ManVeer OS : You look good.

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awww dear it was awsome i can so fee it so cute it was ...i wish yeh scen hota serial main awww it was dran cute

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nusrat

@NusiSg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

i love UR manyatta Poco!!she shd behave n think lyk hw ur presenting her already,,,cant wait to see her feel all those emotions in d soap itsef!!

gr8 writing asusual!!😊

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Aditi

@nancy_zb94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ritika_11
Hope something like your os happens in the show too😍,nice job.. loved it👍🏼

I second that...Awesome...I really, really loved it.👍🏼

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awww...poco this very cuteee

indeed Uday doesn't feel bad about her clothes or hair or how she speaks ...he at moment only admires what she is inside -out
that what i really like the way he admires (not yet love)

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awesome os...lovd the chemistry between manveer...do write more os

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome OS ...love Manveer chemistry and UV supervision for Manyata makeover

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Minz aka Minnie

@*Dakoo_Minzy*

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

that was so sweet and cute poco choco 😃 really enjoyed it...awww simply beautiful 🤗 cud picturise the whole scene 😳

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Le Poco!! It was Le Amazing! It left, Le Me, so Le Happy!!! (too...much..meme..alert...)

But AWW! It's so sweet! I love the way you write out an OS from the events that are currently happening in the show..and they seem so real ke bus, ho hi jane chaiye show mein! Hayyye! Uday! He knows so much about the girls...oh God! Everyone's so convinced on this forum to prove my theory right that Uday is PERFECT in everything that he does. Gosh! He's PERFECT!!!

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Poulomi Das

@_Poulomi_

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

i cud literally picture UV pulling up that zipper!

Oh !!!!...that was so cute!!!

I love ur OS so much!

Looking forward to another Romantic OS soon...

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known as KAI, name is Jasmine

@Kai.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

pinky poco!! i was just waiting for u to post an OS!!!⭐️

OMG!! i just can't stop blushing!!!☺️☺️... just love this UdayVeer!!❤️

it was outstanding and heart warming! many thanks!!😛

my fav part was:

UV( makes an innocent face )-Your arms are not long enough to reach your back so that you can zip it up on your own and I offered to call a staffer but you said no'.( looks at her face )' don't look like a beetroot, Princess. I did nothing. And I have seen better.

Maanyata looks up at him at the last sentence in anger and he winks at her.

UV ( smiles )- See, how easy it is to replace a shameful red with an angry red.

UV( smiles at her and makes her face the mirror again)- Because that girl in the mirror is beautiful. Clothes define what you look like and not who you are. When I saw you after 16 years , I didn't see the rags and the sweeper clothes – I saw this brilliant regal face. Got it?

Maanyata ( looking at her own face from all angles )- I don't look untidy with my hair in my face and this yellow papaya face?

UV( bends down and whispers in her ear)- You look good. You always do.