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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey :)

usually people write something and than name it

I on the other hand had no plan to write anything until

one day randomly I though of a title called "flowers for my lady"

it was than when I decided to write something on it

this is kinda cheesy but I hope you come to like it

you can ignore the blue parts if you like



Flowers for my Lady


She sent me of to buy flowers for her

flowers for our paradise

that would scent the rooms with its presents

brighten the corners with its colours

that would bring about a smile on its first sight


I seek flowers for my lady

nothing of the ordinary

Time thins

Drawn nears


I return with the perfect flower

she looks at my empty hands

dazzled by my smile


"where are my flowers"

she questions

I hold on to her hand

lead her to the drawer

where I place her on a chair

and go down on my knees


it was difficult to buy flowers for you my love

so difficult that it almost felt like a fruitless task

I wondered in the garden of flowers

in search for the perfect flower


On the sight of every flower

the thought of you would enter

a smile would appear

than disappear

they would suddenly seem so plain

something felt missing

in every flower I wished to pick


she leaned over, held my face into her hands and spoke

"my love I don't wish nor do i ask for the perfect flowers

just flowers that would

scent the rooms with its presents - "

I took her hands and held them in my own


I know and it was than I realized

I was in search for something i had all along

a flower that would do just

to you and our paradise


he turned her around to face the mirror

look my love the perfect flower appears before you

caressing her hair

you carry the scent of fresh water lilies with you

every room you enter fills with your scent

on every sight

on every thought of you

my face lights to a smile


your rosy pink lips
he moved his fingers down and touched them

that I craved to touch from the moment I saw you

when you smile

the room ignites


she lowed her graze giving a smile

and when you blush my dear

red roses bloom and dance

as they paint the walls with our love


lifting her chin up making her eyes meet his

How am I to buy flowers for my lady

when I have the perfect flower in front of me


If I were to bring flowers

they would dry and die

in envy of you

they would curse and oath they're creator


for you my lady are the perfect flower

You brighten every corner of my heart

with your presents


Hope you liked it

comments are welcome

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is really beautifull
Omg loved it to the damn core.
You really wrote beautifully
Really this was mind-blowing excellent
Plz do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was simply beautiful. Very poetic... I could visualize the entire thing... It suited Uday-Manyata perfectly. Beautifully written and presented. You have to write more. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal

This is really beautifullOmg loved it to the damn core.
You really wrote beautifully
Really this was mind-blowing excellent
Plz do write more


omgosh 😊
thanks so much for liking it
like i know its outta character and everything
but maybe one day...lol😆
thanks :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

That was simply beautiful. Very poetic... I could visualize the entire thing... It suited Uday-Manyata perfectly. Beautifully written and presented. You have to write more. :)


hey thanks 😊
i was trying to do the same
Visualize this scene as it happens and you being able to visualize it
is like yaaay good on me 😆
Edited by _SuMmEr_LoVe_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg!!! that was sooo good!
it was so different, not exactly a poem but
i loved how u used the similar format! <3
its just so... awww... cute!! hehe
keep it up sweets!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was sooo sooo good - honestly the flow was so poetic and beautiful & when i wanted to chose one particular line to praise ... there were just too many to chose from. great job, & hope to read more soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

Omg!!! that was sooo good!
it was so different, not exactly a poem but
i loved how u used the similar format! <3
its just so... awww... cute!! hehe
keep it up sweets!


hey thanks so much 😊
yap its not exactly a poem but almost close to it
i thought this format suited it better

Edited by _SuMmEr_LoVe_ - 13 years ago
_SuMmEr_LoVe_ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks so much 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: moksha89

this was sooo sooo good - honestly the flow was so poetic and beautiful & when i wanted to chose one particular line to praise ... there were just too many to chose from. great job, & hope to read more soon 😊


hey 😃
thanks so much for such a wonderful comment glad you like it this much
really appreciate it will try to write more 😊

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