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Thanks everyone for liking n comments
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it is really great , please write more.
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wow nice strt i like that manveer r good riends plz do contionu ha
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REALLLY REALLY WELL WRITTEN
loveddd ittt..
Pleasee contiuee soon
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~UPDATE ~ 1/15/12 ~
nxt morning uday n manatya meets at the palace. manatya has a day off n she calls uday over at the palce.both of them take their blessings from dadisaa,brijraj n komal n then leave. as they go outside media is everywhere. jay is looking at manveer from her bedroom window n smiles. uday looks up n realizes that it was jay who called the media he instantly tells manatya to wear her shades n get into the car quickly. both of them sits into the car n there is a silence for few minutes. tears are rolling down manatya's cheeks n uday notices it. he takes a tissue n wipes it off.manatya grabs on uday's arm n lays her head on it n her eyes are closed . uday tells her to take off her shade n manatya slowly takes off her shades with one hand n holding uv with another.she is in the middle off taking her shades off n suddenly uv helps her out n keeps the shades aside on the seat. uv asks manayta what happened but manatya just remains silent for 10 mins. uv keeps his silence n slightly touches her to loosen the grip she has on him but instead she hugs him tighter. uv smiles to himself.uv asks her again but no answer from manatya . tears rolling down her closed eyes. uv gets scared n suddenly he recieves a text it's from manatya.
manatya's text - can we talk in private?
uv tells her sure.
manatya finally speaks up.
manatya- driver stop the car n u r off for the day.
driver- yes mam.
driver stops the car n leaves. manatya wipes her tears n uv offers her a tissue. she fixes her hair n takes a mirror out of her bag to check her make-up. uv just looks at her for her to speak.
uv- tell me what happened?
mantya- another panga with bf again.
uv- wow u r mad kyunki u always talk in ur bindass tone whenever u r mad.
manatya- yeah i am mad at him. he is always crying about me not giving him enough time and about my family.( she starts to get loud with anger)
uv holds her hand n calms her down.
uv- princess dekho ab akash is like that a bit possesive n a bit shy. he never tried to know ur family since we r the royals so he is shy. lekin he is kinda scared of me.
manatya- scared of u for what?
uv- aree i am soo hot naa he is scared that i will steal u.(laughs)
mantya- come on uday(smiles)
uv- see i brought a smile on ur face n keep smiling like this.
manatya- u r my only true friend so i can't really hide anything from u.
both mantya n uday have this eye lock for few mins n right then she recieves txt message from akash.
manatya- nooo... i am not in the mood.
uv- ok lets ignore him for today since he stressed u out.
mantya- i feel bad but i need this break from everyday fights.
uv- just tell him u r taking a break.
mantya- akash will get more mad.
uv- don't worry trust me.
manatya sends him a text n akash doesn't reply back. uv (thinking) i know princess i gave u the wrong advice but u need a break form that akash. he is stressing u out n making you sad n u know i cannot see u like this because i love u. idk if u are going to love me or not but i am happy that i am ur bff. sorry princess once again)

manatya snaps at him couple of times n finally uday responds. manatya n uday plans to go on beach to spend their whole day there having fun n relax.manveer have a serious talk on their relationship from being the wrost enemies to best friends. both of them walking on beach barefoot.(ishq sufiana plays in the background) both of them making sand castles. manatya tries to make it but keeps failing to do so.uv helps her n finally they make one together. next they eat gola at a stall manatya gets a red one n uday gets a blue one. manatya gola falls on the sand n she gets upset. uday gives her his gola n she gets happy. 😳 manveer takes pictures making funny to cute poses. manatya runs near the water n splashes water at uday n uday does the same in return. both of them a water fight..uday wins at the end. he tells her to change but manatya refuses n starts writting uday n manatya friends 4ever on the sand n it gets erased by the wwater everytime she finishes. uday tells her that he will take a picture so both of the keep it as a memory.manatya agrees n uday takes the pic with manatya sitting next to the writting. he takes another one quickly with manveer together next to the writting. the day ends with manveer watching th sunset together. manatya has a smile on her face as she is watching the sunset n uday just stares at manatya with love in his eyes. manatya looks at him n asks him why is he looking at her like that. uday replies she has never looked soo happy till date n he takes a pic of her quickly. the pic comes out funny n manatya gets angry in a funny way. manatya chases uday n uday gives in. manatya hugs him tightly n thanks him(uday is suprised but he hugs her back. they hug for 2 mins n the song ends.uday lets her go n manatya feels akward n doesn't speak for few minutes. uday breaks the silence by talking first.

uday so u enjoyed today?
manatya- yup it was soo much fun today.everyday sould be like this.
uday- don't worry i am here naa
manatya- yeah but akash has this crazy mood swings when he hears ur name.
uday- it's natural princess he is ur bf so he will be a bit jealous of ur bff
manatya- i agree but he doesn't trust me no matter what i say?
uday- then you guys should have a talk on ur relationship.
manatya- tried a couple of time but it ends up as a huge fight. kya karo?
uday- hopnestly princess idk i have never been into a serious relationship. sorry.
manatya- it's k uv atleast u tried.
uday- just remember i am always here for u.
manatya- i know n thanks.you knowsometimes i wish my life was like this everyday...
uday- u have said that before.
manatya- uv let me finish naa
uday- k sorry princess.
manatya- akash is nice but he is not the same guy i knew before. i am really struggling in this relationship n idk how to introduce akash to the family when i am having problems with him. when i am not sure of the future of this relationship then how can i go up to my family n tell them that i want to marry akash. evryday fights are taking a lot out of me. i have other things to work on n dadisaa has lots of expectations. they don't even know i am seeing him so this is soo complicated.
uday- don't worry everything will work out or i will make sure it does.
manatya- it becomes hard when the eprson u r fighting for turns against u.
uday- look princess akash doesn't know what he has i mean you always value someone when u lose them. i hope akash doesn't make the same mistake.
manatya- don't scare me.
uday- aree i am just telling u that akash is a fool in general 😆
manatya- woh toh hain(smiles)😆

manveer share a smile. manayta tells uday she is too tired to walk n uday picks her up in his arms n ask her if she feels better. manatya tells uday she feels like she is on the 7th cloud in his arms. uday teases her by spinning her around in a circle few times. manveer share laughters as uday is walking. akash is shown looking at them from far n gets more jealous. manveer unknown of the fact keeps on walking.

Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Love it! I can't wait for the day Udhay and Moniya/Manyata become friends! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haye that was so cute

Please continue soon😃

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This story has a modest beginning. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Can you please PM me??
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thanks guys. i was going to pm everyone last night but my internet stopped working.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago

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