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DEKfan2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

SUPER DUPER LIKE!

The line of the episode for me was: Oh, how the mighty had fallen...so hopelessly in love.

Amazing. I think this was one of the best parts so far! Well done and I really hope to see more of your work soon...

All the best with your studying.

😊

Jay

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

oh this update was amazing. unfortuntaley I can't give you an indepth comment today - I am way too sleepy. I may come back and edit this, I may not.

[but I absolutely love that you have manyata realising jai's loneliness and pain, and empathising. jai doesn't need sympathy, she needs empathy. and I also love that manyata is still a little bit of moniya - she's all princess, but with the same undercurrent of steel and stubbornness. the end, the 'oh meri' is probably the best thing ever - all I could think of was that uday took it the complete other way vijay intended, uday's thinking yes, she is mine. *squee*]

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Sumanpreet Ojla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

Amazing update Reeha👏...i totally loved it...missed your UVC so much the past couple of weeks...feel sad for the younger Uday...he got his favorite shirt taken away just because he is a prince😭...guess being a prince does have some real downsides to them...well cant wait for monday's update😃...and thanks for the pm🤗

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Preet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

I was so excited I opened the update and finished what I was doing so I could come back and read it. 6 people read it in that time and liked it. 😛

Reeha this update was worth the wait! I'm so glad we got to see UV has a child again. Those are some of my favorite updates. I'm really looking froward to more updates like those! 😊

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salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Reeehaaa..

I LOVEED IT

Loveeed uday's flirting

I blushed throughout!

Awesomeee.

cant wait for the next part!!

Thank you for the PM

😳😳😃

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SRJKiShraddha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Thanks 4 the pm dear:-) had missed 3 chapter, but i read them nw.
As usual they were briliant

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

awesome update reeha..i'am very happy that you have updated...i like the growing relationship between uday & manyata..though being a prince & princess, they both are bound by restrictions but at least they true & open to each other..i like this fact very much...uday's flashback was so very sweet..the young prince, had it in him from that time itself to be a good king..ahhh..good.. manyata is concerned about J..nice..& what uday said in the end was too good. he made it clear that clothes, brands never make a person...but a person's heart makes them who they are & who they want to be...keep up the good work going..really very nice...loved the update..the budding & growing relationship between uday & manyata is simply wonderful..please do update soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago