I Won't Fall In Love With You...*Manveer FF* Pg 60

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

hey mahak...😊.

awesome part..👏...but i hate u 4 stopping at the wrong time..😡...i so wanted to see the shock on uday's face knowing that his own wife rejected him..😆..feeling so sad 4 uday..😔...and again such a small part.😭...anyways loved how u showed third persons view to show the romantic part..😳...better update soon..😉...thanx 4 the pm anchal...🤗.

with love

angel...❤️

p.s - nice siggie...👍🏼

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Binita

@...Binny...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Mahak.. beautifully written.. Loved it especially the romance it truly was electrical..looking forward to the next part update soon..😛

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@shrarrti

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

That was sweet and hot! Way to go Mahak!

Edited by shrarrti - 13 years ago

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crazysandhir

@crazysandhir

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

superbbb👏 do pm me whenever u update plzzz .

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Troll Master Gogo!

@S.H.I.E.L.D.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Could not leave a message for the first chapter due to exams. But free now, so just want to say it was a great chapter. The second one was just as brilliant - and so freaking charged! Phew. Hotness emanating from my laptop screen 😆.

Anyways, great chap! And keep updating!

TC.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

loved it a lot.please do update soon😃

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lamz325

@lamz325

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

wow that was utterly amazing! plz try to update soon! :D

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Amazing. its a great update.

I loved when uday said those words too.

I liked the third person point of view.

Cont soon.

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Manahil192

@Manahil192

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

R u krazzy mahak dat one shrt update made me shiver i cant sleep lol loved it to de core:* nd i noe ryt college nd desire r too diff wrlds ask me a level student barely get tym fr tv buh surely fr ur ff pm soon <3

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Ahhh mannn have mercy plz plz plz update soon this was soo short how cud u do this to me. Well but college is hard so m srry for satin all this. But plz update soon no pressure