PRINCESS DIARY- MY FIRST FF chapter 11 on page 26 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow
Amazing update
Loved it
u write so brilliantly and nicely
Thnx for the pm
And plz do pm me wen you update k thnx again
Loved every bits of it
Especially uday seeing her and omg u have my favourite car Buggati veyron love ittt
Hopin tht he gives me a lift lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hubze

Hey dude awesome 👍🏼... And dude thankz for the PM...

thanks dear i m not that gud but u ppl really encourage me:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal

Wow
Amazing update
Loved it
u write so brilliantly and nicely
Thnx for the pm
And plz do pm me wen you update k thnx again
Loved every bits of it
Especially uday seeing her and omg u have my favourite car Buggati veyron love ittt
Hopin tht he gives me a lift lol

thanks dear and i also want to go wid him for long drive! And plz u also pm me when u will update ur ss i luved it:-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what a cute update! keep writing!
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

what a cute update! keep writing!

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 3-

Udaymahal 9 am .

uday was sitting near the window lost in memory of mystery girl .He failed to understand why he could not forget that incident and move on, why he desired to meet her again. Why His heart has begin to overpower his mind. " come on uday , kuch nahi hua hai tumhe. U just want to teach her a lesson and that is why u want to meet her" he mumbled to himself.

U: kya dada khud se baatein karna aapne kabse shuru kiya.

Uv: hey sis aap kab andar aagayein.

U: dada hum to door knock karte karte thak gaye par aapne koi jawab nahi diya. Andar aaye to dekha aap kise ke khayalo mein khoye huae thae. Phir akele apne aap se baatein karne lag gaye, infact main jab se wapis lauti hoon maine aap mein aur bhi dangerous symptoms dekhe hai '.. pyaar ke. She winked at her brother.

Uv: oh darling u know naa I don't believe in love .

U: I don't know bro par iss bar your eyes are saying different from your lips. Anyways main toh sirf aap ke liye ye painting lekar aaye thi, dekhkar bata dijiye kaise banaaye hai.

Uday exclaimed in surprise as he opened the painting wrapped in gift paper " Jhansi ke rani , wow'

U: haan aapke life partner ke criteria sirf jhaansi ki rani mein hai

Uv: waise hum unse mil chuke hai. He smiled to his sister.

U: kisse se hone waali life partners se ?

Uv: nahi Jhansi ki rani se. u: dada aap bhi na .. and both of them laughed together.

Same day at 5pm in manyata'S room

Dear diary,

Maine baba ko diya hua promise pehli baar toda hai, par mere paas aur koi option nahi hai. Sabse pehle mujhe yeh nahi samajah aaraha ki baba ko meri new college se kya problem hai ,uss din khush hone ke bajaye gussa hogaye . kehne lage ki yeh college chod do . Magar accha hua Akash ne unhe explain kiya ki mujhe isse badi opportunity nahi milenge . Baba ne mujhe sirf ek condition pe college jane ke liye permission diya hai ki wahan main sirf study karongi aur kisse aur activity mein participate nahi karongi. Lekin meri seniors ne mere naam solo singing competition mein dalwa -diya , aur mujhe singing ka itna shauk hai ke main mana nahi kar paaye. I hope baba ko yeh baat pata na lage warna unhe bahut bura lage ga. In dino baba waise bhi disturbed rehtae hai. Kal subhha jaldi college jana hoga competition ki preparation karni hai aur other events mein bhi senior ko help karni hai. Good night diary.

Next day , 7 am

Manyata was walking silently towards her college. She was wearing her favorite green color salwar-kameez with light embroidery work and matching pearl earring. .She had left her curly bouncy hair open with side partition. she tried to walk fast as she was alone on the road but her high heel sandals restricted her speed.

M: chikki bhi pata nahi kaise kaise sandal pehanthi hai , mujse toh chala bhi nahi jaa raha. She saw a bike coming from behind and she waved to that person asking for lift. Biker stopped his bike near her. She could only see his eyes through his helmet. She presumed him to be one of the guy from her own college.

M: thank god agar aap nahi hote toh shyaad main college shyam ko hi pahunch jaati she said to him as she climbed to sit on his bike. Through out the journey there was no single min when manyata's mouth was shut and biker was did not utter a single word. When they reached near college manyata got down from bike.

M: thanks for the lift and she was about to go inside. But that biker called to her " excuse me , itne baatein bataaye lekin naam batana tum bhul gayi"

M: oh sorry mera naam manyata hai , mere frns mujhe pyaar se muniya kehte hai. Biker removed his helmet and she was shocked to see him. He was the same guy whom she had met that day, he smirked when she change her expression of Barbie doll to angry bird.

Uv: oh kya kaha chuhiya , u mean rat. Mujhe toh laga tha tum billi ho.

M: tum mere picha kare rahe ho halkat.

Uv: nahi toh mujhse .kabhi ladki lift maangti hai toh main mana nahi karta. .log mujhe pyaar se waise halkat, kutta, kamina, suwar , veda etc etc bulaatein hai. Waise kuch log humein uday bhi kehte , par tum kuch bhi bula sakte hoon, pyaar se pukaar hua har naam mujhe accha lagata hai.

M:pyaar se toh main tumhe jootha bhi na maroon, haan nahi toh.

Uv: kyun itna pyaar aaraha hai mujhe pe ki apne haatho se maronge, wow.

M: tumse baat karna fizool hai, I m going inside apne sadi hui tricks kisse aur ladki pe use karna and She started walking away.

Uv: miss bandukwali next time milunga toh mujhe maarne ka kaunsa plan hai, banduk toh use kar liye ab kya toph use karogi. manyata turned in anger to look at him,she said loudly " mere haath kaafi hai"

Uv: hum bhi marne ke liye tayyar hai.

Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Awsome!!! As usual! I loved it !!!
"mer haath hi kaafi hai"

"Toh hum bhi marne ke liye tayaar!" 😳


I couldnot fix my soundcard :p
Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome part...loved their second meeting...update soon...thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Shradha,this is so good.I loved the chuhiya and bandookwaali comments made by Uday.loved the bike ride.very clever of you to use some of the show's dialogues and they felt so natural here.loved it a lot.ab third meeting ka intezaar hai😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
its awesome...the last dialogue was the best...continue soon...

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