is needed.

Two - Aakash needed a reality check. Which he got today. Ok, at tome points the jail track was uncalled for but...!

Three - Uday was wounded. His pride was destroyed. Whatever he did today, the beating and the throwing Aakash to the jail, it was all controlled by his wounded pride. Manyata wasn't fair with him. Why should he be fair with her?

Regarding ManVeer? Well, they always had a long way to go! The bubbly feelings that Uday felt for Manyata are now gone. Manyata's fantasy of being with Aakash is now burst. Every character in the show is a at a new point now. It's a full on U-turn. The ride has became more interesting. It's just a wait and watch scenario. It'll be fun to watch, not just as a fan but for the general audience as well.

I think in this way Moniya will only start/continue to hate the royal family (DS and Uday) even more than she currently does.

She will be more full of resentment and revenge than love/appreciation.

I think the flaw is more in character development. The timing was a bit snappy.