ManVeer OS: Regret - Page 2

u portrayed each character very well...great work..dearo...kep working like this...i enjoyed it...do pm..me next time too...manveer superb...

this is for u..

nyc os conti soon nd pm plz

Wow.. For a second I thought I was actually watching DEK. The Jeh-Uday scene was so realistic, even Uday's ego nd Manyata's tears. And at last Uday and his deals. Its really good, and very well written. Please do continue it. :)

.SilentPrincess

awesome!

That was beautiful! All the emotion about the sky, bees, breeze, wonderful! Please make into a SS/FF I am curious to know what the plan is. Don't leave us cliff-hanging! 😆 😃

thank u everyoe for ur encouraging comments.

Honestly, i have never in my life considered myself a writer. I am scared of writting long passages or essays and even prescis. 😆
I took a shot at writing this as somebody pointed that i shud try once and another pixie joined her and ganged up on me.
I promsed them that if a crazy dog bit me i wud give it a try...no dont worry, it literally dint happen, must figuritively. After watching last last epi of DEK, i thought i shud pitch in my 2 cents.

It still has many short comings and i have registered it. I know the ManVeer scene was not adequate, it needs some more work.
I am learning...

Coming to this OS.

i know its not complete. i left it there intentionally, witout giving it a proper conclusion. An OS starts from one point and leaves the readers to ponder over its end. So I have no hope to continue it. But i did think of writting another which will have links to this one. However i just cudnt due to work pressure.
I had never imagined people would actually like this OS. I guess i will write anotner one whenever i have time or think of a new plot.


Thank you every one.

Originally posted by: prc_fan1

loved this OS!

You kept it so real. It was as though I was reading a written update of the show. I could totally see the whole OS happening in my head.

Brilliant!! Please write more :)

If this happened for real, I would love for Manyata to fall into Uday's arms, while getting down from the tree. That would be so romantic😍

At first i thought i would make that fallng in arms... But then i thought, thata would be so obvious! Ad Manyata's charater is one who doesnt take help from anyone esp from Uday. She is strong and rebelious, so i decided to make her do stuff herself with an impressed Uday.but yes when i write another i will make it completelyManVeer and no akash!^_^