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I was denying the fact that I was worried about Udayveer and what I did to him was wrong, there was a war going on with my heart and my brain, what Uday claimed to be "Collateral Damage". I was just wondering to myself why I did this and touched my face and to my surprise something was flooding down my eyes like the tsunami "Katarina", I was unable to connect with myself why I was crying, I barely cried in my life, I didn't even cry for Akaash but for Udayveer don't know why I cried. Then I hear jingling charms and cracking heels approaching my way, "Manyata Jiji, hum Uday se milne jaa rahe hain, aur Uday ne kaha hai ke aap ko bhi lekar hum aaye" I was very happy at the bottom of my heart but I couldn't digest my food without abusing "Jayghamandini" "Mein nahi aane waali uss khasma nu khane se milne, haan nahi toh" I thought she would ask again but it seemed as if it was just a formality to ask me, she said "Ok, Jiji hum jaa rahein hai, aap ko aana ho toh aa jaaye ga" I said "Ruk Jaynandini, mujhe waise bhi Unnati se milna hai, mujhe uss makkad se milne mein koi dilchaspi nahi hai samjhi" She said "Okay as you wish "Jiji" . We walked to the car, as we got there I was wondering how "Mr, Pohonchi Huyi Cheese" will be? We got there! I desperately ran out of the car wearing the heels "Maata Ji " told me to, but the heels cracked because I was applying too much force to the heels. Someone's manly grip caught me but I closed my eyes, he said "It's okay princess!" I opened my eyes immediately it was Udayveer, he looked amazing and elegant as ever wearing a "Notorious Yellow followed by Destroyed Blue Jeans" !


To be continued...😳

Sorry it took me this long to write a OS!⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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no problem please add more love it
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very nice... yeah.. plz continuee.. want to read more 😊
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Please Continue, Your OS was great and a such a good ending with a MANVEER scene.
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do continue it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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REALLLY AWESOME
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Loveddd it plz continue soon and do pm me 😊
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very nice do contine n PM me:)
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awesomee!
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Continue soon 😃
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