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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww... I could almost visualize that heartbroken face of Uday 😭 😭 😭 I could kill Manyata for such cruelty.

Anyway, a well written OS, Jot! Brilliant.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
I'm available Uday!😃

Loved your OS, just hope it doesn't happen in the show.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh man! Poor Uday.
I wanna hug him tight & tell him that if not Manyata, all of us will always love him.
Beautifully written :)
For once, i wish this will not happen in the show. But i think it will. Sigh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
nahiii...i feel bad for uday...well written..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
i so hate manyata in this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!! its so sad... but also a nice shot... please do write more.. I loved this one to the core😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...felt very sad 4 uday...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mystery-

Awww... I could almost visualize that heartbroken face of Uday 😭 😭 😭 I could kill Manyata for such cruelty.


Anyway, a well written OS, Jot! Brilliant.


Could you? I tried. haha! Aww, thank you. =]

Originally posted by: Kajpreet

I'm available Uday!😃


Loved your OS, just hope it doesn't happen in the show.😆


haha! yeah, i hope so too. thank you.


aww, thank you.

Originally posted by: prc_fan1

oh man! Poor Uday.

I wanna hug him tight & tell him that if not Manyata, all of us will always love him.
Beautifully written :)
For once, i wish this will not happen in the show. But i think it will. Sigh.


haha, aww! I wanna hug him to. =$ Let's hope not. 😲
Thanks for the comment. <3

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

nahiii...i feel bad for uday...well written..😊


Aww, thank you.

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

i so hate manyata in this


haha, i did too. thanks for commenting.

Originally posted by: munam_13

OMG!! its so sad... but also a nice shot... please do write more.. I loved this one to the core😃


Yeah. But aww, thank you. I will attempt to. =]

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

awesome os...felt very sad 4 uday...


Thank you! =]

I have NO idea what happened with the quotes here. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Come on...bring some positivity at least in OS...as we have no chance got from cvs... 😆

But your writing is too good...i wish i could write like that...Uday's emotions and his thoughts...i enjoyed reading it...Do write more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^haha! the VM inspired me so i just HAD to write this. XD

Aww, i'm glad you liked it. I tried my best. =$ I will definitely try to write a happy OS of these 2. =]

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